Comments received on poems by lilmoonxx
Gentle Anchor
sorenbarrett said:
We all need an anchor and a guiding light. Well written
August 10th, 2026 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
We all need an anchor and a guiding light. Well written
August 10th, 2026 10:59
Six Stars, One Sky
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poetic expression of unity set in rhyme. Well done
July 29th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poetic expression of unity set in rhyme. Well done
July 29th, 2026 04:12
Choose you again
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of a choice not regretted. Nicely rhymed and written
July 25th, 2026 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of a choice not regretted. Nicely rhymed and written
July 25th, 2026 14:48
Opposite Poles
RSM0812 said:
Wilted strangers finding love. Good emotion and rhyming scheme.
July 23rd, 2026 05:44
RSM0812 said:
Wilted strangers finding love. Good emotion and rhyming scheme.
July 23rd, 2026 05:44
Warmth in the Cold
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme and meter make this poem intriguing and the metaphor of footsteps in the snow gives it some depth while the last line gives it an innocent brightness. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme and meter make this poem intriguing and the metaphor of footsteps in the snow gives it some depth while the last line gives it an innocent brightness. Nicely done
July 23rd, 2026 04:18
Opposite Poles
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites attract and in this case combine to make a greater force to overcome. Nicely done
July 22nd, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Opposites attract and in this case combine to make a greater force to overcome. Nicely done
July 22nd, 2026 04:40
First Steps
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write on the changing winds of fortune. Well written
July 21st, 2026 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write on the changing winds of fortune. Well written
July 21st, 2026 09:49
The Phantom Buzz
sorenbarrett said:
A sad feeling that of a call that doesn\'t come. It sends a message louder than the ring of any phone. Well written with good rhyme and meter. Nicely done
July 20th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A sad feeling that of a call that doesn\'t come. It sends a message louder than the ring of any phone. Well written with good rhyme and meter. Nicely done
July 20th, 2026 04:29
Graveyard of Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
A clever allegory with good imagery gives life to this poem. Nicely done
June 13th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A clever allegory with good imagery gives life to this poem. Nicely done
June 13th, 2026 04:16
Page 100
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice senryu and it would seem the answer is page one
May 17th, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice senryu and it would seem the answer is page one
May 17th, 2026 06:27
The Quiet Middle
Atticus_made said:
Love it! I understand the stress, it\'s the same here too, I only have time to comment rather than write my own poem. I hope life gets smoother for you!
May 6th, 2026 02:14
Atticus_made said:
Love it! I understand the stress, it\'s the same here too, I only have time to comment rather than write my own poem. I hope life gets smoother for you!
May 6th, 2026 02:14
The Quiet Middle
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition in this poem of something missing and it is yourself. Well done
May 5th, 2026 20:16
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition in this poem of something missing and it is yourself. Well done
May 5th, 2026 20:16
The Screen Glare
sorenbarrett said:
An electronic life that is far from reality but is reality. Well done
April 19th, 2026 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
An electronic life that is far from reality but is reality. Well done
April 19th, 2026 15:02
The Bus Stop Ghost
marissa said:
This is so short but so painfully intense for me,i love and hate how it made me feel.
April 18th, 2026 14:57
marissa said:
This is so short but so painfully intense for me,i love and hate how it made me feel.
April 18th, 2026 14:57
The Bus Stop Ghost
sorenbarrett said:
Relationships change but memories and emotions remain. Nicely said
April 18th, 2026 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
Relationships change but memories and emotions remain. Nicely said
April 18th, 2026 12:39
The Low Volume
sorenbarrett said:
One\'s mind retreats into one\'s own world in the interpretation of another\'s words. Nicely written
April 17th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
One\'s mind retreats into one\'s own world in the interpretation of another\'s words. Nicely written
April 17th, 2026 09:37
The Low Volume
Friendship said:
Nicely said, the feeling of being lost into ones world
April 17th, 2026 09:07
Friendship said:
Nicely said, the feeling of being lost into ones world
April 17th, 2026 09:07
The Shared Setlist
sorenbarrett said:
Something to share makes us the same. Nicely written
April 16th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Something to share makes us the same. Nicely written
April 16th, 2026 04:26
The Shared Setlist
Atticus_made said:
very nice! I enjoy the descriptiveness of it all as well
April 16th, 2026 02:45
Atticus_made said:
very nice! I enjoy the descriptiveness of it all as well
April 16th, 2026 02:45
The Photo in the Case
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the poem of one that idolizes another to who they are unknown and the mere picture of them brightens the day. Nicely written
April 10th, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the poem of one that idolizes another to who they are unknown and the mere picture of them brightens the day. Nicely written
April 10th, 2026 05:18
The 10% Battery
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you one oof those people who lights up their phone in the middle of a performance?? Oh well, it probably wasn\'t a symphony concert.....
March 30th, 2026 07:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you one oof those people who lights up their phone in the middle of a performance?? Oh well, it probably wasn\'t a symphony concert.....
March 30th, 2026 07:09
The 10% Battery
sorenbarrett said:
A most identifiable poem of trying to preserve the moment for latter. Most all of us at one time or another have recorded or at least taken pictures of an event and then I ask myself how often do I go back and watch it. The idea of the battery being on red gives it urgency of whether something will be lost but memories continue whether recorded or not. Well done
March 30th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most identifiable poem of trying to preserve the moment for latter. Most all of us at one time or another have recorded or at least taken pictures of an event and then I ask myself how often do I go back and watch it. The idea of the battery being on red gives it urgency of whether something will be lost but memories continue whether recorded or not. Well done
March 30th, 2026 03:54
The Introvert’s Signal
Doggerel Dave said:
Only just bumped into you. Seems you specialise in short moments in someone\'s life (presumably yours), that i find quite real, even if they weren\'t mine.
March 29th, 2026 17:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Only just bumped into you. Seems you specialise in short moments in someone\'s life (presumably yours), that i find quite real, even if they weren\'t mine.
March 29th, 2026 17:58
The Introvert’s Signal
sorenbarrett said:
It speaks to the timid inner self that wishes that someone else would make the first advance. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
It speaks to the timid inner self that wishes that someone else would make the first advance. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 07:15
The Introvert’s Signal
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes it’s quite difficult to make conversation if your feeling certain ways .. or sometimes we just feel we have nothing to say .
March 29th, 2026 06:43
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes it’s quite difficult to make conversation if your feeling certain ways .. or sometimes we just feel we have nothing to say .
March 29th, 2026 06:43
The Practice Choreo
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely work. How many of us have done this and it take work, time and patience as well as attention to detail to get it right. Well done
March 28th, 2026 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely work. How many of us have done this and it take work, time and patience as well as attention to detail to get it right. Well done
March 28th, 2026 12:30
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