Comments received on poems by REBELLIOUS SOUL
Circus in my head
2781 said:
I have seen all the works that are done under the sun; and, Behold, all is vanity and vexation of spirit.
August 22nd, 2025 07:20
2781 said:
I have seen all the works that are done under the sun; and, Behold, all is vanity and vexation of spirit.
August 22nd, 2025 07:20
Where love turns to sighs.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong and haunting piece, my friend. You gave voice to wounds too often hidden, and turned them into poetry that refuses silence. Well done. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong and haunting piece, my friend. You gave voice to wounds too often hidden, and turned them into poetry that refuses silence. Well done. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:07
Where love turns to sighs.
Doggerel Dave said:
If your only outlet is poetry (and well expressed too) then that is better than complete submission. No possibility of escape and independence?
August 20th, 2025 17:25
Doggerel Dave said:
If your only outlet is poetry (and well expressed too) then that is better than complete submission. No possibility of escape and independence?
August 20th, 2025 17:25
Where love turns to sighs.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of keeping all inside. Nicely written with rhyme. Well done
August 20th, 2025 15:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of keeping all inside. Nicely written with rhyme. Well done
August 20th, 2025 15:33
Circus in my head
sorenbarrett said:
Ah but so true life is a circus with all its pleasures and its fleeting nature. It is a diversion and one pays dearly for the entrance fee. Full of the exotic, freaks, acts of admiration, beauty and the unbelievable. Yet as you say the show must go on until the end of the show. A lovely metaphor
August 19th, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
Ah but so true life is a circus with all its pleasures and its fleeting nature. It is a diversion and one pays dearly for the entrance fee. Full of the exotic, freaks, acts of admiration, beauty and the unbelievable. Yet as you say the show must go on until the end of the show. A lovely metaphor
August 19th, 2025 07:22
The Land That Refused to Kneel
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write and tribute to a nation and who have bravely defended it over the years, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 12:28
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write and tribute to a nation and who have bravely defended it over the years, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 12:28
The Land That Refused to Kneel
Soman Ragavan said:
India will not cease to stun us and the world.
August 15th, 2025 11:03
Soman Ragavan said:
India will not cease to stun us and the world.
August 15th, 2025 11:03
The Land That Refused to Kneel
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid poem of patriotism and the format perfect with color. Wonderfully written and a fave
August 15th, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid poem of patriotism and the format perfect with color. Wonderfully written and a fave
August 15th, 2025 10:51
thorns in the living room
Poetic Licence said:
If that is where the abuse is happening it is by far the loneliness place to be. I feel someone has grown up and realized all the things that happened are wrong and should never of happened. Now there strong enough to speak out and challenge that. A write of hurt, sadness, pain and anger, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 15:40
Poetic Licence said:
If that is where the abuse is happening it is by far the loneliness place to be. I feel someone has grown up and realized all the things that happened are wrong and should never of happened. Now there strong enough to speak out and challenge that. A write of hurt, sadness, pain and anger, nicely expressed and written
August 13th, 2025 15:40
thorns in the living room
sorenbarrett said:
This poem strikes at the heart of shattered relationships where love has left and anger has crept in. So well worded a fave
August 13th, 2025 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem strikes at the heart of shattered relationships where love has left and anger has crept in. So well worded a fave
August 13th, 2025 14:14
You taught her to pretend
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and feeling constrained and held back by unjust bars. A scream of rebellion. Well written
July 25th, 2025 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and feeling constrained and held back by unjust bars. A scream of rebellion. Well written
July 25th, 2025 11:36
WHEN I WAS IN MY UNIFORM....
Poetic Licence said:
There are no excuses or justifications for abuse of any kind especially child abuse, I am sorry to hear you experienced this but sadly as I know from experience this happens to thousands of children and has done throughout history. A touching and heartfelt write, nicely expressed and written
July 24th, 2025 13:05
Poetic Licence said:
There are no excuses or justifications for abuse of any kind especially child abuse, I am sorry to hear you experienced this but sadly as I know from experience this happens to thousands of children and has done throughout history. A touching and heartfelt write, nicely expressed and written
July 24th, 2025 13:05
WHEN I WAS IN MY UNIFORM....
sorenbarrett said:
It is sad that some people have no respect and can not control their urges that they were either never trained properly or are mentally incapable. It is tragic that some people have no compassion or sense of decency and that is what I hear in this poem of incidents that never should have occured. Well written and stated.
