Comments received on poems by Carmen Luca
Beneath the tape
sorenbarrett said:
A deep reflection of the mask we wear and what behavior reveals the face behind it. Nicely written
March 21st, 2026 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
A deep reflection of the mask we wear and what behavior reveals the face behind it. Nicely written
March 21st, 2026 07:38
Winter
sorenbarrett said:
The poem as deep as the question slowly melts line by line. Barefoot, we all come bare into this life literally and mentally as well. Memories of before dead and break underfoot melting away, We do indeed follow the water\'s course seeking the lowest level through the easiest manner. Flesh mortal becomes ashes to ashes dust to dust. We loose perspective that we are all the same blinded as to our brotherhood we are egocentric and prejudiced. A lovely poem
March 20th, 2026 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
The poem as deep as the question slowly melts line by line. Barefoot, we all come bare into this life literally and mentally as well. Memories of before dead and break underfoot melting away, We do indeed follow the water\'s course seeking the lowest level through the easiest manner. Flesh mortal becomes ashes to ashes dust to dust. We loose perspective that we are all the same blinded as to our brotherhood we are egocentric and prejudiced. A lovely poem
March 20th, 2026 06:38
Wings forgotten
RSM0812 said:
This reminds me of pandoras box. A skeleton key that opens many and all doors. I enjoyed the ✍️
March 20th, 2026 06:29
RSM0812 said:
This reminds me of pandoras box. A skeleton key that opens many and all doors. I enjoyed the ✍️
March 20th, 2026 06:29
Wings forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! And indeed it is true the key is inside of each of us. We choose which door to open and what to see. A lovely write
March 19th, 2026 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! And indeed it is true the key is inside of each of us. We choose which door to open and what to see. A lovely write
March 19th, 2026 14:07
One last chat
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and melancholic it speaks to a loss too young to suffer. A moving poem
March 17th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and melancholic it speaks to a loss too young to suffer. A moving poem
March 17th, 2026 05:01
The hollow heart
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind about it meaning a lot - got anyone in mind?
March 16th, 2026 18:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind about it meaning a lot - got anyone in mind?
March 16th, 2026 18:23
The hollow heart
sorenbarrett said:
The mind forgets its age feeling but a child. It does not notice that the body\'s warrantee is up. Well crafted
March 16th, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
The mind forgets its age feeling but a child. It does not notice that the body\'s warrantee is up. Well crafted
March 16th, 2026 08:19
The House Within
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of being and living a wonderful construction of where one lives. Nice
March 15th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor of being and living a wonderful construction of where one lives. Nice
March 15th, 2026 13:43
Fleeting ideas
Doggerel Dave said:
Most poetic justifications (with one or two honourable exceptions) of Poetry bore me witless I must confess. This one (beware: interpretation and justification) is most light and subtle. It wins the day.
March 14th, 2026 18:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Most poetic justifications (with one or two honourable exceptions) of Poetry bore me witless I must confess. This one (beware: interpretation and justification) is most light and subtle. It wins the day.
March 14th, 2026 18:38
Fleeting ideas
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a wistful reflection it whispers to me out of shadows of thought. Very nicely written
March 14th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a wistful reflection it whispers to me out of shadows of thought. Very nicely written
March 14th, 2026 03:55
The Alley
sorenbarrett said:
The scene set the atmosphere well developed and tension high the poem takes off. In the darkness a sound but soon identified as something nonthreatening and familiar. Well done
March 13th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
The scene set the atmosphere well developed and tension high the poem takes off. In the darkness a sound but soon identified as something nonthreatening and familiar. Well done
March 13th, 2026 06:48
