Comments received on poems by lilmoonxx
The Charcoal Weight
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write a metaphor that lingers like the warmth of the sweater. Feelings linger too with their warmth of memory. A most tender and warm read that gives meaning to a gift be it a sweater or loving care. A fave
March 3rd, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write a metaphor that lingers like the warmth of the sweater. Feelings linger too with their warmth of memory. A most tender and warm read that gives meaning to a gift be it a sweater or loving care. A fave
March 3rd, 2026 05:59
First Promise
sorenbarrett said:
I like the idea of a secret melting on a tongue. Very visceral and most metaphorical as well. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
I like the idea of a secret melting on a tongue. Very visceral and most metaphorical as well. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 11:41
The Blue Hour
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects a sense of the inevitable seen as sadness and loneliness. It is dreary and as gray as the sky. A blue write
March 1st, 2026 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects a sense of the inevitable seen as sadness and loneliness. It is dreary and as gray as the sky. A blue write
March 1st, 2026 05:50
Threads of the Stray
Atticus_made said:
A starting of a story I believe? I would love to read it all!
February 23rd, 2026 03:56
Atticus_made said:
A starting of a story I believe? I would love to read it all!
February 23rd, 2026 03:56
The Tasting
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of Karma in this poem and it leaves a feeling of warm satisfaction. Well written
February 22nd, 2026 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of Karma in this poem and it leaves a feeling of warm satisfaction. Well written
February 22nd, 2026 15:08
The only one shivering
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of innocence the gaining of knowledge has a cost that is heavy. A lovely poem
February 20th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of innocence the gaining of knowledge has a cost that is heavy. A lovely poem
February 20th, 2026 12:34
The only one shivering
Caring dove said:
This writing seems bit similar to someone who used to write on here .. ‘ petrichor of love ‘ but they deleted their ‘ profile ‘ I thought they were someone I knew ..
February 20th, 2026 11:58
Caring dove said:
This writing seems bit similar to someone who used to write on here .. ‘ petrichor of love ‘ but they deleted their ‘ profile ‘ I thought they were someone I knew ..
February 20th, 2026 11:58
Threads of the Stray
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully written piece that employs wonderful meter and rhyme to tell its tale, a fantasy carved out of words leaving a cavern for interpretation. A fave
February 18th, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully written piece that employs wonderful meter and rhyme to tell its tale, a fantasy carved out of words leaving a cavern for interpretation. A fave
February 18th, 2026 10:40
The Last Inch of the Magic
sorenbarrett said:
Such a charming way of describing aging and growing in size and understanding. A fave
February 17th, 2026 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
Such a charming way of describing aging and growing in size and understanding. A fave
February 17th, 2026 13:49
The Geometry of a Teen
sorenbarrett said:
No one remembers their first steps but watching others they are shaky, unsteady and although some arise and take off like a colt most suffer numerous falls and so it is with our social and emotional legs. Learning to walk is a process. Nicely written this poem speaks of a moments recognition of this step
February 15th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
No one remembers their first steps but watching others they are shaky, unsteady and although some arise and take off like a colt most suffer numerous falls and so it is with our social and emotional legs. Learning to walk is a process. Nicely written this poem speaks of a moments recognition of this step
February 15th, 2026 04:17
The Geometry of a Teen
Lorenz said:
A poet feels always a stranger to all skin !
February 15th, 2026 01:39
Lorenz said:
A poet feels always a stranger to all skin !
February 15th, 2026 01:39
The Map
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and clever in its shortness it says all that it needs to say. Loved it
February 14th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and clever in its shortness it says all that it needs to say. Loved it
February 14th, 2026 04:25
The Unspoken Centre
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic riddle of astrological proportions and amorous intent. Beautifully presented in soothing rhyme it flows like the procession of the stars. Lovely
February 13th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic riddle of astrological proportions and amorous intent. Beautifully presented in soothing rhyme it flows like the procession of the stars. Lovely
February 13th, 2026 04:29
The Unspoken Centre
Atticus_made said:
I would say this is similar to a love poem, no? If it is a continuation of the one before, if you didnt know, you are able to classify your poetry so more people can find it! Amazing work.
February 13th, 2026 03:27
Atticus_made said:
I would say this is similar to a love poem, no? If it is a continuation of the one before, if you didnt know, you are able to classify your poetry so more people can find it! Amazing work.
February 13th, 2026 03:27
Eternal Eclipse - The Poem
Friendship said:
Well done on your first poem, never stop. Your revolves around love, loss, memory, and the cyclical nature of emotions. It delves into themes of how love is remembered, the pain it can cause, and the idea that love transcends physical presence, existing in the natural rhythm of life.
February 12th, 2026 18:47
Friendship said:
Well done on your first poem, never stop. Your revolves around love, loss, memory, and the cyclical nature of emotions. It delves into themes of how love is remembered, the pain it can cause, and the idea that love transcends physical presence, existing in the natural rhythm of life.
February 12th, 2026 18:47
Eternal Eclipse - The Poem
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of love and its natural abode. Well written
February 12th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely poem of love and its natural abode. Well written
February 12th, 2026 07:15
Eternal Eclipse - The Poem
Atticus_made said:
it\'s your first poem on here correct? It\'s very simple yet holds a deeper meaning, I enjoy reading through it! Good luck for further inspiration!
February 12th, 2026 06:24
Atticus_made said:
it\'s your first poem on here correct? It\'s very simple yet holds a deeper meaning, I enjoy reading through it! Good luck for further inspiration!
February 12th, 2026 06:24