July 24th, 2025 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
It is sad that some people have no respect and can not control their urges that they were either never trained properly or are mentally incapable. It is tragic that some people have no compassion or sense of decency and that is what I hear in this poem of incidents that never should have occured. Well written and stated.
July 24th, 2025 12:20
WHEN I WAS IN MY UNIFORM....
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, neither did I, nor my niece who\'s been ruined for life since she was 3 or 4 years old. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deadly, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.
July 24th, 2025 12:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, neither did I, nor my niece who\'s been ruined for life since she was 3 or 4 years old. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deadly, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.
July 24th, 2025 12:03
Maybe one day....
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed and written write, like the line about the eyes could lie like the mouth, sadly or not the eyes never lie, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 16:05
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed and written write, like the line about the eyes could lie like the mouth, sadly or not the eyes never lie, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 16:05
Maybe one day....
sorenbarrett said:
Clever well written and touching a combination that mast have a fave.
July 23rd, 2025 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
Clever well written and touching a combination that mast have a fave.
July 23rd, 2025 13:35
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling not understood and worse that others think that they know you better than you know yourself. Shut out is the feeling, controlled by others assumptions and hard headedness believing that they know what is right. A powerful poem in its weakness
July 20th, 2025 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling not understood and worse that others think that they know you better than you know yourself. Shut out is the feeling, controlled by others assumptions and hard headedness believing that they know what is right. A powerful poem in its weakness
July 20th, 2025 12:39
I DON\'T WANT TO SAY GOODBYE
orchidee said:
Erm, hello then, if you\'re not saying goodbye! heehee. Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 20th, 2025 01:23
orchidee said:
Erm, hello then, if you\'re not saying goodbye! heehee. Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 20th, 2025 01:23
I DON\'T WANT TO SAY GOODBYE
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of all the yesterdays. Nicely done as a tribute to the past. A nostalgic poem but we never say goodby just until latter.
July 19th, 2025 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of all the yesterdays. Nicely done as a tribute to the past. A nostalgic poem but we never say goodby just until latter.
July 19th, 2025 10:52
I DON\'T WANT TO SAY GOODBYE
Poetic Licence said:
Special bonds built during childhood especially with siblings, but there comes a time we have to become adults and move in different ways, but I am sure that bond will remain whichever way you go, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 10:11
Poetic Licence said:
Special bonds built during childhood especially with siblings, but there comes a time we have to become adults and move in different ways, but I am sure that bond will remain whichever way you go, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 10:11
WHY DON\'T WE JUST...
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write asking what should be simple questions to answer but are not, to answer them we would all have to brutally honest with ourselves and others in the hope that change can occur, before it\'s past repairing, nicely expressed and written
July 17th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write asking what should be simple questions to answer but are not, to answer them we would all have to brutally honest with ourselves and others in the hope that change can occur, before it\'s past repairing, nicely expressed and written
July 17th, 2025 05:17
Unmasked
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of anger at being decieved, nicely expressed and written
July 17th, 2025 04:52
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of anger at being decieved, nicely expressed and written
July 17th, 2025 04:52
WHY DON\'T WE JUST...
sorenbarrett said:
Good questions asked in this poem. The answers are probably things that we would rather not face. Well written
July 17th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
Good questions asked in this poem. The answers are probably things that we would rather not face. Well written
July 17th, 2025 04:38
WHY DON\'T WE JUST...
Demar Desu said:
It seems as if even if I try to be at peace, there is someone else ready to create war.
If I decide to perfect myself… what good is it if my environment wants to see me destroyed
July 17th, 2025 03:11
Demar Desu said:
It seems as if even if I try to be at peace, there is someone else ready to create war.
If I decide to perfect myself… what good is it if my environment wants to see me destroyed
July 17th, 2025 03:11
Unmasked
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of deception in this poem that seem to carry anger as well. Nicely done
July 16th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of deception in this poem that seem to carry anger as well. Nicely done
July 16th, 2025 05:09
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