Comments received on poems by lilly OvO
Her
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
i envy thee your lucky find, cuz truth though pledged my troth close to thirty years ago, we (myself and the missus) accommodate each other, whose foibles would appear bizarre to an unsuspecting observer, but truth be told desperation conspired to risk liberating libido with spouse, whose blackened barbs aimed at surviving two elder sisters cause they kept the loot when we got evicted from the family property (initially during the dead of winter 2010, but then gave us a grace period to mach schnell and move out by a forgotten date come spring or summer of that year) and DID NOT divide the spoils, but kept liquidated assets for themselves. Our marriage though far less tempestuous since days of yore still find me besmirched with anger at myself for bumbling and fumbling with one previous relationship (actually the very first heterosexual rapport while in my early twenties - cuz yours truly happened to be a late bloomer) botched by NOT being able, eager, ready and willing to put the considerations of this unnamed female before mine, which role of fatherhood (both two daughters long since flew the very messy coop), yet selflessness learned after decrying adopting the role of lothario and nearly experiencing divorce, but even to this day (and probably even after this wordsmith passes away) anger from thine eldest star student will prevail, though being emotionally smarted (\"Hoisted by my own petard\") and selfishness to appease unmet needs of body, mind, and spirit found me straying from the marriage, which wife asleep in dream land allowing, enabling, and providing yours truly a chunk of time to satisfy literary pursuits such as writing thee and submitting poems, which this Caucasian, latitudinarian, non-establishmentarian, pennsylvanian, sexagenarian and unitarian can share if interest piques your inquisitive by responding to the email of mine [email protected] alias matthew scott harris.
February 7th, 2026 13:11
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
i envy thee your lucky find, cuz truth though pledged my troth close to thirty years ago, we (myself and the missus) accommodate each other, whose foibles would appear bizarre to an unsuspecting observer, but truth be told desperation conspired to risk liberating libido with spouse, whose blackened barbs aimed at surviving two elder sisters cause they kept the loot when we got evicted from the family property (initially during the dead of winter 2010, but then gave us a grace period to mach schnell and move out by a forgotten date come spring or summer of that year) and DID NOT divide the spoils, but kept liquidated assets for themselves. Our marriage though far less tempestuous since days of yore still find me besmirched with anger at myself for bumbling and fumbling with one previous relationship (actually the very first heterosexual rapport while in my early twenties - cuz yours truly happened to be a late bloomer) botched by NOT being able, eager, ready and willing to put the considerations of this unnamed female before mine, which role of fatherhood (both two daughters long since flew the very messy coop), yet selflessness learned after decrying adopting the role of lothario and nearly experiencing divorce, but even to this day (and probably even after this wordsmith passes away) anger from thine eldest star student will prevail, though being emotionally smarted (\"Hoisted by my own petard\") and selfishness to appease unmet needs of body, mind, and spirit found me straying from the marriage, which wife asleep in dream land allowing, enabling, and providing yours truly a chunk of time to satisfy literary pursuits such as writing thee and submitting poems, which this Caucasian, latitudinarian, non-establishmentarian, pennsylvanian, sexagenarian and unitarian can share if interest piques your inquisitive by responding to the email of mine [email protected] alias matthew scott harris.
February 7th, 2026 13:11
Missing Her
Lorenz said:
Love is a light so intense that it can even dazzle the soul wit its dark brilliance ...
February 5th, 2026 15:00
Lorenz said:
Love is a light so intense that it can even dazzle the soul wit its dark brilliance ...
February 5th, 2026 15:00
Missing Her
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That detail of kissing twice before leaving really stays with me. It’s small, intimate, and loaded with memory…the kind of thing loss circles endlessly. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 4th, 2026 10:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That detail of kissing twice before leaving really stays with me. It’s small, intimate, and loaded with memory…the kind of thing loss circles endlessly. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 4th, 2026 10:21
Missing Her
Paul Bell said:
Feeling the love here, which there\'s not a lot about at the moment.
February 3rd, 2026 17:12
Paul Bell said:
Feeling the love here, which there\'s not a lot about at the moment.
