Comments received on poems by TaeMarie93
Trapped In
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem weighs heavy on this reader\'s heart.
Perhaps you\'ve chosen those specific words, because they reflect your deepest emotions: love, because you stay and the feeling of worthlessness, because you know you have alternatives.
I (after all these years) have just read Tina Turner\'s book, \"I, Tina.\" Perhaps you should too. ;)
September 26th, 2018 04:51
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem weighs heavy on this reader\'s heart.
Perhaps you\'ve chosen those specific words, because they reflect your deepest emotions: love, because you stay and the feeling of worthlessness, because you know you have alternatives.
I (after all these years) have just read Tina Turner\'s book, \"I, Tina.\" Perhaps you should too. ;)
September 26th, 2018 04:51
Disappointed
Herjourney said:
I have no support system so at times I don\'t know what\'s worse. Having someone their and not on your side or not having no one at all . I think in both cases it makes us stronger because we still determine to be who are meant to be for self.
February 15th, 2018 18:55
Herjourney said:
I have no support system so at times I don\'t know what\'s worse. Having someone their and not on your side or not having no one at all . I think in both cases it makes us stronger because we still determine to be who are meant to be for self.
February 15th, 2018 18:55
Dear Mama
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Painful write TaeMarie. Your babies are better off as you clear this out through your poetry. Take care of yourself and there\'s always someone to talk with over at NAMI if you\'re feeling especially low. My prayers for your mother\'s soul and for you, sister.
June 22nd, 2017 22:45
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Painful write TaeMarie. Your babies are better off as you clear this out through your poetry. Take care of yourself and there\'s always someone to talk with over at NAMI if you\'re feeling especially low. My prayers for your mother\'s soul and for you, sister.
June 22nd, 2017 22:45
Addiction
official1sp said:
What a story... A testimony indeed, you are a walking miracle. I am so proud of you and the strength that you manifest by never turning back. This is a touching piece for me as well. I am a single parent too with children to raise alone. So thank you for the empowerment.
April 20th, 2017 01:21
official1sp said:
What a story... A testimony indeed, you are a walking miracle. I am so proud of you and the strength that you manifest by never turning back. This is a touching piece for me as well. I am a single parent too with children to raise alone. So thank you for the empowerment.
April 20th, 2017 01:21
Pain
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh TAE ~ We love you carin' for you thinkin' of you prayin' and lots of others like FAY care for you to. YES your poem is very painful and you think all Men are crap ~ but this poem is also very healing and by writing it (and the previous one) you are cleansing your heart and soul and we are all sharin' the pain with you ! Just hang in HONEY think beautiful thoughts and things will get better ~ PRAYIN' FOR YOU ~ BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 05:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh TAE ~ We love you carin' for you thinkin' of you prayin' and lots of others like FAY care for you to. YES your poem is very painful and you think all Men are crap ~ but this poem is also very healing and by writing it (and the previous one) you are cleansing your heart and soul and we are all sharin' the pain with you ! Just hang in HONEY think beautiful thoughts and things will get better ~ PRAYIN' FOR YOU ~ BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 05:00
Relationship Of 2016
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI TAE ~ Thanks for sahrin' and tellin' it like it is ! One way and another (especially with so much sexplicit material on You Tube) lots of Men (especially) have the attitude that they can just "come and go" ! I'm 33 and Male attitudes towards Young Ladies (that how I like treat you as Ladies !) has gotten worse and more degrading. I love the personal dignity you express throughout your poem ~ I'm hopin' and prayin' that real soon you will find TRUE LOVE in a mutually respectful RELATIONSHIP ! Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 15:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI TAE ~ Thanks for sahrin' and tellin' it like it is ! One way and another (especially with so much sexplicit material on You Tube) lots of Men (especially) have the attitude that they can just "come and go" ! I'm 33 and Male attitudes towards Young Ladies (that how I like treat you as Ladies !) has gotten worse and more degrading. I love the personal dignity you express throughout your poem ~ I'm hopin' and prayin' that real soon you will find TRUE LOVE in a mutually respectful RELATIONSHIP ! Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 15:59
Broken
rrodriguez said:
Very emotional and intense. Write more and don't fight.
