Comments received on poems by TheWritingInstrument
Missing.
Christina8 said:
So much said in so few words! We all want to be missed. Great write!
October 19th, 2017 19:35
Christina8 said:
So much said in so few words! We all want to be missed. Great write!
October 19th, 2017 19:35
Read it from the top to the bottom, then read it from bottom to top
Accidental Poet said:
This is very clever how you wrote this piece. I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing.
October 19th, 2017 19:02
Accidental Poet said:
This is very clever how you wrote this piece. I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing.
October 19th, 2017 19:02
Disappear
berdnt_victoria said:
I could feel the pain in this poem. You did a great job
January 16th, 2017 10:26
berdnt_victoria said:
I could feel the pain in this poem. You did a great job
January 16th, 2017 10:26
Controlled
Elegant_Style said:
so deep and mesmerizing, I read all the way to the end and was like \"Oh my gumdrops that was awesome!!!!\"
December 3rd, 2016 22:38
Elegant_Style said:
so deep and mesmerizing, I read all the way to the end and was like \"Oh my gumdrops that was awesome!!!!\"
December 3rd, 2016 22:38
Read it from the top to the bottom, then read it from bottom to top
Francesco said:
I think this is a wonderful way of saying that everything changes depending on point of view and that we all construct our own reality. Great idea, thank you for sharing.
December 3rd, 2016 00:51
Francesco said:
I think this is a wonderful way of saying that everything changes depending on point of view and that we all construct our own reality. Great idea, thank you for sharing.
December 3rd, 2016 00:51
Fight
Christina8 said:
Very powerful poem. i hope this write was cathartic for you. Beautiful!
November 23rd, 2016 00:59
Christina8 said:
Very powerful poem. i hope this write was cathartic for you. Beautiful!
November 23rd, 2016 00:59
Fight
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Emotive muse expressed in poetic lyrical wordings and tones. Effective and appealing. Thumbs up.
U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.
November 23rd, 2016 00:06
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Emotive muse expressed in poetic lyrical wordings and tones. Effective and appealing. Thumbs up.
U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.
November 23rd, 2016 00:06
Disappear
BSmooth said:
All of your poems are really good. You\'re grat at writing
November 1st, 2016 21:41
BSmooth said:
All of your poems are really good. You\'re grat at writing
November 1st, 2016 21:41
the scars
P.X. Vexxus said:
I've written a poem about cutting. I usually do a view from a third person perspective though. I really liked this, good write.
September 19th, 2016 02:10
P.X. Vexxus said:
I've written a poem about cutting. I usually do a view from a third person perspective though. I really liked this, good write.
September 19th, 2016 02:10
Sometimes fonts are more powerful than you think.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ARIANA ~ Like you I love fonts ~ and capitals ~ and color ~ they give us a chance to add an extra dimension to our poetry and MPS has been very generous. The lines you have highlighted tell me something about the first line ~ LOVE IS NOT FOREVER ! If you cannot understand how I feel ~ Time never existed ~ I feel DEAD ! ~ And sometimes it's big and long. Love is like that but in my experience (I'm 33 and single) Love is always TRANSIENT. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Love BRIAN
September 18th, 2016 15:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ARIANA ~ Like you I love fonts ~ and capitals ~ and color ~ they give us a chance to add an extra dimension to our poetry and MPS has been very generous. The lines you have highlighted tell me something about the first line ~ LOVE IS NOT FOREVER ! If you cannot understand how I feel ~ Time never existed ~ I feel DEAD ! ~ And sometimes it's big and long. Love is like that but in my experience (I'm 33 and single) Love is always TRANSIENT. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Love BRIAN
September 18th, 2016 15:53
Read it from the top to the bottom, then read it from bottom to top
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you for sharing ANGEL. This is an unusual poem because when one treats line 21 as the opening line and read it backwards it sends out a different VIBE. Reading it normally the message is ~ TODAY is my worst day ~ The World is an evil place ~ Happiness doesn't last ~ It's all beyond my control ~ You'll never hear me say "Today was a good day". A message of GLOOM & DOOM ! When you reverse it the opening line TODAY WAS A GOOD DAY ~ very positive start ! You qualify it in lines 2 & 3 (20 & 19) and then in line 10 (working upwards) you state TRUE HAPPINESS CAN BE OBTAINED ! AMEN ! It's all positive up to line 15 (working upwards) I think that line should read SOME GOODNESS "DOES" SHINE THROUGH ONCE IN A WHILE (it makes more sense that way forwards and backwards ?) The next lines read positively and I like the ending ! There's something good in every day ~ And don't try to convince me that ~ Today was the absolute worst day ever ! You are more clever than you know ~ an awesome poem ~ when analysed ! Love it ~ Love BRIAN Please check my poem DECISIONS ~ Thanks B
