Comments received on poems by Rachel Poole
Pieces
Katie B. said:
Love it. Insightful and thoughtful piece. Keep writing. Thanks for sharing. KB
January 15th, 2026 16:22
Katie B. said:
Love it. Insightful and thoughtful piece. Keep writing. Thanks for sharing. KB
January 15th, 2026 16:22
Pieces
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you need that break to re -mend and be stronger.
It\'s Friday tomorrow, release day for the weekend where all the pieces fit.
January 15th, 2026 11:31
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you need that break to re -mend and be stronger.
It\'s Friday tomorrow, release day for the weekend where all the pieces fit.
January 15th, 2026 11:31
Pieces
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rachel, this is tender and brave. The brokenness isn’t dramatized…it’s simply held, honestly and carefully. That quiet resolve at the end really stayed with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rachel, this is tender and brave. The brokenness isn’t dramatized…it’s simply held, honestly and carefully. That quiet resolve at the end really stayed with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:43
Pieces
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition of one\'s deficits a sad but at the same time insightful and necessary recognition.
January 15th, 2026 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition of one\'s deficits a sad but at the same time insightful and necessary recognition.
January 15th, 2026 10:10
Never Mine
Paul Bell said:
Tough one, you give a hundred percent and get nothing in return.
Do you walk away with your head held high, or is it still raw and hurtful.
January 10th, 2026 07:04
Paul Bell said:
Tough one, you give a hundred percent and get nothing in return.
Do you walk away with your head held high, or is it still raw and hurtful.
January 10th, 2026 07:04
Never Mine
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love is an old issue that has been around as long as people. Love is seldom fair and its idea form seldom exists. A lovely write
January 9th, 2026 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love is an old issue that has been around as long as people. Love is seldom fair and its idea form seldom exists. A lovely write
January 9th, 2026 12:59
Don\'t
MendedFences27 said:
I guess we all have had an experience similar to this in our lives. A broken heart that lingers over time. It is best to choose to live openly and seek new experiences. From personal encounters, I found it easiest to get outdoors and appreciate nature. Enjoy living. I hope you find happiness. You deserve it.- Phil A.
January 8th, 2026 12:20
MendedFences27 said:
I guess we all have had an experience similar to this in our lives. A broken heart that lingers over time. It is best to choose to live openly and seek new experiences. From personal encounters, I found it easiest to get outdoors and appreciate nature. Enjoy living. I hope you find happiness. You deserve it.- Phil A.
January 8th, 2026 12:20
Don\'t
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of being done wrong in this poem. Well written and expressed. A sad poem responded to with grace.
January 8th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of being done wrong in this poem. Well written and expressed. A sad poem responded to with grace.
January 8th, 2026 11:35
Crying over a boy
Friendship said:
well written.your poem revolves around unrequited love and the pain of feeling overlooked in a relationship. It explores themes of jealousy, betrayal, and self-realization, highlighting the emotional turmoil of being in love with someone who is more interested in another person. I love your writing; you speak from your heart.
January 7th, 2026 15:58
Friendship said:
well written.your poem revolves around unrequited love and the pain of feeling overlooked in a relationship. It explores themes of jealousy, betrayal, and self-realization, highlighting the emotional turmoil of being in love with someone who is more interested in another person. I love your writing; you speak from your heart.
January 7th, 2026 15:58
Crying over a boy
Katie B. said:
wow! Powerful. Love the repetition! Great one!
January 7th, 2026 11:57
Katie B. said:
wow! Powerful. Love the repetition! Great one!
January 7th, 2026 11:57
Crying over a boy
Paul Bell said:
I would say you\'ve dodged a bullet, cos that girl will be replaced by another crying girl.
Good lesson in the love game mind you, gives you more scope to play.
January 7th, 2026 11:55
Paul Bell said:
I would say you\'ve dodged a bullet, cos that girl will be replaced by another crying girl.
Good lesson in the love game mind you, gives you more scope to play.
January 7th, 2026 11:55
Crying over a boy
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love more common than one would think where nature provides no link. A good write
January 7th, 2026 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Unrequited love more common than one would think where nature provides no link. A good write
January 7th, 2026 11:38
Loudly
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of missing someone sits heavy in this poem. Nicely written it uses opposites well in the last lines
January 6th, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling of missing someone sits heavy in this poem. Nicely written it uses opposites well in the last lines
January 6th, 2026 11:13
Lack of a better word
lunarchloedip said:
its interesting how attached we can become to someone before an \"us\" even exists. or at least that we can fear the ending of something that hasn\'t really begun. shows the depth of our emotion and care, i think.
thanks for sharing!
January 5th, 2026 12:58
lunarchloedip said:
its interesting how attached we can become to someone before an \"us\" even exists. or at least that we can fear the ending of something that hasn\'t really begun. shows the depth of our emotion and care, i think.
thanks for sharing!
January 5th, 2026 12:58
Lack of a better word
sorenbarrett said:
Fulfilling worst dreams is the topic of this poem and sad it seems indeed.
January 5th, 2026 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
Fulfilling worst dreams is the topic of this poem and sad it seems indeed.
January 5th, 2026 11:44
Have you ever felt…
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that need answers before there is commitment in the mind or heart. A wonderful write
January 5th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that need answers before there is commitment in the mind or heart. A wonderful write
January 5th, 2026 03:51
Stunning
sorenbarrett said:
So cleverly structured it deserves a fave. The repetitions in this poem give added power to it. Loved it
December 31st, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
So cleverly structured it deserves a fave. The repetitions in this poem give added power to it. Loved it
December 31st, 2025 09:37
The Show
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of putting on the show and mask to impress others and never let them know what lies underneath. A sad read
December 30th, 2025 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of putting on the show and mask to impress others and never let them know what lies underneath. A sad read
December 30th, 2025 11:54
