Comments received on poems by Khansa Akhtar
\"WHAT IF?\"
sorenbarrett said:
No more conditional but now certain changes the mood. Nicely written
July 7th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
No more conditional but now certain changes the mood. Nicely written
July 7th, 2026 09:37
\"hollow WORDS, empty HEART\"
sorenbarrett said:
Some people are not capable of love. Passion filles their world passion of a sexual nature. Love is rare. Passion fooled and fooler itself under the disguise and mask of love plays its part but leaves when the play is over. Well written
July 1st, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Some people are not capable of love. Passion filles their world passion of a sexual nature. Love is rare. Passion fooled and fooler itself under the disguise and mask of love plays its part but leaves when the play is over. Well written
July 1st, 2026 09:31
\" WHAT IF I COULD BE MY OWN BEAUTIFUL STORY\"......part 2 of \"The first glimpse of self love\"
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that at first glance speaks of arrogance then recognition and finally of truth for we are all the most beautiful story that we will ever tell. Very nicely written
June 30th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that at first glance speaks of arrogance then recognition and finally of truth for we are all the most beautiful story that we will ever tell. Very nicely written
June 30th, 2026 14:17
\"I SWEAR\"😭
sorenbarrett said:
The force of desire and the tenderness of poetry. Well done
June 4th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
The force of desire and the tenderness of poetry. Well done
June 4th, 2026 14:17
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sorenbarrett said:
Truer words could not be spoken some pain must be kept private
May 17th, 2026 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
Truer words could not be spoken some pain must be kept private
May 17th, 2026 14:11
\"THE FIRST GLIMPSE OF SELF LOVE\"
sorenbarrett said:
To love another one must love oneself first and this is all about that. Very nicely done
May 9th, 2026 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
To love another one must love oneself first and this is all about that. Very nicely done
May 9th, 2026 19:02
\"THE GIRL WITH BLOOD LIKE NIGHT\"
sorenbarrett said:
The venting of black secrets in poetry is a therapy for the soul. Nicely done
May 6th, 2026 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
The venting of black secrets in poetry is a therapy for the soul. Nicely done
May 6th, 2026 20:45
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Abdullah123 said:
As a pakistani, I thoroughly enjoyed this read. It\'s not often you see ordinary people write poetry in urdu, outside the classical poets (or maybe i live under a rock). Urdu is such a beautifully fluid and poetic language, I truly wish I was proficient enough to write in it. Maybe some day...
great write
May 1st, 2026 08:12
Abdullah123 said:
As a pakistani, I thoroughly enjoyed this read. It\'s not often you see ordinary people write poetry in urdu, outside the classical poets (or maybe i live under a rock). Urdu is such a beautifully fluid and poetic language, I truly wish I was proficient enough to write in it. Maybe some day...
great write
May 1st, 2026 08:12
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sorenbarrett said:
So the closer it is to the wind
Nothing else happened that much.
Two lines that hit me the hardest. Well written
May 1st, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
So the closer it is to the wind
Nothing else happened that much.
Two lines that hit me the hardest. Well written
May 1st, 2026 04:45
مجھے اچھا سا لگتا ہے
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from a distance and feels as if it is a thought whispered to a love listening. Nicely done
April 28th, 2026 20:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from a distance and feels as if it is a thought whispered to a love listening. Nicely done
April 28th, 2026 20:38
I LOVE BUTTERFLIES 🦋🦋
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely love poem where all centers around the object of love. Nicely done
April 26th, 2026 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely love poem where all centers around the object of love. Nicely done
April 26th, 2026 14:43