September 13th, 2016 18:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you for sharing ANGEL. This is an unusual poem because when one treats line 21 as the opening line and read it backwards it sends out a different VIBE. Reading it normally the message is ~ TODAY is my worst day ~ The World is an evil place ~ Happiness doesn't last ~ It's all beyond my control ~ You'll never hear me say "Today was a good day". A message of GLOOM & DOOM ! When you reverse it the opening line TODAY WAS A GOOD DAY ~ very positive start ! You qualify it in lines 2 & 3 (20 & 19) and then in line 10 (working upwards) you state TRUE HAPPINESS CAN BE OBTAINED ! AMEN ! It's all positive up to line 15 (working upwards) I think that line should read SOME GOODNESS "DOES" SHINE THROUGH ONCE IN A WHILE (it makes more sense that way forwards and backwards ?) The next lines read positively and I like the ending ! There's something good in every day ~ And don't try to convince me that ~ Today was the absolute worst day ever ! You are more clever than you know ~ an awesome poem ~ when analysed ! Love it ~ Love BRIAN Please check my poem DECISIONS ~ Thanks B
September 13th, 2016 18:31
Read it from the top to the bottom, then read it from bottom to top
Tony36 said:
Awesome Awesome write
September 13th, 2016 17:41
Tony36 said:
Awesome Awesome write
September 13th, 2016 17:41
Read it from the top to the bottom, then read it from bottom to top
Jeff said:
Very well written..and a great write
September 13th, 2016 17:21
Jeff said:
Very well written..and a great write
September 13th, 2016 17:21
Every time
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
So So sad ANGEL to be lost in space and time ~ Hope you find a release back into reality asap. Thinking of you praying for you ~ Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem THE UMBERELLA MAN ~ Thanks B
September 7th, 2016 12:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
So So sad ANGEL to be lost in space and time ~ Hope you find a release back into reality asap. Thinking of you praying for you ~ Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem THE UMBERELLA MAN ~ Thanks B
September 7th, 2016 12:59
hands
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The human hand ANGEL is one of the most beautiful and yet one of the most powerful and dangerous weapons we possess. It can stroke a baby or throttle an adult. You can pleasure a friend or knock them out. You can pleasure yourself or harm yourself. You can stroke a kitten or throttle a turkey. How we seour hands and fingers is our own choice ~ will you use your hands in a positive or negative way today ? Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem LIGHT A CANDLE ~ Thanks
August 30th, 2016 13:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The human hand ANGEL is one of the most beautiful and yet one of the most powerful and dangerous weapons we possess. It can stroke a baby or throttle an adult. You can pleasure a friend or knock them out. You can pleasure yourself or harm yourself. You can stroke a kitten or throttle a turkey. How we seour hands and fingers is our own choice ~ will you use your hands in a positive or negative way today ? Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem LIGHT A CANDLE ~ Thanks
August 30th, 2016 13:39
i\\\'d rather be dead
willyweed said:
excellent emotional expression!
All you can really count on is you!
nice poem. ww
August 26th, 2016 19:27
willyweed said:
excellent emotional expression!
All you can really count on is you!
nice poem. ww
August 26th, 2016 19:27
i\\\'d rather be dead
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WI ~ Thanks for sharing and baring your soul. I can empathise because from time to time I've felt that death was the only answer. We make ourselves so so dependent on others ~ often on a single other. When they ebb and flow so do we and life seems worthless. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem. EBONY GIRL ! Thanks
August 26th, 2016 11:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WI ~ Thanks for sharing and baring your soul. I can empathise because from time to time I've felt that death was the only answer. We make ourselves so so dependent on others ~ often on a single other. When they ebb and flow so do we and life seems worthless. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem. EBONY GIRL ! Thanks
August 26th, 2016 11:59
i\\\'d rather be dead
JohnThomas said:
Wow. It seems like no matter how loud we scream, the silence can be more deafening.
Great poem!
August 26th, 2016 11:51
JohnThomas said:
Wow. It seems like no matter how loud we scream, the silence can be more deafening.
Great poem!
August 26th, 2016 11:51
The Lies.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing TWI ~ a very tender poem. Love the MOON ~ love the visual that's how time passes. In some respects we are all alone ~ because we all want to be free ~ going high and love. Yours BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 09:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing TWI ~ a very tender poem. Love the MOON ~ love the visual that's how time passes. In some respects we are all alone ~ because we all want to be free ~ going high and love. Yours BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 09:20
Thinking
willyweed said:
This has some good rhyme and a nice gentle flow to it. great write. ww
July 12th, 2016 10:06
willyweed said:
This has some good rhyme and a nice gentle flow to it. great write. ww
July 12th, 2016 10:06
Listening.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ARIANA ~ Thanks for a very positive and elegant first poem. All your senses alert for LOVE ! Listening ~ hearing ~ feeling ~ looking and never escaping "this emotion". Great poem to wake up to ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 04:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ARIANA ~ Thanks for a very positive and elegant first poem. All your senses alert for LOVE ! Listening ~ hearing ~ feeling ~ looking and never escaping "this emotion". Great poem to wake up to ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 04:50
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