Comments received on poems by nataliehughes
Mobile phones
greyguy said:
Good social commentary. As contrary as this is. the people on the sites you criticize are the ones that need to see your poem. Maybe you should post it on Facebook, etc.!
May 26th, 2016 19:44
greyguy said:
Good social commentary. As contrary as this is. the people on the sites you criticize are the ones that need to see your poem. Maybe you should post it on Facebook, etc.!
May 26th, 2016 19:44
Mobile phones
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THE FOBILE MOAN OF A MOBILE PHONE ! Loved your poem NATALIE it echos my sentiments exactly ! I'm 33 BUT I have never owned a Mobile and I never will - too too intrusive ! Your poem is so so dynamic (as befits the topic) pulsating with "good vibrations" rhyme and rhythm. Your pet hates are mine ! i-Pads ~ mobiles ~ i-tunes ~ Facebook - snapchat ~ games ~ sexy selfies ~ we don't need any of these things and lived happy for thousands of years without them. I like my COMPUTER because of MY POETIC SIDE and other PERSON TO PERSON interaction (like my comment on your fantastic poem) but thank GOD it's not portable ! Thanks for sharing - Your Friend BRIAN
May 26th, 2016 06:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THE FOBILE MOAN OF A MOBILE PHONE ! Loved your poem NATALIE it echos my sentiments exactly ! I'm 33 BUT I have never owned a Mobile and I never will - too too intrusive ! Your poem is so so dynamic (as befits the topic) pulsating with "good vibrations" rhyme and rhythm. Your pet hates are mine ! i-Pads ~ mobiles ~ i-tunes ~ Facebook - snapchat ~ games ~ sexy selfies ~ we don't need any of these things and lived happy for thousands of years without them. I like my COMPUTER because of MY POETIC SIDE and other PERSON TO PERSON interaction (like my comment on your fantastic poem) but thank GOD it's not portable ! Thanks for sharing - Your Friend BRIAN
May 26th, 2016 06:06
I keep it inside
John Lee said:
A person may keep it inside but they share the pain all the same. They may feel unloved or unwanted because that door of affection is closed in their heart. But when they're gone, the ones who loved them ask why? Why didn't they just tell us they were hurting? Why didn't they just talk to us? Unfortunately their questions will never be answered. They will still have the pain of the one they loved took their own life and will always blame themselves for it. My children doesn't deserve that pain is why I decided not to take mine.
May 25th, 2016 11:23
John Lee said:
A person may keep it inside but they share the pain all the same. They may feel unloved or unwanted because that door of affection is closed in their heart. But when they're gone, the ones who loved them ask why? Why didn't they just tell us they were hurting? Why didn't they just talk to us? Unfortunately their questions will never be answered. They will still have the pain of the one they loved took their own life and will always blame themselves for it. My children doesn't deserve that pain is why I decided not to take mine.
May 25th, 2016 11:23
I keep it inside
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooh NATALIE such a sad sad poem and so so much INSIDE INFORMATION. I am sure you found the poem cathartic - so thanks for sharing. We do all care and I have put you on my Prayer List for release from the Mental Pain - Your caring Friend BRIAN
May 25th, 2016 09:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooh NATALIE such a sad sad poem and so so much INSIDE INFORMATION. I am sure you found the poem cathartic - so thanks for sharing. We do all care and I have put you on my Prayer List for release from the Mental Pain - Your caring Friend BRIAN
May 25th, 2016 09:32
Broken
Kebiin said:
You have an army of support here because your words are heard here. I've been in your place and poetry was my outlet, I'm not out of the woods yet, this is your starting point and we're all here.
-Kebiin
May 24th, 2016 13:12
Kebiin said:
You have an army of support here because your words are heard here. I've been in your place and poetry was my outlet, I'm not out of the woods yet, this is your starting point and we're all here.
-Kebiin
May 24th, 2016 13:12
Broken
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NATALIE - Your first poem has elegant structure - I love rhyming couplets - but such a sad and broken content. If it's autobiographical I am praying for you - it does sound true. Depression does lead us to drugs and self harm but that is not the answer. We all get depressed but I have a loving Family (Mum & Dad Brother and Sisters) and lots of friends. I do live alone (in a flat) so i have to be careful. If it's about your friend - then love her and be with her - if it's about you then love from Family & Friends is the best cure . Thanks for daring to share - Yours BRIAN
May 24th, 2016 10:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NATALIE - Your first poem has elegant structure - I love rhyming couplets - but such a sad and broken content. If it's autobiographical I am praying for you - it does sound true. Depression does lead us to drugs and self harm but that is not the answer. We all get depressed but I have a loving Family (Mum & Dad Brother and Sisters) and lots of friends. I do live alone (in a flat) so i have to be careful. If it's about your friend - then love her and be with her - if it's about you then love from Family & Friends is the best cure . Thanks for daring to share - Yours BRIAN
May 24th, 2016 10:46