July 17th, 2016 12:01
rrodriguez said:
Very emotional and intense. Write more and don't fight.
July 17th, 2016 12:01
Uncorrected World
TaeMarie93 said:
Thanks Brian. I do see that things are different in different countries and I am thankful for your words of encouragement. I think I'm more appualed at the fact that this is still going on. Especially when children have to go through this and see it. I raise my kids to live everyone and that we are all beautiful. I am more concerned for the next generation I guess you can say. But I do get exactly where you are coming from.
July 15th, 2016 09:30
TaeMarie93 said:
Thanks Brian. I do see that things are different in different countries and I am thankful for your words of encouragement. I think I'm more appualed at the fact that this is still going on. Especially when children have to go through this and see it. I raise my kids to live everyone and that we are all beautiful. I am more concerned for the next generation I guess you can say. But I do get exactly where you are coming from.
July 15th, 2016 09:30
Uncorrected World
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BLACK is BEAUTIFUL MARIE ~ Believe it ! I'm white but for me all people are my Brothers & Sisters and we are all the same beneath our pigmentation. I have dated colored Girls (you still get some stares in the UK !) and believe me you are special ! I went to SOUTH AFRICA and when I took stock ~ everyone was BLACK and on the bus and in the store I was the one who was different ~ BUT ~ nobody shot me because I was white. Martin Luther King had a dream ~ Barack Obama had a vision of racial equality in thr USA. We have to keep dreamin' Sister and all have vision of a "Better Land! ~ AMEN I hope the USA dump Trump and elect Hillary who will continue BO's fight for racial equality. Our new PM in the UK is a Lady and she has two "People of Color" in her cabinet ~ AMEN. Youirs BRIANi
July 15th, 2016 04:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BLACK is BEAUTIFUL MARIE ~ Believe it ! I'm white but for me all people are my Brothers & Sisters and we are all the same beneath our pigmentation. I have dated colored Girls (you still get some stares in the UK !) and believe me you are special ! I went to SOUTH AFRICA and when I took stock ~ everyone was BLACK and on the bus and in the store I was the one who was different ~ BUT ~ nobody shot me because I was white. Martin Luther King had a dream ~ Barack Obama had a vision of racial equality in thr USA. We have to keep dreamin' Sister and all have vision of a "Better Land! ~ AMEN I hope the USA dump Trump and elect Hillary who will continue BO's fight for racial equality. Our new PM in the UK is a Lady and she has two "People of Color" in her cabinet ~ AMEN. Youirs BRIANi
July 15th, 2016 04:56
Motherless Child
Inspiredartist3 said:
that is some heavy stuff. i enjoy your writing style, your powerful real feelings that show in these words. just wow an amazing poem. thank you for sharing this. keep fighting!!
July 2nd, 2016 20:24
Inspiredartist3 said:
that is some heavy stuff. i enjoy your writing style, your powerful real feelings that show in these words. just wow an amazing poem. thank you for sharing this. keep fighting!!
July 2nd, 2016 20:24
Motherless Child
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TAEMARIE ~ Thanks for your first poem. It is very graphic passionate and personal. Thanks for your comment because it gives us all hope that your are through the worst and beginning to refocus your life. Thinking of you and Praying for you ~ every blessing ~ BRIAN Please check my poems !
July 2nd, 2016 18:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TAEMARIE ~ Thanks for your first poem. It is very graphic passionate and personal. Thanks for your comment because it gives us all hope that your are through the worst and beginning to refocus your life. Thinking of you and Praying for you ~ every blessing ~ BRIAN Please check my poems !
July 2nd, 2016 18:53
