Comments received on poems by lilmoonxx
The 3 PM Sunlight
Doggerel Dave said:
You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot.
I\'m sure you have more to say - could we not hear from you in responses to commentary on your own work?
March 17th, 2026 20:05
Doggerel Dave said:
You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot.
I\'m sure you have more to say - could we not hear from you in responses to commentary on your own work?
March 17th, 2026 20:05
The 3 PM Sunlight
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a splendid example of how the most simple can be made poetic and lovely. Loved it
March 17th, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a splendid example of how the most simple can be made poetic and lovely. Loved it
March 17th, 2026 05:58
The Letter
sorenbarrett said:
There are feelings of a broken promise in this write and the sense of a broken heart. Well written
March 16th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
There are feelings of a broken promise in this write and the sense of a broken heart. Well written
March 16th, 2026 04:45
The Narrowed Line
sorenbarrett said:
Other than it having to do with time You have me on this one and its various symbols. Good rhyme
March 15th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Other than it having to do with time You have me on this one and its various symbols. Good rhyme
March 15th, 2026 04:04
๐ณ๐๐พ ๐ฌ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ฅ๐
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sorenbarrett said:
This poem hold expectation and the wait is anticipation congealed. Nicely expressed a moment frozen in time.
March 13th, 2026 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hold expectation and the wait is anticipation congealed. Nicely expressed a moment frozen in time.
March 13th, 2026 16:37
๐ฌโโ๐ทโโ๐ชโโ๐พโ โ๐ชโโ๐ฝโโ๐ญโโ๐ฆโโ๐บโโ๐ธโโ๐นโโ๐ฎโโ๐ดโโ๐ณโ
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a sad and heavy tone of meaninglessness and without direction. It is an existential horror show. Well written it meanders through primitive fears subdued but in the background of our minds. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a sad and heavy tone of meaninglessness and without direction. It is an existential horror show. Well written it meanders through primitive fears subdued but in the background of our minds. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:51
The Verdict
Atticus_made said:
ahhh, a small reflection? Did you perhaps get fired? I understand how it can feel, a rather silly poem, I like it, very whimsy
March 9th, 2026 06:07
Atticus_made said:
ahhh, a small reflection? Did you perhaps get fired? I understand how it can feel, a rather silly poem, I like it, very whimsy
March 9th, 2026 06:07
The Verdict
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t be fooled by appearances is what comes to me. Also one might be polite in carrying out savage duties. Well written
March 9th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t be fooled by appearances is what comes to me. Also one might be polite in carrying out savage duties. Well written
March 9th, 2026 04:05
The Eighth Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of something beyond unidentifiable but present. Nicely worded it keeps the tension. Well done
March 8th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of something beyond unidentifiable but present. Nicely worded it keeps the tension. Well done
March 8th, 2026 13:40
The Silver Rim
sorenbarrett said:
It is the incongruence of images and interactions the make this surreal poem so enigmatic that it sticks in the brain and won\'t let go. Nicely done
March 7th, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
It is the incongruence of images and interactions the make this surreal poem so enigmatic that it sticks in the brain and won\'t let go. Nicely done
March 7th, 2026 03:37
แดสแด แดกษชษดแด
แดแดก สแด๊ฐสแดแดแดษชแดษด
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is some say home is where the heart is you say home is where the mind is. Nicely done
March 5th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is some say home is where the heart is you say home is where the mind is. Nicely done
March 5th, 2026 04:55
แดสแด แดกษชษดแด
แดแดก สแด๊ฐสแดแดแดษชแดษด
Atticus_made said:
very smooth to read through! I see you discovere dhow to change your fonts as well, it suits the poem
March 5th, 2026 04:26
Atticus_made said:
very smooth to read through! I see you discovere dhow to change your fonts as well, it suits the poem
March 5th, 2026 04:26
The Charcoal Weight
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write a metaphor that lingers like the warmth of the sweater. Feelings linger too with their warmth of memory. A most tender and warm read that gives meaning to a gift be it a sweater or loving care. A fave
March 3rd, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write a metaphor that lingers like the warmth of the sweater. Feelings linger too with their warmth of memory. A most tender and warm read that gives meaning to a gift be it a sweater or loving care. A fave
March 3rd, 2026 05:59
First Promise
sorenbarrett said:
I like the idea of a secret melting on a tongue. Very visceral and most metaphorical as well. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
I like the idea of a secret melting on a tongue. Very visceral and most metaphorical as well. Lovely
March 2nd, 2026 11:41
The Blue Hour
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects a sense of the inevitable seen as sadness and loneliness. It is dreary and as gray as the sky. A blue write
March 1st, 2026 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects a sense of the inevitable seen as sadness and loneliness. It is dreary and as gray as the sky. A blue write
March 1st, 2026 05:50
Threads of the Stray
Atticus_made said:
A starting of a story I believe? I would love to read it all!
February 23rd, 2026 03:56
Atticus_made said:
A starting of a story I believe? I would love to read it all!
February 23rd, 2026 03:56
The Tasting
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of Karma in this poem and it leaves a feeling of warm satisfaction. Well written
February 22nd, 2026 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of Karma in this poem and it leaves a feeling of warm satisfaction. Well written
February 22nd, 2026 15:08
The only one shivering
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of innocence the gaining of knowledge has a cost that is heavy. A lovely poem
February 20th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of innocence the gaining of knowledge has a cost that is heavy. A lovely poem
February 20th, 2026 12:34
The only one shivering
Caring dove said:
This writing seems bit similar to someone who used to write on here .. โ petrichor of love โ but they deleted their โ profile โ I thought they were someone I knew ..
February 20th, 2026 11:58
Caring dove said:
This writing seems bit similar to someone who used to write on here .. โ petrichor of love โ but they deleted their โ profile โ I thought they were someone I knew ..
February 20th, 2026 11:58
Threads of the Stray
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully written piece that employs wonderful meter and rhyme to tell its tale, a fantasy carved out of words leaving a cavern for interpretation. A fave
February 18th, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully written piece that employs wonderful meter and rhyme to tell its tale, a fantasy carved out of words leaving a cavern for interpretation. A fave
February 18th, 2026 10:40
The Last Inch of the Magic
sorenbarrett said:
Such a charming way of describing aging and growing in size and understanding. A fave
February 17th, 2026 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
Such a charming way of describing aging and growing in size and understanding. A fave
February 17th, 2026 13:49
The Geometry of a Teen
sorenbarrett said:
No one remembers their first steps but watching others they are shaky, unsteady and although some arise and take off like a colt most suffer numerous falls and so it is with our social and emotional legs. Learning to walk is a process. Nicely written this poem speaks of a moments recognition of this step
February 15th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
No one remembers their first steps but watching others they are shaky, unsteady and although some arise and take off like a colt most suffer numerous falls and so it is with our social and emotional legs. Learning to walk is a process. Nicely written this poem speaks of a moments recognition of this step
February 15th, 2026 04:17
The Geometry of a Teen
Lorenz said:
A poet feels always a stranger to all skin !
February 15th, 2026 01:39
Lorenz said:
A poet feels always a stranger to all skin !
February 15th, 2026 01:39
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