Comments received on poems by poetic.jr
Tired -> Safe -> Scared
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the fatigue and pain of loss as well as the fear of dying. Well done
October 11th, 2026 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the fatigue and pain of loss as well as the fear of dying. Well done
October 11th, 2026 14:07
When
sorenbarrett said:
This is dark and spirals downward. A threatening and scarry poem.
October 5th, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
This is dark and spirals downward. A threatening and scarry poem.
October 5th, 2026 09:30
Reflecting
sorenbarrett said:
One often meets oneself coming and going and the greatest monster is ourself. Nicely done
September 18th, 2026 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
One often meets oneself coming and going and the greatest monster is ourself. Nicely done
September 18th, 2026 12:52
4. The Safespace
sorenbarrett said:
Colors, textures, change of season all form a picture of life and nature. Well done
September 17th, 2026 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
Colors, textures, change of season all form a picture of life and nature. Well done
September 17th, 2026 08:03
3. Scared
sorenbarrett said:
Threats make us all long for a safe space. A good write my friend
September 16th, 2026 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Threats make us all long for a safe space. A good write my friend
September 16th, 2026 05:24
2. Control
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a powerful motivator. You have penned it well to express the emotion. Well done
September 15th, 2026 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a powerful motivator. You have penned it well to express the emotion. Well done
September 15th, 2026 08:41
1. Lost
sorenbarrett said:
Balance seems the key all in this poem teetering between falling. Nicely done
September 12th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Balance seems the key all in this poem teetering between falling. Nicely done
September 12th, 2026 04:19
Loss
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parting not forever just till later. Well written
September 9th, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parting not forever just till later. Well written
September 9th, 2026 08:40
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
An act of self immolation graphic and raw. A dark write of pain. Nicely portrayed
August 9th, 2026 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
An act of self immolation graphic and raw. A dark write of pain. Nicely portrayed
August 9th, 2026 12:46
wake up
sorenbarrett said:
Earth as a prison where sleep only serves to dream of escape. A sad write that is dark and seems to lack hope. Well done.
August 8th, 2026 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
Earth as a prison where sleep only serves to dream of escape. A sad write that is dark and seems to lack hope. Well done.
August 8th, 2026 15:36
Time
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of time and lack of its recognition. Nicely done.
August 1st, 2026 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of time and lack of its recognition. Nicely done.
August 1st, 2026 16:54
Interesting
sorenbarrett said:
Once a mental image is formed it takes a miracle to change it. Well written
July 31st, 2026 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Once a mental image is formed it takes a miracle to change it. Well written
July 31st, 2026 08:05
Alive
sorenbarrett said:
Life and death two major differences that may be the same here puzzled. Well written
July 28th, 2026 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
Life and death two major differences that may be the same here puzzled. Well written
July 28th, 2026 19:00
See
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reveals inner thoughts and emotions and drives that need to be countered by avoidance. A situation that is resolved in deterring it. Nicely done.
July 11th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reveals inner thoughts and emotions and drives that need to be countered by avoidance. A situation that is resolved in deterring it. Nicely done.
July 11th, 2026 05:10
Thinking
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that utilizes contrast of all the sounds listed to bring up the silence when it asks are you listening? Well done
July 2nd, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem that utilizes contrast of all the sounds listed to bring up the silence when it asks are you listening? Well done
July 2nd, 2026 08:45
So
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of direction that turns into one of observation. Well done
June 30th, 2026 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of direction that turns into one of observation. Well done
June 30th, 2026 14:18
You
sorenbarrett said:
The build up only for the let down well timed and written
June 25th, 2026 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
The build up only for the let down well timed and written
June 25th, 2026 08:49
How?
ms.divine said:
Love your self first and the rest will follow 💓
Self love it\'s the best love 😘
June 22nd, 2026 09:44
ms.divine said:
Love your self first and the rest will follow 💓
Self love it\'s the best love 😘
June 22nd, 2026 09:44
Me
ms.divine said:
Yes and alchemyzing your negative energy into words instead of whooping someone ass lol stay positive 🖖🏿🕯️🤍
June 21st, 2026 13:57
ms.divine said:
Yes and alchemyzing your negative energy into words instead of whooping someone ass lol stay positive 🖖🏿🕯️🤍
June 21st, 2026 13:57
