Comments received on poems by Iam1ItchyLizzard
~A Daisy Chain~
sorenbarrett said:
It was John Donne that said \"No man is an island\" and his finishing line accompanies yours \"And therefore, never send to know for whom the bell tolls for it tolls for thee\" Yes mortality is over rated. Loved your imagery of the tide as well which to me was a great metaphor. Very nicely done in layers of meaning.
April 22nd, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
It was John Donne that said \"No man is an island\" and his finishing line accompanies yours \"And therefore, never send to know for whom the bell tolls for it tolls for thee\" Yes mortality is over rated. Loved your imagery of the tide as well which to me was a great metaphor. Very nicely done in layers of meaning.
April 22nd, 2026 05:33
A Note to Ms. Ann
sorenbarrett said:
This seems and epitaph and at the least a note in a eulogy a type of prayer. Nicely done
February 24th, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
This seems and epitaph and at the least a note in a eulogy a type of prayer. Nicely done
February 24th, 2026 10:26
right from the mouth
sorenbarrett said:
This poem states a specific fear and there is a plea for help. Quite understandable from a child and well written.
February 23rd, 2026 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem states a specific fear and there is a plea for help. Quite understandable from a child and well written.
February 23rd, 2026 16:37
In a world of lost poems
sorenbarrett said:
I like this questioning with a repeated question. It implies that the muse has left without saying it. Nicely done
February 15th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
I like this questioning with a repeated question. It implies that the muse has left without saying it. Nicely done
February 15th, 2026 04:37
A SIMPLE HELLO
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s a sad story of explanation that goes with this piece. It makes sense in the literal term of understanding the context but makes a sad sense in the state of the world. Overcrowding and rapid advances in technology are two large contributors to the condition and it is very tragic indeed. A very creative write.
November 5th, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s a sad story of explanation that goes with this piece. It makes sense in the literal term of understanding the context but makes a sad sense in the state of the world. Overcrowding and rapid advances in technology are two large contributors to the condition and it is very tragic indeed. A very creative write.
November 5th, 2025 03:32
CATCHY
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem that moves beyond the rhyming issue of a poem to its catchiness. So true that it is not just the rhyme of a poem that one reads for but for meaning and the meter or rhythm as well. Nicely done
October 29th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem that moves beyond the rhyming issue of a poem to its catchiness. So true that it is not just the rhyme of a poem that one reads for but for meaning and the meter or rhythm as well. Nicely done
October 29th, 2025 04:12
I do a shot
sorenbarrett said:
There is truth in this poem for all those that society asks to change who they are so that they may fit. Nicely written
October 20th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is truth in this poem for all those that society asks to change who they are so that they may fit. Nicely written
October 20th, 2025 04:46
Peace and Ohm
sorenbarrett said:
It is the vibration that starts within and vibrates outward and it takes man to create such paradoxes as fighting to obtain peace. A poem well organized and written
October 18th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
It is the vibration that starts within and vibrates outward and it takes man to create such paradoxes as fighting to obtain peace. A poem well organized and written
October 18th, 2025 04:05
MY FAST FRIEND
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a warning to a friend that is traveling too fast in the fast lane of life. Nicely written it resounds with concern.
September 25th, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a warning to a friend that is traveling too fast in the fast lane of life. Nicely written it resounds with concern.
September 25th, 2025 03:49
Crazy boy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem for a person in pain and one that needs to come home. Very nicely worded with a sense of compassion. Well written
September 23rd, 2025 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem for a person in pain and one that needs to come home. Very nicely worded with a sense of compassion. Well written
September 23rd, 2025 12:45
I Prepare To Die
2781 said:
We\'re just sojourners until we get our wings!
September 19th, 2025 01:26
2781 said:
We\'re just sojourners until we get our wings!
September 19th, 2025 01:26
I Prepare To Die
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting dream and with it fright. Are not most people afraid to die? Well written
September 18th, 2025 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting dream and with it fright. Are not most people afraid to die? Well written
September 18th, 2025 18:47
Lifes Way
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions that the answer seems implied but maybe not. Depending on one\'s belief the answer could be different. A thought provoking write
September 16th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions that the answer seems implied but maybe not. Depending on one\'s belief the answer could be different. A thought provoking write
September 16th, 2025 07:02
Sand Castles
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric memories. I remember doing that with my children taking a regular shovel and digging holes six feet deep mounting sand as high as a person beside it. Hope no unknown beach walker stepped into it at night. A fun read
September 15th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric memories. I remember doing that with my children taking a regular shovel and digging holes six feet deep mounting sand as high as a person beside it. Hope no unknown beach walker stepped into it at night. A fun read
September 15th, 2025 04:24
For the sake of love ,
sorenbarrett said:
We all are myopic when it comes to seeing ourselves and we are what we want to be and can not understand why others don\'t love us for who we are. A lovely write.
September 12th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
We all are myopic when it comes to seeing ourselves and we are what we want to be and can not understand why others don\'t love us for who we are. A lovely write.
September 12th, 2025 04:31
For the sake of love ,
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
This was very early into the time that I began to write my stuff down so it’s really quick and simple …
September 11th, 2025 21:55
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
This was very early into the time that I began to write my stuff down so it’s really quick and simple …
September 11th, 2025 21:55
Welcome me ….
sorenbarrett said:
Vacillation such a common occurrence in life. Not being ready or sure well portrayed here.
September 8th, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
Vacillation such a common occurrence in life. Not being ready or sure well portrayed here.
September 8th, 2025 16:46
Hate
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed love is the best gift that can be given. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed love is the best gift that can be given. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 12:12
I love you ,
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that vacillates between love and not wanting to do damage to the one loved. A most interesting approach. Well done
September 2nd, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that vacillates between love and not wanting to do damage to the one loved. A most interesting approach. Well done
September 2nd, 2025 14:18
Tomorrow..., oh Tomorrow,
sorenbarrett said:
A great message for none of us know when we may die and we should take advantage of time we have and not procrastinate things for time that may never come. A wonderful message and poem
August 31st, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great message for none of us know when we may die and we should take advantage of time we have and not procrastinate things for time that may never come. A wonderful message and poem
August 31st, 2025 04:49
your a man...,
sorenbarrett said:
A great message and should apply to all not just women, children, handicapped, old but all other men included. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great message and should apply to all not just women, children, handicapped, old but all other men included. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 18:36
Mother
sorenbarrett said:
All of us have times when we need protection and a feeling of safety that only a mother can provide. Lovely write
August 27th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
All of us have times when we need protection and a feeling of safety that only a mother can provide. Lovely write
August 27th, 2025 04:01
Dear God
sorenbarrett said:
Even Christ felt forsaken in the garden as he prayed. Well written
August 25th, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Even Christ felt forsaken in the garden as he prayed. Well written
August 25th, 2025 15:17
A Picture In My Mind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem comes across as dream like and feelings of loss in a surreal world where time passes so slowly. Nicely written
August 25th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem comes across as dream like and feelings of loss in a surreal world where time passes so slowly. Nicely written
August 25th, 2025 03:52
