Comments received on poems by illia
Secret
Noah Malice said:
love the mysterious quality about this....could honestly use more lines, i\'m roped in for the story!
April 10th, 2024 13:25
Noah Malice said:
love the mysterious quality about this....could honestly use more lines, i\'m roped in for the story!
April 10th, 2024 13:25
House
L. B. Mek said:
abbott and costello, would love this I think
\'who\'s on first?\'
...indeed,
and such a fun read, thanks for sharing
March 31st, 2023 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
abbott and costello, would love this I think
\'who\'s on first?\'
...indeed,
and such a fun read, thanks for sharing
March 31st, 2023 04:01
Rewritten history
illia said:
Thank you. It only takes a few lines and the world goes chaotic, all because mass indoctrination is totally invisible and flies under what social media uses as its platform. Genius if it wasn\'t so dismissal don\'t you think?
December 8th, 2022 18:38
illia said:
Thank you. It only takes a few lines and the world goes chaotic, all because mass indoctrination is totally invisible and flies under what social media uses as its platform. Genius if it wasn\'t so dismissal don\'t you think?
December 8th, 2022 18:38
Rewritten history
Doggerel Dave said:
And what passes for truth not worth a candle after that (your poem)
Here are my takes on History, for what they are worth:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-148165
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-142331
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
(Deep history is a concept very few here seem to understand. Not what is happening in the here and now, but how the conflict occurred, from way back.)
Regards, Dave
November 25th, 2022 04:37
Doggerel Dave said:
And what passes for truth not worth a candle after that (your poem)
Here are my takes on History, for what they are worth:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-148165
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-142331
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-143343
(Deep history is a concept very few here seem to understand. Not what is happening in the here and now, but how the conflict occurred, from way back.)
Regards, Dave
November 25th, 2022 04:37
Rewritten history
L. B. Mek said:
great write! thanks for sharing
please forgive me
for attempting a scribbled poetic reply below
I couldn\'t resist:
(Victors, inking insidiously hollow futures
where aftermath bequeaths, consequence
and mantra, regresses empathy \'s influence
so new-born\'s, learn to tighten their fist\'s
before, they open their eyes
then cry out loud, screaming at the fallacy
of walls and roof\'s, an explosion
removed
from becoming hell on earth, bricks
of empire ruins...
yet, parent\'s smile upon a miracle
as representative of all the hope
they surrendered when entering
adulthood\'s, scam of subservience
fitting-in, in a society, anchored
upon drug and alcohol, concussed
mirage, interpretations
of reality\'s inevitability of cyclical
strife;
while older generations, stare up
at that indifferent universe
and wonder, to what end?
is there really, no better way
if, this be by design
and if
by chaotic chance alone, why
must the dice, land
on one\'s
time n again, when
can we get a win
that\'s not a forsaken precursor
to our ensuing demise?
please, anyone - anything
just answer me this...!?)
November 25th, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
great write! thanks for sharing
please forgive me
for attempting a scribbled poetic reply below
I couldn\'t resist:
(Victors, inking insidiously hollow futures
where aftermath bequeaths, consequence
and mantra, regresses empathy \'s influence
so new-born\'s, learn to tighten their fist\'s
before, they open their eyes
then cry out loud, screaming at the fallacy
of walls and roof\'s, an explosion
removed
from becoming hell on earth, bricks
of empire ruins...
yet, parent\'s smile upon a miracle
as representative of all the hope
they surrendered when entering
adulthood\'s, scam of subservience
fitting-in, in a society, anchored
upon drug and alcohol, concussed
mirage, interpretations
of reality\'s inevitability of cyclical
strife;
while older generations, stare up
at that indifferent universe
and wonder, to what end?
is there really, no better way
if, this be by design
and if
by chaotic chance alone, why
must the dice, land
on one\'s
time n again, when
can we get a win
that\'s not a forsaken precursor
to our ensuing demise?
please, anyone - anything
just answer me this...!?)
November 25th, 2022 04:28
Necessary condition
dusk arising said:
if only it were so, what a different existence we would all enjoy
November 9th, 2022 08:39
dusk arising said:
if only it were so, what a different existence we would all enjoy
November 9th, 2022 08:39
Absolute beginner
illia said:
Thanks for your comment. It\'s more not the fool rather being believed as such. The masks and many faces. Beginning to end, these tools will be used, Being absolute in one\'s convictions no matter how one\'s perceived by others, who could possibly be the fools.
May 28th, 2022 19:25
illia said:
Thanks for your comment. It\'s more not the fool rather being believed as such. The masks and many faces. Beginning to end, these tools will be used, Being absolute in one\'s convictions no matter how one\'s perceived by others, who could possibly be the fools.
May 28th, 2022 19:25
Absolute beginner
Noah Malice said:
lovely rhymes. speaking as someone who loves to learn new things, i\'ll say it sometimes takes being an absolute fool to do so. well conveyed.
May 28th, 2022 18:46
Noah Malice said:
lovely rhymes. speaking as someone who loves to learn new things, i\'ll say it sometimes takes being an absolute fool to do so. well conveyed.
