Comments received on poems by Jaryyn
Glassy Tears of Illusion
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions can turn the real into the surreal. Well done
September 14th, 2026 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions can turn the real into the surreal. Well done
September 14th, 2026 13:54
Going Beneath The Surface
sorenbarrett said:
This write seems like a need needs to be fulfilled. Nicely written
September 13th, 2026 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
This write seems like a need needs to be fulfilled. Nicely written
September 13th, 2026 14:39
Shake Me and Finally Wake Me
sorenbarrett said:
A nightmare from which someone needs to be awakened put in poetic words. Well done
September 9th, 2026 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
A nightmare from which someone needs to be awakened put in poetic words. Well done
September 9th, 2026 11:47
Darkening Static
sorenbarrett said:
Cosmic and surreal it calls out a feeling of peace. Nicely written
September 8th, 2026 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
Cosmic and surreal it calls out a feeling of peace. Nicely written
September 8th, 2026 13:47
Oppressive Dreams of Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams of reality and that may be for who is to say what is real.
A good write my friend
September 7th, 2026 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams of reality and that may be for who is to say what is real.
A good write my friend
September 7th, 2026 08:22
Oppressive Dreams of Reality
arqios said:
When existential pressure presses on the mind it results in a diagnostic collapse, like the erosion of self among other things; flickering first then fading and reality becomes a faltering dream that crushes.
September 7th, 2026 07:51
arqios said:
When existential pressure presses on the mind it results in a diagnostic collapse, like the erosion of self among other things; flickering first then fading and reality becomes a faltering dream that crushes.
September 7th, 2026 07:51
Minds\' Fading Flickering Flame
arqios said:
Can\'t wait for the second part!
September 6th, 2026 22:14
arqios said:
Can\'t wait for the second part!
September 6th, 2026 22:14
Minds\' Fading Flickering Flame
turningpoint said:
very well done seems to be true
September 6th, 2026 16:54
turningpoint said:
very well done seems to be true
September 6th, 2026 16:54
Minds\' Fading Flickering Flame
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a nightmare or a scene from a battle ground. Surreal it calls out for action. Nicely done
September 6th, 2026 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a nightmare or a scene from a battle ground. Surreal it calls out for action. Nicely done
September 6th, 2026 15:47
Inner War for a New Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of just drifting in this poem a sense of timelessness. Well done
July 31st, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of just drifting in this poem a sense of timelessness. Well done
July 31st, 2026 14:17
Bare Land Covered in Lies
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this poem speaks of lies and turning hell to heaven. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this poem speaks of lies and turning hell to heaven. Nicely done
July 29th, 2026 16:23
Sweet cadaverous cacophony
sorenbarrett said:
A chaotic and violent world where no one can be trusted and everything seems rusted. Nicely written
December 15th, 2025 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
A chaotic and violent world where no one can be trusted and everything seems rusted. Nicely written
December 15th, 2025 12:05
Toss and Turn
RefugeInRain said:
Lovely write. \"Hell is touching my silver star, pushing my life out of radar\", that line stood out to me a lot for some reason, I really like it. Praying for your restful nights :) - RnR
November 29th, 2025 22:14
RefugeInRain said:
Lovely write. \"Hell is touching my silver star, pushing my life out of radar\", that line stood out to me a lot for some reason, I really like it. Praying for your restful nights :) - RnR
November 29th, 2025 22:14
Words undone
arqios said:
Know that feeling quite intimately. Good write🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
November 25th, 2025 18:07
arqios said:
Know that feeling quite intimately. Good write🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
November 25th, 2025 18:07
Words undone
sorenbarrett said:
What an existential poem of a journey taken. A lovely write
November 25th, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
What an existential poem of a journey taken. A lovely write
November 25th, 2025 15:47
Death came down
arqios said:
Brings me to thoughts of Credence and Scamander, for some reason. Love a poem that takes you on a journey.
November 24th, 2025 23:24
arqios said:
Brings me to thoughts of Credence and Scamander, for some reason. Love a poem that takes you on a journey.
November 24th, 2025 23:24
Toss and Turn
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia is a terrible disorder and restless nights take their toll. Well expressed in this write
November 23rd, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia is a terrible disorder and restless nights take their toll. Well expressed in this write
November 23rd, 2025 04:21
Nomen est omen
sorenbarrett said:
A great acrostic poem cleverly worded. Loved it
November 22nd, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great acrostic poem cleverly worded. Loved it
November 22nd, 2025 14:44
