Comments received on poems by lilmoonxx
The Photo in the Case
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the poem of one that idolizes another to who they are unknown and the mere picture of them brightens the day. Nicely written
April 10th, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the poem of one that idolizes another to who they are unknown and the mere picture of them brightens the day. Nicely written
April 10th, 2026 05:18
The 10% Battery
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you one oof those people who lights up their phone in the middle of a performance?? Oh well, it probably wasn\'t a symphony concert.....
March 30th, 2026 07:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you one oof those people who lights up their phone in the middle of a performance?? Oh well, it probably wasn\'t a symphony concert.....
March 30th, 2026 07:09
The 10% Battery
sorenbarrett said:
A most identifiable poem of trying to preserve the moment for latter. Most all of us at one time or another have recorded or at least taken pictures of an event and then I ask myself how often do I go back and watch it. The idea of the battery being on red gives it urgency of whether something will be lost but memories continue whether recorded or not. Well done
March 30th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most identifiable poem of trying to preserve the moment for latter. Most all of us at one time or another have recorded or at least taken pictures of an event and then I ask myself how often do I go back and watch it. The idea of the battery being on red gives it urgency of whether something will be lost but memories continue whether recorded or not. Well done
March 30th, 2026 03:54
The Introvert’s Signal
Doggerel Dave said:
Only just bumped into you. Seems you specialise in short moments in someone\'s life (presumably yours), that i find quite real, even if they weren\'t mine.
March 29th, 2026 17:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Only just bumped into you. Seems you specialise in short moments in someone\'s life (presumably yours), that i find quite real, even if they weren\'t mine.
March 29th, 2026 17:58
The Introvert’s Signal
sorenbarrett said:
It speaks to the timid inner self that wishes that someone else would make the first advance. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
It speaks to the timid inner self that wishes that someone else would make the first advance. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 07:15
The Introvert’s Signal
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes it’s quite difficult to make conversation if your feeling certain ways .. or sometimes we just feel we have nothing to say .
March 29th, 2026 06:43
Caring dove said:
Well sometimes it’s quite difficult to make conversation if your feeling certain ways .. or sometimes we just feel we have nothing to say .
March 29th, 2026 06:43
The Practice Choreo
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely work. How many of us have done this and it take work, time and patience as well as attention to detail to get it right. Well done
March 28th, 2026 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely work. How many of us have done this and it take work, time and patience as well as attention to detail to get it right. Well done
March 28th, 2026 12:30
The Room at Night
sorenbarrett said:
In a modern world where change is accelerated and it seems nothing stays the same we grasp at some object of constancy and in this poem it is the posters. How do we divest ourselves of all that is familiar? A lovely write that I could feel. Such a lovely concrete metaphor a fave
March 27th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
In a modern world where change is accelerated and it seems nothing stays the same we grasp at some object of constancy and in this poem it is the posters. How do we divest ourselves of all that is familiar? A lovely write that I could feel. Such a lovely concrete metaphor a fave
March 27th, 2026 12:05
The Rooftop Reach
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting play on words where atmosphere can be literal in a meteoric manner of metaphoric in an emotional manner. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting play on words where atmosphere can be literal in a meteoric manner of metaphoric in an emotional manner. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 04:34
The Shared Earbud
sorenbarrett said:
A cute metaphor that ties the poem together. It is upbeat and bright. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
A cute metaphor that ties the poem together. It is upbeat and bright. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2026 04:22
The Intersection
sorenbarrett said:
I have been reminded of my daydreaming at a green light by a horn behind me and know what it is to be startled out of a day dream. Nice
March 21st, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
I have been reminded of my daydreaming at a green light by a horn behind me and know what it is to be startled out of a day dream. Nice
March 21st, 2026 04:13
The Unplanned Path
sorenbarrett said:
This could be anything from loose time with a friend to eloping with a lover with no place to go and no money. Well done
March 20th, 2026 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
This could be anything from loose time with a friend to eloping with a lover with no place to go and no money. Well done
March 20th, 2026 14:07
The Static Reset
Doggerel Dave said:
So that\'s what it must be like....
Well penned rhymer which gives me insight into the experience of all (some?) of those folks I see everywhere plugged in.
March 19th, 2026 16:33
Doggerel Dave said:
So that\'s what it must be like....
Well penned rhymer which gives me insight into the experience of all (some?) of those folks I see everywhere plugged in.
March 19th, 2026 16:33
The Static Reset
sorenbarrett said:
What an experience coming back from that world. Nicely written
March 19th, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
What an experience coming back from that world. Nicely written
March 19th, 2026 09:48
The 3 PM Sunlight
Doggerel Dave said:
You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot.
I\'m sure you have more to say - could we not hear from you in responses to commentary on your own work?
March 17th, 2026 20:05
Doggerel Dave said:
You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot.
I\'m sure you have more to say - could we not hear from you in responses to commentary on your own work?
March 17th, 2026 20:05
The 3 PM Sunlight
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a splendid example of how the most simple can be made poetic and lovely. Loved it
March 17th, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a splendid example of how the most simple can be made poetic and lovely. Loved it
March 17th, 2026 05:58
The Letter
sorenbarrett said:
There are feelings of a broken promise in this write and the sense of a broken heart. Well written
March 16th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
There are feelings of a broken promise in this write and the sense of a broken heart. Well written
March 16th, 2026 04:45
The Narrowed Line
sorenbarrett said:
Other than it having to do with time You have me on this one and its various symbols. Good rhyme
March 15th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Other than it having to do with time You have me on this one and its various symbols. Good rhyme
March 15th, 2026 04:04
𝖳𝗁𝖾 𝖬𝗂𝗌𝗌𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝖥𝗅𝖺𝗆𝖾
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hold expectation and the wait is anticipation congealed. Nicely expressed a moment frozen in time.
March 13th, 2026 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hold expectation and the wait is anticipation congealed. Nicely expressed a moment frozen in time.
March 13th, 2026 16:37
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a sad and heavy tone of meaninglessness and without direction. It is an existential horror show. Well written it meanders through primitive fears subdued but in the background of our minds. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a sad and heavy tone of meaninglessness and without direction. It is an existential horror show. Well written it meanders through primitive fears subdued but in the background of our minds. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:51
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