Comments received on poems by StormInAteacup13
I like you better
sorenbarrett said:
One you love poetically stated. Nicely done.
September 12th, 2026 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
One you love poetically stated. Nicely done.
September 12th, 2026 12:43
Lay your head where my heart used to be
sorenbarrett said:
A cold feeling of loss and a wistful desire for its return but knowledge that it will not come back. Sad
September 11th, 2026 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
A cold feeling of loss and a wistful desire for its return but knowledge that it will not come back. Sad
September 11th, 2026 10:36
Mosquito larvae in my ribs
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as an analogy where mosquitos are most annoying and bring disease the similarity of a larva that must transform into something else to leave its environment is well placed. Nicely done
September 10th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as an analogy where mosquitos are most annoying and bring disease the similarity of a larva that must transform into something else to leave its environment is well placed. Nicely done
September 10th, 2026 04:12
Applaud me while I drown.
sorenbarrett said:
I understand what you are talking about and the job itself. Nicely written I had never thought of the job that way but yes all entertainment jobs are looking for applause from the crowd.
September 7th, 2026 10:03
sorenbarrett said:
I understand what you are talking about and the job itself. Nicely written I had never thought of the job that way but yes all entertainment jobs are looking for applause from the crowd.
September 7th, 2026 10:03
