Comments received on poems by Edgar_NiyaPoe
The Unsaid
sorenbarrett said:
It is the pain that gives the joy its measurement. One can not be had without the other. A lovely write
January 29th, 2026 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
It is the pain that gives the joy its measurement. One can not be had without the other. A lovely write
January 29th, 2026 08:05
Lone Star
sorenbarrett said:
This poem may be interpreted several ways but the way I like best is that one shining friend true and bright outshines all others of dimmer glow. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem may be interpreted several ways but the way I like best is that one shining friend true and bright outshines all others of dimmer glow. Nicely written
January 26th, 2026 04:17
Withered Red
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of sad regret in this poem a sour taste that call out of the dark. Nicely done
January 25th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of sad regret in this poem a sour taste that call out of the dark. Nicely done
January 25th, 2026 03:54
Short Not Sweet
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of physical distance to equate to emotional distance. Nicely worked
January 24th, 2026 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of physical distance to equate to emotional distance. Nicely worked
January 24th, 2026 10:49
Short Not Sweet
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem revolves around themes of longing, vulnerability, and the desire for permanence in a relationship, while also contemplating the unknowns that lie ahead.
January 24th, 2026 10:24
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem revolves around themes of longing, vulnerability, and the desire for permanence in a relationship, while also contemplating the unknowns that lie ahead.
January 24th, 2026 10:24
Where The Angels Hum
sorenbarrett said:
Cruel words perceived as attack can cause the fragile to withdraw and hide. A well written piece
January 23rd, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Cruel words perceived as attack can cause the fragile to withdraw and hide. A well written piece
January 23rd, 2026 04:32
A Borrowed Sky
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is somber and dark dealing with death leaving a sense of loss. Nicely composed.
January 22nd, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is somber and dark dealing with death leaving a sense of loss. Nicely composed.
January 22nd, 2026 04:18
Blue And Grey
Katie B. said:
Heavy and deep. Love the imagery. Could you tell me more about the poem?
January 21st, 2026 09:25
Katie B. said:
Heavy and deep. Love the imagery. Could you tell me more about the poem?
January 21st, 2026 09:25
Blue And Grey
sorenbarrett said:
Masterful the use of the title to set the mood, the wording of the poem continues this with direct wording (ache and sorrow) then with sensual wording (cold, blurring) This all builds gradually as such an emotion does. Even the choice of ordering (morning first night second ) leaving the feeling of darkness to prevail. The two lines:
\"heavier is to breathe
worse is to sleep\"
are brilliant. Then it finishes with a flourish a definite fave
January 21st, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Masterful the use of the title to set the mood, the wording of the poem continues this with direct wording (ache and sorrow) then with sensual wording (cold, blurring) This all builds gradually as such an emotion does. Even the choice of ordering (morning first night second ) leaving the feeling of darkness to prevail. The two lines:
\"heavier is to breathe
worse is to sleep\"
are brilliant. Then it finishes with a flourish a definite fave
January 21st, 2026 04:49
When The Tears Spoke
sorenbarrett said:
This poem endorses opening oneself to emotion and becoming a whole person rather that being limited. Well written
January 20th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
This poem endorses opening oneself to emotion and becoming a whole person rather that being limited. Well written
January 20th, 2026 04:21
