Comments received on poems by lilmoonxx
The Rooftop Reach
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting play on words where atmosphere can be literal in a meteoric manner of metaphoric in an emotional manner. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting play on words where atmosphere can be literal in a meteoric manner of metaphoric in an emotional manner. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 04:34
The Shared Earbud
sorenbarrett said:
A cute metaphor that ties the poem together. It is upbeat and bright. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
A cute metaphor that ties the poem together. It is upbeat and bright. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2026 04:22
The Intersection
sorenbarrett said:
I have been reminded of my daydreaming at a green light by a horn behind me and know what it is to be startled out of a day dream. Nice
March 21st, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
I have been reminded of my daydreaming at a green light by a horn behind me and know what it is to be startled out of a day dream. Nice
March 21st, 2026 04:13
The Unplanned Path
sorenbarrett said:
This could be anything from loose time with a friend to eloping with a lover with no place to go and no money. Well done
March 20th, 2026 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
This could be anything from loose time with a friend to eloping with a lover with no place to go and no money. Well done
March 20th, 2026 14:07
The Static Reset
Doggerel Dave said:
So that\'s what it must be like....
Well penned rhymer which gives me insight into the experience of all (some?) of those folks I see everywhere plugged in.
March 19th, 2026 16:33
Doggerel Dave said:
So that\'s what it must be like....
Well penned rhymer which gives me insight into the experience of all (some?) of those folks I see everywhere plugged in.
March 19th, 2026 16:33
The Static Reset
sorenbarrett said:
What an experience coming back from that world. Nicely written
March 19th, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
What an experience coming back from that world. Nicely written
March 19th, 2026 09:48
The 3 PM Sunlight
Doggerel Dave said:
You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot.
I\'m sure you have more to say - could we not hear from you in responses to commentary on your own work?
March 17th, 2026 20:05
Doggerel Dave said:
You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot.
I\'m sure you have more to say - could we not hear from you in responses to commentary on your own work?
March 17th, 2026 20:05
The 3 PM Sunlight
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a splendid example of how the most simple can be made poetic and lovely. Loved it
March 17th, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a splendid example of how the most simple can be made poetic and lovely. Loved it
March 17th, 2026 05:58
The Letter
sorenbarrett said:
There are feelings of a broken promise in this write and the sense of a broken heart. Well written
March 16th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
There are feelings of a broken promise in this write and the sense of a broken heart. Well written
March 16th, 2026 04:45
The Narrowed Line
sorenbarrett said:
Other than it having to do with time You have me on this one and its various symbols. Good rhyme
March 15th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Other than it having to do with time You have me on this one and its various symbols. Good rhyme
March 15th, 2026 04:04
๐ณ๐๐พ ๐ฌ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ฅ๐
๐บ๐๐พ
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hold expectation and the wait is anticipation congealed. Nicely expressed a moment frozen in time.
March 13th, 2026 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hold expectation and the wait is anticipation congealed. Nicely expressed a moment frozen in time.
March 13th, 2026 16:37
๐ฌโโ๐ทโโ๐ชโโ๐พโ โ๐ชโโ๐ฝโโ๐ญโโ๐ฆโโ๐บโโ๐ธโโ๐นโโ๐ฎโโ๐ดโโ๐ณโ
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a sad and heavy tone of meaninglessness and without direction. It is an existential horror show. Well written it meanders through primitive fears subdued but in the background of our minds. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a sad and heavy tone of meaninglessness and without direction. It is an existential horror show. Well written it meanders through primitive fears subdued but in the background of our minds. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:51
The Verdict
Atticus_made said:
ahhh, a small reflection? Did you perhaps get fired? I understand how it can feel, a rather silly poem, I like it, very whimsy
March 9th, 2026 06:07
Atticus_made said:
ahhh, a small reflection? Did you perhaps get fired? I understand how it can feel, a rather silly poem, I like it, very whimsy
March 9th, 2026 06:07
The Verdict
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t be fooled by appearances is what comes to me. Also one might be polite in carrying out savage duties. Well written
March 9th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t be fooled by appearances is what comes to me. Also one might be polite in carrying out savage duties. Well written
March 9th, 2026 04:05
The Eighth Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of something beyond unidentifiable but present. Nicely worded it keeps the tension. Well done
March 8th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of something beyond unidentifiable but present. Nicely worded it keeps the tension. Well done
March 8th, 2026 13:40
The Silver Rim
sorenbarrett said:
It is the incongruence of images and interactions the make this surreal poem so enigmatic that it sticks in the brain and won\'t let go. Nicely done
March 7th, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
It is the incongruence of images and interactions the make this surreal poem so enigmatic that it sticks in the brain and won\'t let go. Nicely done
March 7th, 2026 03:37
แดสแด แดกษชษดแด
แดแดก สแด๊ฐสแดแดแดษชแดษด
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is some say home is where the heart is you say home is where the mind is. Nicely done
March 5th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is some say home is where the heart is you say home is where the mind is. Nicely done
March 5th, 2026 04:55
แดสแด แดกษชษดแด
แดแดก สแด๊ฐสแดแดแดษชแดษด
Atticus_made said:
very smooth to read through! I see you discovere dhow to change your fonts as well, it suits the poem
March 5th, 2026 04:26
Atticus_made said:
very smooth to read through! I see you discovere dhow to change your fonts as well, it suits the poem
March 5th, 2026 04:26
The Charcoal Weight
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write a metaphor that lingers like the warmth of the sweater. Feelings linger too with their warmth of memory. A most tender and warm read that gives meaning to a gift be it a sweater or loving care. A fave
March 3rd, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write a metaphor that lingers like the warmth of the sweater. Feelings linger too with their warmth of memory. A most tender and warm read that gives meaning to a gift be it a sweater or loving care. A fave
March 3rd, 2026 05:59
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