Comments received on poems by Simran_
Would You Still?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem questions the strength of another\'s love. Seeing deficits that they would find hard to love they question if another could. Nicely written
January 2nd, 2026 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem questions the strength of another\'s love. Seeing deficits that they would find hard to love they question if another could. Nicely written
January 2nd, 2026 08:38
Before the Pink Faded
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely write that dives deep below the bubbly surface of champagne to its intoxication. It is sophisticated in its taste and is sweet to the taste. Yet there is art in its creation. A lovely write
December 29th, 2025 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely write that dives deep below the bubbly surface of champagne to its intoxication. It is sophisticated in its taste and is sweet to the taste. Yet there is art in its creation. A lovely write
December 29th, 2025 06:11
Maybe it was never about love
J.Allen Tompkins said:
This is a beautiful, sentimental piece that touches on so many of the reasons we fall in love, and what we call love. Mid-poem you raise a fascinating point in that we sometimes do author our own realities, bend the current to what we need, and sometimes we don\'t know exactly what that is. This piece is extremely reflective and vulnerable to a good result. Good work here!
December 19th, 2025 12:20
J.Allen Tompkins said:
This is a beautiful, sentimental piece that touches on so many of the reasons we fall in love, and what we call love. Mid-poem you raise a fascinating point in that we sometimes do author our own realities, bend the current to what we need, and sometimes we don\'t know exactly what that is. This piece is extremely reflective and vulnerable to a good result. Good work here!
December 19th, 2025 12:20
The Lies We Tell to Survive
Paul Bell said:
How to change your life whilst staying in bed.
If only it was that easy.
Necessity changes most people\'s lives, the rest of us live on dreams.
November 28th, 2025 06:34
Paul Bell said:
How to change your life whilst staying in bed.
If only it was that easy.
Necessity changes most people\'s lives, the rest of us live on dreams.
November 28th, 2025 06:34
The Lies We Tell to Survive
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thought in this poem. It requires courage to see its deeper aspects and acceptance of self and the world. It addresses self weaknesses, abilities as well as decisions. It places blame on self and the environment. A piece for reflection. Well done and a fave
November 28th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thought in this poem. It requires courage to see its deeper aspects and acceptance of self and the world. It addresses self weaknesses, abilities as well as decisions. It places blame on self and the environment. A piece for reflection. Well done and a fave
November 28th, 2025 03:46
Echoes of Almost
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow marvelous poem, i like the fluent creative metaphor line lots. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 11:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow marvelous poem, i like the fluent creative metaphor line lots. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 11:36
Echoes of Almost
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of another language\'s word for one not available it the language one uses. Saudade I am very familiar with and although nostalgia is often substituted it does not carry the same flavor. Loved the poem
November 25th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of another language\'s word for one not available it the language one uses. Saudade I am very familiar with and although nostalgia is often substituted it does not carry the same flavor. Loved the poem
November 25th, 2025 04:22
Maybe it was never about love
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep understanding here of the most profound existential type. Many of us search for the illusion of love in many forms and you have identified one in this poem. Lovely
November 23rd, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
There is deep understanding here of the most profound existential type. Many of us search for the illusion of love in many forms and you have identified one in this poem. Lovely
November 23rd, 2025 04:39
