Under Veil of Night
willyweed said:

very nicely put my friend. peace ww

November 30th, 2016 09:28

We Just Are….
Christina8 said:

Beautiful poem! Lucky person you wrote this for. Thanks for sharing!

November 29th, 2016 12:19

Love is not blind (Prose Poem )
SilentLaugh said:

Good job! THis is a very craetive and beautiful poem. I hope to see more! Could you look at my new poem, Its gonna be a good night, alright!

November 28th, 2016 13:42

Stone Shaped Heart
Tony36 said:

Expressive and well written

November 23rd, 2016 16:57

Stone Shaped Heart
P.H.Rose said:

Love it. Brilliant N.P

November 23rd, 2016 15:23

Starlight, Star bright
Elegant_Style said:

I like how you changed a child-hood rhyme into something more powerful and complete

November 19th, 2016 12:17

Starlight, Star bright
Christina8 said:

That is an absolutely wonderful poem! SO sweet! I love it!!

November 19th, 2016 11:07

Screeching Tires
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome write love reading your poem

November 18th, 2016 14:01

Screeching Tires
P.H.Rose said:

Oh my golly gosh, I Absolutly love this poem, my absolute favourite
Up to now... Well done !!!!

November 18th, 2016 10:22

S.O.S
Christina8 said:

Very well written poem but sad. Thanks for sharing-Christina

November 17th, 2016 14:29

In these shoes that are not mine
Katiebcohn98 said:

This is great! Keep it up!

November 16th, 2016 21:14

Love Blossom
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FOR SHARING ~ We all need Love to stay alive but it needs to be active and vibrant ! Best wishes BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

November 14th, 2016 09:13

This word I give to you
Christina8 said:

Great job! I love the repetition! And the ending pulled it all together.

November 13th, 2016 14:32

Maternally Yours
Augustus said:

Yes, moms understand. Well done.

November 10th, 2016 21:18

Maternally Yours
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 10th, 2016 09:01