Comments received on poems by notapoet
Spirits Unite
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I like it...Simple yet so descriptive....nice job
September 19th, 2016 07:43
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I like it...Simple yet so descriptive....nice job
September 19th, 2016 07:43
Sowing the seed of love
Augustus said:
You are on to something here. I don't know the rhetoric name for this way of illustration: Kindness radiates and chases darkness. Rays light up the wasteland. Tend to the soil yields a harvest. Enjoyed the read.
September 18th, 2016 12:31
Augustus said:
You are on to something here. I don't know the rhetoric name for this way of illustration: Kindness radiates and chases darkness. Rays light up the wasteland. Tend to the soil yields a harvest. Enjoyed the read.
September 18th, 2016 12:31
Love At First Sight
Augustus said:
Great to be something special in the eyes of another.
September 17th, 2016 11:22
Augustus said:
Great to be something special in the eyes of another.
September 17th, 2016 11:22
Love At First Sight
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks NAP for a beautifully written poem ans an awesome subject Love st First Sight ! My Aunty was an excellent cook and my Uncle said it was Love at First Bite. I've fallen in love for both reasons. Thanks for sharing BRIAN ~ Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
September 17th, 2016 10:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks NAP for a beautifully written poem ans an awesome subject Love st First Sight ! My Aunty was an excellent cook and my Uncle said it was Love at First Bite. I've fallen in love for both reasons. Thanks for sharing BRIAN ~ Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
September 17th, 2016 10:54
Love At First Sight
ShadedSorrow said:
i thought this was truly brilliant.
September 17th, 2016 08:30
ShadedSorrow said:
i thought this was truly brilliant.
September 17th, 2016 08:30
\"Things\"
Emile Dubois said:
Another well observed indictment of our times. If only there was an escape hatch that sustained.
September 17th, 2016 01:38
Emile Dubois said:
Another well observed indictment of our times. If only there was an escape hatch that sustained.
September 17th, 2016 01:38
Once we used to talk
Emile Dubois said:
Amazing commentary upon the de-evolving nature of humanity.
September 17th, 2016 01:34
Emile Dubois said:
Amazing commentary upon the de-evolving nature of humanity.
September 17th, 2016 01:34
Slave To The Blackness
ShadedSorrow said:
The poem is so intricate and well thought out.
September 16th, 2016 13:45
ShadedSorrow said:
The poem is so intricate and well thought out.
September 16th, 2016 13:45
Slave To The Blackness
Augustus said:
Beautifully done.
P.S. I'm jealous !
September 16th, 2016 11:40
Augustus said:
Beautifully done.
P.S. I'm jealous !
September 16th, 2016 11:40
Once we used to talk
lovedud said:
Like this poem a lot, reflects on the current state on the human pop. Very well done.
September 15th, 2016 21:22
lovedud said:
Like this poem a lot, reflects on the current state on the human pop. Very well done.
September 15th, 2016 21:22
Breaking The Rules
Stephanie Showers said:
Wow - I really really enjoyed this. Love the rhythm.
September 13th, 2016 10:58
Stephanie Showers said:
Wow - I really really enjoyed this. Love the rhythm.
September 13th, 2016 10:58
Thoughts Of You
Augustus said:
Would love to be a recipient of such. Delicate, playful, pleasing and meaningful.
September 12th, 2016 17:40
Augustus said:
Would love to be a recipient of such. Delicate, playful, pleasing and meaningful.
September 12th, 2016 17:40
Thoughts Of You
lovedud said:
Read it over again several times. Very soothing and beautiful. Good read.
September 12th, 2016 09:15
lovedud said:
Read it over again several times. Very soothing and beautiful. Good read.
September 12th, 2016 09:15
Wind
Jeff said:
Great write...you certainly have a way with words...nice job
September 10th, 2016 14:07
Jeff said:
Great write...you certainly have a way with words...nice job
September 10th, 2016 14:07
Witches Brew
Augustus said:
I enjoyed this a lot. My only comment is about the last line. The reader is pretty sure this is about 'alcohol'. Would using another word leave it more ambiguous, more alluring? Just a thought.
September 9th, 2016 18:57
Augustus said:
I enjoyed this a lot. My only comment is about the last line. The reader is pretty sure this is about 'alcohol'. Would using another word leave it more ambiguous, more alluring? Just a thought.
September 9th, 2016 18:57
Feast Or Famine
Frances.Zacharias97 said:
I don't know what to say. the writing,the wording,the feelings they are so on point and out of this world good. Giving inspiration left and right!
September 8th, 2016 02:19
Frances.Zacharias97 said:
I don't know what to say. the writing,the wording,the feelings they are so on point and out of this world good. Giving inspiration left and right!
September 8th, 2016 02:19
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