Comments received on poems by illia
STANDING FIRM, HOLDING HANDS.
Augustus said:
What a lovely way to open up and be totally vulnerable in mind and body to the one you love.
December 28th, 2016 12:58
Augustus said:
What a lovely way to open up and be totally vulnerable in mind and body to the one you love.
December 28th, 2016 12:58
MAYBE , ONE DAY HAY!!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS NACTON ~ The old poems are best and we all love a bit of MYSTERY ! This old World does seem Hell bent on self-destruction ~ but one day Sister you will get your reward in the GLORY ~ where all is Peace & Joy ~ AMEN ~ Hugs for 2017 ~ Yo Friend Brian
December 28th, 2016 08:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS NACTON ~ The old poems are best and we all love a bit of MYSTERY ! This old World does seem Hell bent on self-destruction ~ but one day Sister you will get your reward in the GLORY ~ where all is Peace & Joy ~ AMEN ~ Hugs for 2017 ~ Yo Friend Brian
December 28th, 2016 08:28
FOR THE POETS
illia said:
Hi. Just had a thought, about what you said in the earlier message. I didn\'t writ any poems for nearly 10yrs. That was definitely my writers block moment. But when I got back into writing its like a till receipt that\'s just rung up a thousand items. If you know what I mean. So I wouldn\'t worry. A poet always finds inspiration in the most strangest of places. ๐ I\'m thinking of getting a Dictaphone as I sleep with pen and paper. Ha ha ha ha ๐
December 24th, 2016 08:35
illia said:
Hi. Just had a thought, about what you said in the earlier message. I didn\'t writ any poems for nearly 10yrs. That was definitely my writers block moment. But when I got back into writing its like a till receipt that\'s just rung up a thousand items. If you know what I mean. So I wouldn\'t worry. A poet always finds inspiration in the most strangest of places. ๐ I\'m thinking of getting a Dictaphone as I sleep with pen and paper. Ha ha ha ha ๐
December 24th, 2016 08:35
my sonnet for you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Love Sonnet NACTON ~ thanks for sharing ~ please check mine BRIAN
November 15th, 2016 14:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Love Sonnet NACTON ~ thanks for sharing ~ please check mine BRIAN
November 15th, 2016 14:56
BE YOURSELF
๐คs.zaynab.kamoonpuri๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ said:
Cool advising Poem. Super to read. Inspiring in great wording expressed swell. Some very lovely rhyming there. Yes like yor last line says perfectly we can only be true to ourselves by being ourselves and not trying to be sb else. Thumbs up,.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 13th, 2016 13:38
๐คs.zaynab.kamoonpuri๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ said:
Cool advising Poem. Super to read. Inspiring in great wording expressed swell. Some very lovely rhyming there. Yes like yor last line says perfectly we can only be true to ourselves by being ourselves and not trying to be sb else. Thumbs up,.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 13th, 2016 13:38
OUR LOVE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you NACTON for a very beautiful poem in both structure and content ! The last line however worries me a little FROZEN IN TIME ? Does that mean the "hotness" of your LOVE is in the past ~ please let me know. Yours BRIAN Please check my poem MONTAIN STREAM ~ Thanks B
September 28th, 2016 09:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you NACTON for a very beautiful poem in both structure and content ! The last line however worries me a little FROZEN IN TIME ? Does that mean the "hotness" of your LOVE is in the past ~ please let me know. Yours BRIAN Please check my poem MONTAIN STREAM ~ Thanks B
September 28th, 2016 09:24
HIDING
illia said:
Thankyou so much. Such a great word to read about my own poetry. Wonderful xx
August 30th, 2016 20:21
illia said:
Thankyou so much. Such a great word to read about my own poetry. Wonderful xx
August 30th, 2016 20:21
HIDING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks NACTON ~ It's easy to hide but if we never come out in the open e we may as well be dead ! I love the uncertainty that flows through the poem but much more I enjoy the positivity in the final line ! Einally no more hiding ~ finally me ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem LIGHT A CANDLE ~ Thanks.
August 30th, 2016 13:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks NACTON ~ It's easy to hide but if we never come out in the open e we may as well be dead ! I love the uncertainty that flows through the poem but much more I enjoy the positivity in the final line ! Einally no more hiding ~ finally me ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem LIGHT A CANDLE ~ Thanks.
August 30th, 2016 13:48
CHILD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NACTON ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem, Well structured with lots of rhyme and rhythm which gives it flow. The title and the content suggest the necessary restrictions imposed on us when we are Children. It also hints that some of the restrictions don't disappear when we turn 18 but remain "against" all our life ! Like you I WANNA BE FREE ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 13:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NACTON ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem, Well structured with lots of rhyme and rhythm which gives it flow. The title and the content suggest the necessary restrictions imposed on us when we are Children. It also hints that some of the restrictions don't disappear when we turn 18 but remain "against" all our life ! Like you I WANNA BE FREE ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 13:55
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