May 28th, 2022 18:46
Rest in peace
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully conceptualised
and then written, so well
if someone
wanted to base their philosophy
on life, based on these words
I wouldn\'t be surprised
clearly, your poetic Genius
swims, at that deep end
of yearning, for existence\'s
meaning...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 31st, 2022 02:30
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully conceptualised
and then written, so well
if someone
wanted to base their philosophy
on life, based on these words
I wouldn\'t be surprised
clearly, your poetic Genius
swims, at that deep end
of yearning, for existence\'s
meaning...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 31st, 2022 02:30
Rest in peace
illia said:
Much appreciated. My words are my way of expressing the way life is, every part of life including the inevitable, death is beautiful chapter that needs beautiful words to discribe the different emotions it creates when we are touched by it,
March 30th, 2022 15:32
illia said:
Much appreciated. My words are my way of expressing the way life is, every part of life including the inevitable, death is beautiful chapter that needs beautiful words to discribe the different emotions it creates when we are touched by it,
March 30th, 2022 15:32
Rest in peace
Paul Bell said:
Goodbyes are always tough, but your lines make a soothing reading. I\'m sure they\'ll be appreciated.
March 30th, 2022 14:49
Paul Bell said:
Goodbyes are always tough, but your lines make a soothing reading. I\'m sure they\'ll be appreciated.
March 30th, 2022 14:49
Guitar man
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I can’t help but to think of Jimi Hendrix as I read this beautiful poem you’ve penned. Thanks soooo much for sharing.🥂🌹🕊🌞
March 19th, 2022 18:17
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I can’t help but to think of Jimi Hendrix as I read this beautiful poem you’ve penned. Thanks soooo much for sharing.🥂🌹🕊🌞
March 19th, 2022 18:17
Brave and Free?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Broken are the brave
Pilgrims lust of bloodied slaves
Make way for falsehoods
Many braves ahead they stood
Myths and legends history told
Pilgrims voyage where lies unfold\'..
so much depth, and penned with effortless weaved fluidity
really well written, thanks for sharing
November 26th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Broken are the brave
Pilgrims lust of bloodied slaves
Make way for falsehoods
Many braves ahead they stood
Myths and legends history told
Pilgrims voyage where lies unfold\'..
so much depth, and penned with effortless weaved fluidity
really well written, thanks for sharing
November 26th, 2021 04:49
Poetical proclamation
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful use of repetition or chorus, a great write..
thanks for sharing
October 4th, 2021 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful use of repetition or chorus, a great write..
thanks for sharing
October 4th, 2021 05:08
Titled
L. B. Mek said:
while my IQ is too low for me to understand,
I can still appreciate how well this is written..
thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2021 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
while my IQ is too low for me to understand,
I can still appreciate how well this is written..
thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2021 03:59
If\'s, But\'s and maybe\'s
illia said:
Thank you for your comment. Isn\'t it amazing how we can remember things from long ago with one line in poetry. I am so glad that you find my work intriguing. It\'s an honour my friend
August 24th, 2021 09:42
illia said:
Thank you for your comment. Isn\'t it amazing how we can remember things from long ago with one line in poetry. I am so glad that you find my work intriguing. It\'s an honour my friend
August 24th, 2021 09:42
If\'s, But\'s and maybe\'s
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of an old song
by the talented Beverly Knight
titled \'shoulda woulda coulda\'
and its chorus goes:
\'Now \" Shoulda woulda coulda, \" means I\'m out of time
\'Cause \"Shoulda woulda coulda\", can\'t change your mind
And I wonder, wonder, wonder what I\'m gonna do
\"Shoulda woulda coulda\" are the last words of a fool\'...
(thank you, for choosing to share
such an intriguing read)
August 24th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of an old song
by the talented Beverly Knight
titled \'shoulda woulda coulda\'
and its chorus goes:
\'Now \" Shoulda woulda coulda, \" means I\'m out of time
\'Cause \"Shoulda woulda coulda\", can\'t change your mind
And I wonder, wonder, wonder what I\'m gonna do
\"Shoulda woulda coulda\" are the last words of a fool\'...
(thank you, for choosing to share
such an intriguing read)
August 24th, 2021 05:13
I wrote a song for you
L. B. Mek said:
an off-beat, yet rhythmically melodic dedication
thanks for sharing
July 8th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
an off-beat, yet rhythmically melodic dedication
thanks for sharing
July 8th, 2021 04:55
Database
L. B. Mek said:
Truth, distilled: a Pill
We define, as Being
so Hard, to Swallow
yet Find so Easy to Ignore...
A wonderfully contemplative write
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 24th, 2021 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
Truth, distilled: a Pill
We define, as Being
so Hard, to Swallow
yet Find so Easy to Ignore...
A wonderfully contemplative write
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 24th, 2021 04:39
EMBRACING
ForeverJesus7 said:
I believe in embracing the person, but not their sin, and I don\'t always embrace their ideas.
Jesus is love.
He is true.
Persistence is key
March 4th, 2020 11:55
ForeverJesus7 said:
I believe in embracing the person, but not their sin, and I don\'t always embrace their ideas.
Jesus is love.
He is true.
Persistence is key
March 4th, 2020 11:55
THE CRACKWHORE COLLECTOR
BoxMyHeart said:
Risky business. Quite literally. I liked the creativity in this. Couldve done without the CAPS but still, I enjoyed it thanks! Check my page out!
January 9th, 2019 18:27
BoxMyHeart said:
Risky business. Quite literally. I liked the creativity in this. Couldve done without the CAPS but still, I enjoyed it thanks! Check my page out!
January 9th, 2019 18:27
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