Comments received on poems by A Dying Hero of the Past



pain
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of pain that is temporal and that does not follow beyond this life. Nicely said

January 13th, 2026 16:57

In Time
sorenbarrett said:

So true a man is measured not by the length of his days but by the depth of his actions. A lovely write

January 12th, 2026 04:17

I am...
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of sacrifice and martyrdom that makes this as a feature of one\'s personality. Well done

January 11th, 2026 04:01

A New Day in a Poets Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Aside from confidence there is hope in this poem as well as a decisive sense of determination and assurance that with time all things are possible. Well said.

January 6th, 2026 04:14

first kiss
sorenbarrett said:

Short but vey image strong. First anything leaves an impression hard to erase a kiss even more so. Well done

January 4th, 2026 03:48

when you say....
Friendship said:

Nicely worded

January 2nd, 2026 07:15

My love
Friendship said:

Your words say a lot, a poem of domineering.nicely worded

January 1st, 2026 17:53

My love
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of love and an argument for its defense. Lovely Happy New Year

January 1st, 2026 14:57

The Last Telegram of the Last WW2 Lover
sorenbarrett said:

What appears to be a romance poem is indeed a poem of domination and reading the author\'s note it makes sense. Well done and a happy new year to you

January 1st, 2026 04:36

The Invisible Window
sorenbarrett said:

Being ignored is one of the worst experiences. Shunning someone or snubbing them a sever means of punishment and contempt. Well done

December 30th, 2025 14:07

girl on the throne
Kez said:

Its beautiful

December 29th, 2025 23:42

girl on the throne
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of solitude in silence where it is not that pain is subdued but that there is no one to listen. The throne is lonely when one has only oneself to govern. Yet gather your strength and summon your forces for old battle scars are not sufficient to fight off new foes. Gather strength each day a new battle.

December 29th, 2025 04:09

girl on the throne
Katie B. said:

Lovely read. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

December 29th, 2025 01:27

misty day
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem that both speaks to the senses and in metaphor to the soul

December 28th, 2025 13:44

The night before christmas
Kez said:

Nice.

December 24th, 2025 22:38

The night before christmas
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem of true friendship. Lovely Happy Holidays

December 24th, 2025 17:17

The wind...
sorenbarrett said:

This poem seems eastern rather than western in its style and imagery. A lovely write

October 31st, 2025 17:56

IM BACKITS
sorenbarrett said:

Glad you\'re back, hope to hear more from you soon.

October 29th, 2025 04:06