Comments received on poems by teenageheartbreak
Fake \"Love\"
lysistrata said:
Did you get her a box of mysterious chocolates?
Teenager,it's a wild world.
It's hard to get by just upon a smile...
July 4th, 2016 09:21
lysistrata said:
Did you get her a box of mysterious chocolates?
Teenager,it's a wild world.
It's hard to get by just upon a smile...
July 4th, 2016 09:21
Fake \"Love\"
The 2 A.M Writer said:
Couldn't have found this poem at a better time. It's amazing. Thank you
July 3rd, 2016 15:27
The 2 A.M Writer said:
Couldn't have found this poem at a better time. It's amazing. Thank you
July 3rd, 2016 15:27
Broken Trust
teenageheartbreak said:
To clear any confusion because I can see where it's at.... This is about a girl that I've let into my life once and she completely screwed me over. She later on made it seem as if she had changed and after 3 days of thinking it over I decided y not. The lies were things like "He's just a friend", "Nothing will ever change", ect... So not only did I want/need her to leave me, like I said in the middle, I fell hard for her. I didn't want her to at the same time and even tried to compromise (but I didn't include that). She refused to give all of her male "friends" up and all that stuff. This was just me brainstorming for my next poem. I'll make sure it's way more understandable.
July 1st, 2016 22:10
teenageheartbreak said:
To clear any confusion because I can see where it's at.... This is about a girl that I've let into my life once and she completely screwed me over. She later on made it seem as if she had changed and after 3 days of thinking it over I decided y not. The lies were things like "He's just a friend", "Nothing will ever change", ect... So not only did I want/need her to leave me, like I said in the middle, I fell hard for her. I didn't want her to at the same time and even tried to compromise (but I didn't include that). She refused to give all of her male "friends" up and all that stuff. This was just me brainstorming for my next poem. I'll make sure it's way more understandable.
July 1st, 2016 22:10
Broken Trust
inink said:
we have all been bitten by the love bug and then pushed off cloud nine by that person we love at least once. thanks for sharing!
July 1st, 2016 09:08
inink said:
we have all been bitten by the love bug and then pushed off cloud nine by that person we love at least once. thanks for sharing!
July 1st, 2016 09:08
Broken Trust
lysistrata said:
"Whoever is careless with the truth in small matters,cannot be trusted with important matters."
"So many lies you shady bitch" Versus "Could've just said yes and chose to stay?!"
Did she lie or reject Him? What's the TRUTH?
July 1st, 2016 09:03
lysistrata said:
"Whoever is careless with the truth in small matters,cannot be trusted with important matters."
"So many lies you shady bitch" Versus "Could've just said yes and chose to stay?!"
Did she lie or reject Him? What's the TRUTH?
July 1st, 2016 09:03
Broken Trust
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME THB ~ Thank you for a very poignant and passionate first poem. We have all been Teenagers and in retrospect it is never easy. Growing up ~ reaching out ~ exploring sexuality and relationships. When it all goes pearshaped "We want to die ~ So we don't eat ~ Nobody cares ~ It's just me who weeps". We do get over it (slowly) and live to love again ~ BUT ~ coping with the rejection of a Lover never gets any easier. A well structured poem with rhyme and rhythm. The structure complemented the so sad subject. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 1st, 2016 01:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME THB ~ Thank you for a very poignant and passionate first poem. We have all been Teenagers and in retrospect it is never easy. Growing up ~ reaching out ~ exploring sexuality and relationships. When it all goes pearshaped "We want to die ~ So we don't eat ~ Nobody cares ~ It's just me who weeps". We do get over it (slowly) and live to love again ~ BUT ~ coping with the rejection of a Lover never gets any easier. A well structured poem with rhyme and rhythm. The structure complemented the so sad subject. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 1st, 2016 01:52
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