Comments received on poems by notapoet
Lost identity
Augustus said:
I remember how nice my hands used to look before I ruined them working construction in my youth. It\'t what\'s inside that counts, and if it is half as good as your poetry you are fine.
January 4th, 2017 21:52
Augustus said:
I remember how nice my hands used to look before I ruined them working construction in my youth. It\'t what\'s inside that counts, and if it is half as good as your poetry you are fine.
January 4th, 2017 21:52
Lost identity
willyweed said:
this is a great write NAP.
I really enjoyed it, its so relatable
to many. wow! ww
January 4th, 2017 20:27
willyweed said:
this is a great write NAP.
I really enjoyed it, its so relatable
to many. wow! ww
January 4th, 2017 20:27
Lost identity
WriteBeLight said:
Yep, time marches on and it is marching all over my face, mood and attitude. Great job.
January 4th, 2017 19:17
WriteBeLight said:
Yep, time marches on and it is marching all over my face, mood and attitude. Great job.
January 4th, 2017 19:17
Life or Death (Prose Poem)
Augustus said:
That is sad perhaps scary to realize part of you is gone. Where does the spirit go now? Liked the prose.
January 3rd, 2017 21:29
Augustus said:
That is sad perhaps scary to realize part of you is gone. Where does the spirit go now? Liked the prose.
January 3rd, 2017 21:29
Life or Death (Prose Poem)
Sallelesmg@27 said:
Brilliant poem. I sense your disbelief in a passion and love that consumed you in offering your life (perhaps to a person?), but then realising that something that could be everlasting was short-lived. You then mustered a strength within you, a true spirit to accept the continuation of yourself, regardless. I guess its the path to wisdom.
January 3rd, 2017 20:11
Sallelesmg@27 said:
Brilliant poem. I sense your disbelief in a passion and love that consumed you in offering your life (perhaps to a person?), but then realising that something that could be everlasting was short-lived. You then mustered a strength within you, a true spirit to accept the continuation of yourself, regardless. I guess its the path to wisdom.
January 3rd, 2017 20:11
Life or Death (Prose Poem)
willyweed said:
I agree w/Chrissy beautiful prose
I salute you! ww
January 3rd, 2017 19:34
willyweed said:
I agree w/Chrissy beautiful prose
I salute you! ww
January 3rd, 2017 19:34
Life or Death (Prose Poem)
WriteBeLight said:
A remarkable narrative of a person reflecting on their life and knowing they can still grow and transform to an improved person. Very refreshing for the coming year!
January 3rd, 2017 18:45
WriteBeLight said:
A remarkable narrative of a person reflecting on their life and knowing they can still grow and transform to an improved person. Very refreshing for the coming year!
January 3rd, 2017 18:45
Life or Death (Prose Poem)
Christina8 said:
What a powerful and insightful piece! The best prose poem I have read in ages. Bravo!--Christina
January 3rd, 2017 18:15
Christina8 said:
What a powerful and insightful piece! The best prose poem I have read in ages. Bravo!--Christina
January 3rd, 2017 18:15
All Lives Matter
jccaramelbarbie said:
Great message withina greatly written poem
January 2nd, 2017 21:40
jccaramelbarbie said:
Great message withina greatly written poem
January 2nd, 2017 21:40
Love Hides Within
Augustus said:
I believe many can relate to this poem. You describe so well the anxiety that accompanies seeking a relation with a mate, the fear and anguish of rejection, and the memories that last and hurt for a lifetime.
January 1st, 2017 13:34
Augustus said:
I believe many can relate to this poem. You describe so well the anxiety that accompanies seeking a relation with a mate, the fear and anguish of rejection, and the memories that last and hurt for a lifetime.
January 1st, 2017 13:34
Love Hides Within
P.H.Rose said:
Absolutely love
This poem
You can almost
Stand in His shoes
Been there and
Unfortunately bought
The tee shirt
January 1st, 2017 10:16
P.H.Rose said:
Absolutely love
This poem
You can almost
Stand in His shoes
Been there and
Unfortunately bought
The tee shirt
January 1st, 2017 10:16
Love Hides Within
WriteBeLight said:
I love the lines about the tears of frustration. Good job!
January 1st, 2017 05:34
WriteBeLight said:
I love the lines about the tears of frustration. Good job!
January 1st, 2017 05:34
Love Hides Within
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful and heartfelt poem, so gracefully written. A tale of unrequited love. Wonderful poem!