February 3rd, 2026 17:12
Missing Her
sorenbarrett said:
A list of so many reasons for care and love this poem is romantic and leaves a feeling of nostalgia as well. Nicely done
February 3rd, 2026 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
A list of so many reasons for care and love this poem is romantic and leaves a feeling of nostalgia as well. Nicely done
February 3rd, 2026 10:29
Always and Forever
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lilly, this is pure tenderness. It feels open, unguarded, and deeply lived in. The love here isn’t abstract…it’s embodied, moment by moment. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lilly, this is pure tenderness. It feels open, unguarded, and deeply lived in. The love here isn’t abstract…it’s embodied, moment by moment. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:17
Always and Forever
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation abounds in this poem of passionate expression. Nicely done
February 2nd, 2026 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation abounds in this poem of passionate expression. Nicely done
February 2nd, 2026 16:17
Palestin
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem isn’t trying to aestheticize tragedy…it insists on remembering it. By naming specific lives and interrupted childhood, it resists abstraction and forces attention back to human cost. Meaning doesn’t expire with time, and this certainly still speaks. Powerful, my friend. Thank you for sharing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 23:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem isn’t trying to aestheticize tragedy…it insists on remembering it. By naming specific lives and interrupted childhood, it resists abstraction and forces attention back to human cost. Meaning doesn’t expire with time, and this certainly still speaks. Powerful, my friend. Thank you for sharing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 1st, 2026 23:35
Palestin
sorenbarrett said:
A sad situation even after two years and one that does not look like it has an end in sight. Well written
February 1st, 2026 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
A sad situation even after two years and one that does not look like it has an end in sight. Well written
February 1st, 2026 20:43
Me And You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lilly, this poem is a promise spoken out loud. It moves from first meeting to shared future with sincerity and courage, honoring both joy and pain along the way. The devotion feels genuine and unguarded. A touching piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 31st, 2026 13:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lilly, this poem is a promise spoken out loud. It moves from first meeting to shared future with sincerity and courage, honoring both joy and pain along the way. The devotion feels genuine and unguarded. A touching piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 31st, 2026 13:48
Me And You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and expression of feeling toward another for allowing them to share a piece of themselves and let them in. Nicely written
January 31st, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and expression of feeling toward another for allowing them to share a piece of themselves and let them in. Nicely written
January 31st, 2026 12:05
if i said i love you
Soman Ragavan said:
A beautiful declaration of love. A love that oozes out so passionately cannot be a lie.
January 31st, 2026 03:14
Soman Ragavan said:
A beautiful declaration of love. A love that oozes out so passionately cannot be a lie.
January 31st, 2026 03:14
if i said i love you
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of passion in this poem. Nicely written
January 30th, 2026 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of passion in this poem. Nicely written
January 30th, 2026 16:37
Her
Tristan Robert Lange said:
lilly, this is openly tender. There’s a lot of courage in loving this plainly and saying it out loud without irony or armor. The warmth here is unmistakable. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 28th, 2026 16:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
lilly, this is openly tender. There’s a lot of courage in loving this plainly and saying it out loud without irony or armor. The warmth here is unmistakable. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 28th, 2026 16:03
Her
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of adulation and praise of admiration and worship. Nicely done
January 28th, 2026 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of adulation and praise of admiration and worship. Nicely done
January 28th, 2026 11:31
Her
Friendship said:
Beautifully said . Your poem is to celebrate love and articulate the profound appreciation the poet feels for their partner, emphasizing the emotional connection and support that defines their relationship.
January 28th, 2026 10:34
Friendship said:
Beautifully said . Your poem is to celebrate love and articulate the profound appreciation the poet feels for their partner, emphasizing the emotional connection and support that defines their relationship.
January 28th, 2026 10:34
birdie I love you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lilly, this hurts to read in the way honest things do. The loneliness here feels heavy and unrelieved… I’m really glad you put words to it. Welcome to MPS, too! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 23rd, 2026 13:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lilly, this hurts to read in the way honest things do. The loneliness here feels heavy and unrelieved… I’m really glad you put words to it. Welcome to MPS, too! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 23rd, 2026 13:34
birdie I love you
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of isolation in this poem. Nicely set in images and well worded
January 23rd, 2026 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of isolation in this poem. Nicely set in images and well worded
January 23rd, 2026 12:33
A Page
sorenbarrett said:
Self questioning and recriminations fill this poem then there is the doubt and what ifs that lead down roads with no exit. A lovely write
January 22nd, 2026 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
Self questioning and recriminations fill this poem then there is the doubt and what ifs that lead down roads with no exit. A lovely write
January 22nd, 2026 13:16
