Comments received on poems by Jaryyn



Toss and Turn
RefugeInRain said:

Lovely write. \"Hell is touching my silver star, pushing my life out of radar\", that line stood out to me a lot for some reason, I really like it. Praying for your restful nights :) - RnR

November 29th, 2025 22:14

Words undone
arqios said:

Know that feeling quite intimately. Good write🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻

November 25th, 2025 18:07

Words undone
sorenbarrett said:

What an existential poem of a journey taken. A lovely write

November 25th, 2025 15:47

Death came down
arqios said:

Brings me to thoughts of Credence and Scamander, for some reason. Love a poem that takes you on a journey.

November 24th, 2025 23:24

Death came down
sorenbarrett said:

A great acrostic nicely done

November 24th, 2025 16:09

Toss and Turn
sorenbarrett said:

Insomnia is a terrible disorder and restless nights take their toll. Well expressed in this write

November 23rd, 2025 04:21

Nomen est omen
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS! Now to brush up on Latin🕊️🙏🏻

November 22nd, 2025 15:49

Nomen est omen
sorenbarrett said:

A great acrostic poem cleverly worded. Loved it

November 22nd, 2025 14:44

Nomen est omen
Lorenz said:

Nomen tuum maledictum erit !

November 22nd, 2025 10:36