Comments received on poems by teenageheartbreak
Pieces of me (Lyrics- unfinished)
lysistrata said:
If you post the rest of it,you would get the honour of reading first my huge HIT "I Shot the Sheriff AKA Donald Trump"( officially out on the 8th of November 2016).. Eric Clinton would be singing it.
August 2nd, 2016 06:46
lysistrata said:
If you post the rest of it,you would get the honour of reading first my huge HIT "I Shot the Sheriff AKA Donald Trump"( officially out on the 8th of November 2016).. Eric Clinton would be singing it.
August 2nd, 2016 06:46
Pieces of me (Lyrics- unfinished)
SilverXball said:
Yes! You should should send audio clip!
August 2nd, 2016 01:48
SilverXball said:
Yes! You should should send audio clip!
August 2nd, 2016 01:48
Pieces of me (Lyrics- unfinished)
teenageheartbreak said:
Sorry this only part. Let me know if you'd like to see the full version (when finished). I hope you enjoyed reading this just and much as I enjoyed typing it. Thanks for reading. TAHB
August 2nd, 2016 01:38
teenageheartbreak said:
Sorry this only part. Let me know if you'd like to see the full version (when finished). I hope you enjoyed reading this just and much as I enjoyed typing it. Thanks for reading. TAHB
August 2nd, 2016 01:38
Pullin Me Back
teenageheartbreak said:
Lately it's been hard for my to come up with anything at all. This is the most I could do. Comments are appreciated. Thank you for reading!
July 28th, 2016 22:19
teenageheartbreak said:
Lately it's been hard for my to come up with anything at all. This is the most I could do. Comments are appreciated. Thank you for reading!
July 28th, 2016 22:19
Die this way
PerpetualFlowers said:
I absolutely love Hopsin! This poem is seriously great..I can relate to a lot of what you write about feeling in this poem. It is very relate able to me..Honestly this is my favorite poem I've seen on this website so far. Keep it up.
July 22nd, 2016 14:17
PerpetualFlowers said:
I absolutely love Hopsin! This poem is seriously great..I can relate to a lot of what you write about feeling in this poem. It is very relate able to me..Honestly this is my favorite poem I've seen on this website so far. Keep it up.
July 22nd, 2016 14:17
Die this way
teenageheartbreak said:
Hopsin is one of the people I take after when trying to type in my notes. I listened to him recently and decided to do something with a specific song. Comments are appreciated. Thank you for reading!
July 22nd, 2016 00:19
teenageheartbreak said:
Hopsin is one of the people I take after when trying to type in my notes. I listened to him recently and decided to do something with a specific song. Comments are appreciated. Thank you for reading!
July 22nd, 2016 00:19
Depression\'s Obsession
PerpetualFlowers said:
I really like this poem. I can relate. Thank you for sharing
July 21st, 2016 18:45
PerpetualFlowers said:
I really like this poem. I can relate. Thank you for sharing
July 21st, 2016 18:45
Pointless
AlitaOpal said:
I agree with both comments.. In love you learn about who you are and who you aren't..
Great piece 💐💐💐
July 21st, 2016 06:50
AlitaOpal said:
I agree with both comments.. In love you learn about who you are and who you aren't..
Great piece 💐💐💐
July 21st, 2016 06:50
Depression\'s Obsession
teenageheartbreak said:
Here's the second out of the two I found. Not the best but not the worst. Thank you all for reading!
July 21st, 2016 02:24
teenageheartbreak said:
Here's the second out of the two I found. Not the best but not the worst. Thank you all for reading!
July 21st, 2016 02:24
Pointless
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I know where u are coming from here..just know that anything having to do with love is NEVER A POINTLESS endeavor...it's a stepping stone to learning about how life works ...I'll bet that even though u don't see it but usually it's because the higher power stepped in to show u that he or she WASNT THE ONE...anyway...you'll find it one day I'm sure...xxxooo
July 21st, 2016 00:25
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I know where u are coming from here..just know that anything having to do with love is NEVER A POINTLESS endeavor...it's a stepping stone to learning about how life works ...I'll bet that even though u don't see it but usually it's because the higher power stepped in to show u that he or she WASNT THE ONE...anyway...you'll find it one day I'm sure...xxxooo
July 21st, 2016 00:25
Pointless
willyweed said:
I always find it hard to write of love. but you did well here. ww
July 20th, 2016 15:39
willyweed said:
I always find it hard to write of love. but you did well here. ww
July 20th, 2016 15:39
Pointless
teenageheartbreak said:
Found 2 poems just chilling in my notes. Second will be posted tomorrow. Thank you for reading!
July 20th, 2016 12:22
teenageheartbreak said:
Found 2 poems just chilling in my notes. Second will be posted tomorrow. Thank you for reading!
July 20th, 2016 12:22
The Unexpected Ending
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This piece especially hits home.
Nicely penned, fellow poet
July 20th, 2016 04:20
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
This piece especially hits home.
Nicely penned, fellow poet
July 20th, 2016 04:20
The Unexpected Ending
teenageheartbreak said:
I was just messing around in my notes when I made this. Let me know if I should keep this going. Thanks for reading!
July 19th, 2016 04:06
teenageheartbreak said:
I was just messing around in my notes when I made this. Let me know if I should keep this going. Thanks for reading!
July 19th, 2016 04:06
Beware (official)
willyweed said:
its has a nice flow with good structure and rhyme! imagination and experience molded into clay shapes this good poem. good work ww
July 17th, 2016 21:28
willyweed said:
its has a nice flow with good structure and rhyme! imagination and experience molded into clay shapes this good poem. good work ww
July 17th, 2016 21:28
Beware (official)
teenageheartbreak said:
Tell me what you all think of this. All comments are appreciated.
July 16th, 2016 23:51
teenageheartbreak said:
Tell me what you all think of this. All comments are appreciated.
July 16th, 2016 23:51
Unexpected Event
willyweed said:
life is full of the unexpected, it seems you responded well.
July 12th, 2016 10:13
willyweed said:
life is full of the unexpected, it seems you responded well.
July 12th, 2016 10:13
Unexpected Event
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI THB ~ Interesting experience ~ but it happens ~ thanks for sharing ! In my experience there is always a way to escape from any situation ~ and we all have a "Friend in Need !" BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 05:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI THB ~ Interesting experience ~ but it happens ~ thanks for sharing ! In my experience there is always a way to escape from any situation ~ and we all have a "Friend in Need !" BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 05:13
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