Comments received on poems by TheWritingInstrument

Dear--JaneDoe said:


October 25th, 2017 17:50

Christina8 said:

So much said in so few words! We all want to be missed. Great write!

October 19th, 2017 19:35

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Accidental Poet said:

This is very clever how you wrote this piece. I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing.

October 19th, 2017 19:02

The Invisible said:

Wow powerful poem right here. This is deep.

June 12th, 2017 22:36

berdnt_victoria said:

I could feel the pain in this poem. You did a great job

January 16th, 2017 10:26

Elegant_Style said:

so deep and mesmerizing, I read all the way to the end and was like \"Oh my gumdrops that was awesome!!!!\"

December 3rd, 2016 22:38

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Francesco said:

I think this is a wonderful way of saying that everything changes depending on point of view and that we all construct our own reality. Great idea, thank you for sharing.

December 3rd, 2016 00:51

Christina8 said:

Very powerful poem. i hope this write was cathartic for you. Beautiful!

November 23rd, 2016 00:59

🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Emotive muse expressed in poetic lyrical wordings and tones. Effective and appealing. Thumbs up.

U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.

November 23rd, 2016 00:06

littlegoat23 said:

Amazing. I loved it

November 1st, 2016 22:11

BSmooth said:

All of your poems are really good. You\'re grat at writing

November 1st, 2016 21:41

Christina8 said:

Powerful poem. Great job!

November 1st, 2016 19:03

the scars
P.X. Vexxus said:

I've written a poem about cutting. I usually do a view from a third person perspective though. I really liked this, good write.

September 19th, 2016 02:10

Sometimes fonts are more powerful than you think.

ARIANA ~ Like you I love fonts ~ and capitals ~ and color ~ they give us a chance to add an extra dimension to our poetry and MPS has been very generous. The lines you have highlighted tell me something about the first line ~ LOVE IS NOT FOREVER ! If you cannot understand how I feel ~ Time never existed ~ I feel DEAD ! ~ And sometimes it's big and long. Love is like that but in my experience (I'm 33 and single) Love is always TRANSIENT. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Love BRIAN

September 18th, 2016 15:53

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Thank you for sharing ANGEL. This is an unusual poem because when one treats line 21 as the opening line and read it backwards it sends out a different VIBE. Reading it normally the message is ~ TODAY is my worst day ~ The World is an evil place ~ Happiness doesn't last ~ It's all beyond my control ~ You'll never hear me say "Today was a good day". A message of GLOOM & DOOM ! When you reverse it the opening line TODAY WAS A GOOD DAY ~ very positive start ! You qualify it in lines 2 & 3 (20 & 19) and then in line 10 (working upwards) you state TRUE HAPPINESS CAN BE OBTAINED ! AMEN ! It's all positive up to line 15 (working upwards) I think that line should read SOME GOODNESS "DOES" SHINE THROUGH ONCE IN A WHILE (it makes more sense that way forwards and backwards ?) The next lines read positively and I like the ending ! There's something good in every day ~ And don't try to convince me that ~ Today was the absolute worst day ever ! You are more clever than you know ~ an awesome poem ~ when analysed ! Love it ~ Love BRIAN Please check my poem DECISIONS ~ Thanks B

September 13th, 2016 18:31

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Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome write

September 13th, 2016 17:41

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Jeff said:

Very well written..and a great write

September 13th, 2016 17:21

Every time

So So sad ANGEL to be lost in space and time ~ Hope you find a release back into reality asap. Thinking of you praying for you ~ Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem THE UMBERELLA MAN ~ Thanks B

September 7th, 2016 12:59

Tony36 said:

Great write

August 30th, 2016 14:20


The human hand ANGEL is one of the most beautiful and yet one of the most powerful and dangerous weapons we possess. It can stroke a baby or throttle an adult. You can pleasure a friend or knock them out. You can pleasure yourself or harm yourself. You can stroke a kitten or throttle a turkey. How we seour hands and fingers is our own choice ~ will you use your hands in a positive or negative way today ? Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem LIGHT A CANDLE ~ Thanks

August 30th, 2016 13:39

the scars
Tony36 said:

Been there myself great write

August 29th, 2016 18:28

the scars
Mads said:

Same here... Mine are everywhere.

August 29th, 2016 17:50

i\\\'d rather be dead
willyweed said:

excellent emotional expression!
All you can really count on is you!
nice poem. ww

August 26th, 2016 19:27

i\\\'d rather be dead

WI ~ Thanks for sharing and baring your soul. I can empathise because from time to time I've felt that death was the only answer. We make ourselves so so dependent on others ~ often on a single other. When they ebb and flow so do we and life seems worthless. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem. EBONY GIRL ! Thanks

August 26th, 2016 11:59

i\\\'d rather be dead
JohnThomas said:

Wow. It seems like no matter how loud we scream, the silence can be more deafening.
Great poem!

August 26th, 2016 11:51

The Lies.
mhpoet said:

I love your poem! Keep up the amazing work and talent!

July 27th, 2016 18:01

The Lies.
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

July 19th, 2016 16:12

The Lies.

Thanks for sharing TWI ~ a very tender poem. Love the MOON ~ love the visual that's how time passes. In some respects we are all alone ~ because we all want to be free ~ going high and love. Yours BRIAN

July 19th, 2016 09:20

The 5 Things
The 2 A.M Writer said:

Good write!

July 14th, 2016 00:30

willyweed said:

This has some good rhyme and a nice gentle flow to it. great write. ww

July 12th, 2016 10:06

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