Comments received on poems by Iam1ItchyLizzard



In a world of lost poems
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:

Applause!!! I ve written a piece about my shadow once which got lost in the street gone with some other shadows n since then im worrying cuz she cant find me and It cant be find....but yours i really felt it, Cuz I wrote 12 or more booklets during past 25 years and now half of them are gone, Or pages are torn or files are gone erased....

August 19th, 2026 09:32

A Dark Path
sorenbarrett said:

A step of faith and because there is no where else to go. It is a journey taken one step at a time groping for what might guide us. Well written a fave

July 30th, 2026 06:43

I don\'t want you angels
sorenbarrett said:

To be told what to do whether good or not is something that the individual does not want to here. We govern our own life. Well done

July 28th, 2026 06:17

MY TINY LITTLE WINGS
Mutley Ravishes said:

Keep stretching those wings, and they\'ll grow for sure, in many ways.

July 26th, 2026 23:57

MY TINY LITTLE WINGS
sorenbarrett said:

Clever and well written the write is a good metaphor and well done

July 26th, 2026 20:05

A Dieing Breath
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the explanation of life and death. Well done

July 25th, 2026 18:39

Oh that Fancy lady
Paul Bell said:

Miss Teri sounds like the girl every guy has a crush on.
The one you always remember.

July 25th, 2026 10:01

Oh that Fancy lady
sorenbarrett said:

I have known such women. Good write

July 24th, 2026 15:37

Dear God
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic prayer and plea for release and peace. Nicely worded and emotionally touching. I hope all is well.

July 24th, 2026 04:04

~A Daisy Chain~
sorenbarrett said:

It was John Donne that said \"No man is an island\" and his finishing line accompanies yours \"And therefore, never send to know for whom the bell tolls for it tolls for thee\" Yes mortality is over rated. Loved your imagery of the tide as well which to me was a great metaphor. Very nicely done in layers of meaning.

April 22nd, 2026 05:33

A Note to Ms. Ann
sorenbarrett said:

This seems and epitaph and at the least a note in a eulogy a type of prayer. Nicely done

February 24th, 2026 10:26

right from the mouth
2781 said:

I liked the depth...

February 24th, 2026 08:55

right from the mouth
sorenbarrett said:

This poem states a specific fear and there is a plea for help. Quite understandable from a child and well written.

February 23rd, 2026 16:37

In a world of lost poems
2781 said:

His glory goes on, and on...

February 22nd, 2026 07:51

In a world of lost poems
sorenbarrett said:

I like this questioning with a repeated question. It implies that the muse has left without saying it. Nicely done

February 15th, 2026 04:37

A SIMPLE HELLO
sorenbarrett said:

Now that\'s a sad story of explanation that goes with this piece. It makes sense in the literal term of understanding the context but makes a sad sense in the state of the world. Overcrowding and rapid advances in technology are two large contributors to the condition and it is very tragic indeed. A very creative write.

November 5th, 2025 03:32

CATCHY
sorenbarrett said:

A fun poem that moves beyond the rhyming issue of a poem to its catchiness. So true that it is not just the rhyme of a poem that one reads for but for meaning and the meter or rhythm as well. Nicely done

October 29th, 2025 04:12

I do a shot
sorenbarrett said:

There is truth in this poem for all those that society asks to change who they are so that they may fit. Nicely written

October 20th, 2025 04:46

Peace and Ohm
sorenbarrett said:

It is the vibration that starts within and vibrates outward and it takes man to create such paradoxes as fighting to obtain peace. A poem well organized and written

October 18th, 2025 04:05

MY FAST FRIEND
sorenbarrett said:

This seems a warning to a friend that is traveling too fast in the fast lane of life. Nicely written it resounds with concern.

September 25th, 2025 03:49

Crazy boy
sorenbarrett said:

A poem for a person in pain and one that needs to come home. Very nicely worded with a sense of compassion. Well written

September 23rd, 2025 12:45

I Prepare To Die
2781 said:

We\'re just sojourners until we get our wings!

September 19th, 2025 01:26

I Prepare To Die
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting dream and with it fright. Are not most people afraid to die? Well written

September 18th, 2025 18:47

Lifes Way
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of questions that the answer seems implied but maybe not. Depending on one\'s belief the answer could be different. A thought provoking write

September 16th, 2025 07:02

Sand Castles
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphoric memories. I remember doing that with my children taking a regular shovel and digging holes six feet deep mounting sand as high as a person beside it. Hope no unknown beach walker stepped into it at night. A fun read

September 15th, 2025 04:24

For the sake of love ,
sorenbarrett said:

We all are myopic when it comes to seeing ourselves and we are what we want to be and can not understand why others don\'t love us for who we are. A lovely write.

September 12th, 2025 04:31

For the sake of love ,
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:

This was very early into the time that I began to write my stuff down so it’s really quick and simple …

September 11th, 2025 21:55

Hope
2781 said:

The fifth commandment.

September 9th, 2025 08:27

Hope
sorenbarrett said:

A touching homage to a mother past. Lovely

September 9th, 2025 04:28

Welcome me ….
sorenbarrett said:

Vacillation such a common occurrence in life. Not being ready or sure well portrayed here.

September 8th, 2025 16:46

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