Comments received on poems by David Hopkins
Lifes Way
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions that the answer seems implied but maybe not. Depending on one\'s belief the answer could be different. A thought provoking write
September 16th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questions that the answer seems implied but maybe not. Depending on one\'s belief the answer could be different. A thought provoking write
September 16th, 2025 07:02
Sand Castles
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric memories. I remember doing that with my children taking a regular shovel and digging holes six feet deep mounting sand as high as a person beside it. Hope no unknown beach walker stepped into it at night. A fun read
September 15th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric memories. I remember doing that with my children taking a regular shovel and digging holes six feet deep mounting sand as high as a person beside it. Hope no unknown beach walker stepped into it at night. A fun read
September 15th, 2025 04:24
For the sake of love ,
sorenbarrett said:
We all are myopic when it comes to seeing ourselves and we are what we want to be and can not understand why others don\'t love us for who we are. A lovely write.
September 12th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
We all are myopic when it comes to seeing ourselves and we are what we want to be and can not understand why others don\'t love us for who we are. A lovely write.
September 12th, 2025 04:31
For the sake of love ,
David Hopkins said:
This was very early into the time that I began to write my stuff down so it’s really quick and simple …
September 11th, 2025 21:55
David Hopkins said:
This was very early into the time that I began to write my stuff down so it’s really quick and simple …
September 11th, 2025 21:55
Welcome me ….
sorenbarrett said:
Vacillation such a common occurrence in life. Not being ready or sure well portrayed here.
September 8th, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
Vacillation such a common occurrence in life. Not being ready or sure well portrayed here.
September 8th, 2025 16:46
Hate
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed love is the best gift that can be given. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed love is the best gift that can be given. A lovely write
September 3rd, 2025 12:12
I love you ,
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that vacillates between love and not wanting to do damage to the one loved. A most interesting approach. Well done
September 2nd, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that vacillates between love and not wanting to do damage to the one loved. A most interesting approach. Well done
September 2nd, 2025 14:18
Tomorrow..., oh Tomorrow,
sorenbarrett said:
A great message for none of us know when we may die and we should take advantage of time we have and not procrastinate things for time that may never come. A wonderful message and poem
August 31st, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A great message for none of us know when we may die and we should take advantage of time we have and not procrastinate things for time that may never come. A wonderful message and poem
August 31st, 2025 04:49
your a man...,
sorenbarrett said:
A great message and should apply to all not just women, children, handicapped, old but all other men included. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great message and should apply to all not just women, children, handicapped, old but all other men included. Nicely done
August 30th, 2025 18:36
Mother
sorenbarrett said:
All of us have times when we need protection and a feeling of safety that only a mother can provide. Lovely write
August 27th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
All of us have times when we need protection and a feeling of safety that only a mother can provide. Lovely write
August 27th, 2025 04:01
Dear God
sorenbarrett said:
Even Christ felt forsaken in the garden as he prayed. Well written
August 25th, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Even Christ felt forsaken in the garden as he prayed. Well written
August 25th, 2025 15:17
A Picture In My Mind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem comes across as dream like and feelings of loss in a surreal world where time passes so slowly. Nicely written
August 25th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem comes across as dream like and feelings of loss in a surreal world where time passes so slowly. Nicely written
August 25th, 2025 03:52