December 31st, 2016 18:50
Christina8 said:
An absolutely beautiful and heartfelt poem, so gracefully written. A tale of unrequited love. Wonderful poem!
December 31st, 2016 18:50
Love Hides Within
Bronze poems said:
I love this poem so smooth with the words really got me thinking from the start
December 31st, 2016 18:46
Bronze poems said:
I love this poem so smooth with the words really got me thinking from the start
December 31st, 2016 18:46
Love Hides Within
willyweed said:
beautifully crafted, tugs the heart string, I was almost going to feel sorry for you then I realized what a good poet you are. splendid work.
ww
December 31st, 2016 18:22
willyweed said:
beautifully crafted, tugs the heart string, I was almost going to feel sorry for you then I realized what a good poet you are. splendid work.
ww
December 31st, 2016 18:22
All Lives Matter
Augustus said:
I just heard today on the news a college professor calling for genocide of all white people. The cast of Hamilton was open to only people of color. Blacks on college campuses are asking for places of refuge. Hispanics feel threatened by police and on and on. We do live in a strange world. I can sympathize with your concerns. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2016 21:53
Augustus said:
I just heard today on the news a college professor calling for genocide of all white people. The cast of Hamilton was open to only people of color. Blacks on college campuses are asking for places of refuge. Hispanics feel threatened by police and on and on. We do live in a strange world. I can sympathize with your concerns. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2016 21:53
All Lives Matter
Christina8 said:
Very well written poem, NAP! Unsettling to read because there is so much truth to it. Great job!
December 28th, 2016 18:37
Christina8 said:
Very well written poem, NAP! Unsettling to read because there is so much truth to it. Great job!
December 28th, 2016 18:37
All Lives Matter
willyweed said:
the sad sorry truth, excellent work
very thoughtful, full of insight and fact
actually it\'s a bit in-nerving as well it should be. I salute you NAP. ww
December 28th, 2016 10:42
willyweed said:
the sad sorry truth, excellent work
very thoughtful, full of insight and fact
actually it\'s a bit in-nerving as well it should be. I salute you NAP. ww
December 28th, 2016 10:42
All Lives Matter
WriteBeLight said:
Extremely thoughtful and the questions you ask must be answered so that no one is left out and we can all live in peace. I worry about my family in relation to this poem. You are making me think about the year to come.
December 28th, 2016 10:35
WriteBeLight said:
Extremely thoughtful and the questions you ask must be answered so that no one is left out and we can all live in peace. I worry about my family in relation to this poem. You are making me think about the year to come.
December 28th, 2016 10:35
In The Doghouse
WriteBeLight said:
Wish you could unring the bell! Nice job about a situation many have been in...:)
December 27th, 2016 08:15
WriteBeLight said:
Wish you could unring the bell! Nice job about a situation many have been in...:)
December 27th, 2016 08:15
In The Doghouse
Christina8 said:
Really good poem! Love the rhymes! I\"m a sucker for flowers, maybe she is too! Good luck! :-)
December 26th, 2016 21:06
Christina8 said:
Really good poem! Love the rhymes! I\"m a sucker for flowers, maybe she is too! Good luck! :-)
December 26th, 2016 21:06
In The Doghouse
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha.. brilliant.
Been there a few
Too many times.
Very good sir......
December 26th, 2016 18:44
P.H.Rose said:
Ha ha.. brilliant.
Been there a few
Too many times.
Very good sir......
December 26th, 2016 18:44
Love For Sale (Refurbished)
Augustus said:
I did not read the note \"humor\" until after I read it. So glad you added the note. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 20:28
Augustus said:
I did not read the note \"humor\" until after I read it. So glad you added the note. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 20:28
Love For Sale (Refurbished)
willyweed said:
very clever and well done in form and structure, I like it . ww
December 24th, 2016 15:39
willyweed said:
very clever and well done in form and structure, I like it . ww
December 24th, 2016 15:39
The First Step Is the Hardest
P.H.Rose said:
Superb... very very
Good.... very clever
Well done sir !!!!!
December 23rd, 2016 15:22
P.H.Rose said:
Superb... very very
Good.... very clever
Well done sir !!!!!
December 23rd, 2016 15:22
The First Step Is the Hardest
willyweed said:
very well crafted work here. beautiful poetry. much enjoyed! ww
December 23rd, 2016 13:38
willyweed said:
very well crafted work here. beautiful poetry. much enjoyed! ww
December 23rd, 2016 13:38
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