Comments received on poems by bella cortez
Rise and Shine Child of mine
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very wise words. All we can do to our children is try and show them the best way to live but they need to find their own paths into the wonder that is their life.
June 7th, 2018 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very wise words. All we can do to our children is try and show them the best way to live but they need to find their own paths into the wonder that is their life.
June 7th, 2018 00:42
T I M E
ron parrish aka wordman said:
who are we,great question,maybe here for a reason
March 25th, 2018 21:30
ron parrish aka wordman said:
who are we,great question,maybe here for a reason
March 25th, 2018 21:30
My love for you
FredPeyer said:
I think this would make a nice love song! Well written, Bella!
February 4th, 2018 03:48
FredPeyer said:
I think this would make a nice love song! Well written, Bella!
February 4th, 2018 03:48
Broken stem
FredPeyer said:
This is great, Bella! Three short lines, ten short words, and you said it all, pain, hope, resolution. And then throwing in some rhyming just for good measure! :-)
Anybody who is depressed, feeling down, or otherwise unhappy should hang this on their mirror. Or better yet, make it a bumper sticker!
September 27th, 2017 11:27
FredPeyer said:
This is great, Bella! Three short lines, ten short words, and you said it all, pain, hope, resolution. And then throwing in some rhyming just for good measure! :-)
Anybody who is depressed, feeling down, or otherwise unhappy should hang this on their mirror. Or better yet, make it a bumper sticker!
September 27th, 2017 11:27
After.Words
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Bella! Words can do that to us. They can hurt, but they can also heal!
September 8th, 2017 01:00
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Bella! Words can do that to us. They can hurt, but they can also heal!
September 8th, 2017 01:00
undress my mind
ron parrish aka wordman said:
only in my mind,as i travel through time
July 15th, 2017 21:00
ron parrish aka wordman said:
only in my mind,as i travel through time
July 15th, 2017 21:00
undress my mind
FredPeyer said:
Bella, that expression \"undress my mind\" is out of this world (well you did say to escape reality). No, seriously, this is a wonderful way to say \"get into my mind\". And some of our minds are only dressed in summer cloths, easy to get into, while others wear armor.
I really like this poem.
July 14th, 2017 03:28
FredPeyer said:
Bella, that expression \"undress my mind\" is out of this world (well you did say to escape reality). No, seriously, this is a wonderful way to say \"get into my mind\". And some of our minds are only dressed in summer cloths, easy to get into, while others wear armor.
I really like this poem.
July 14th, 2017 03:28
undress my mind
burning-embers said:
Less is more! And what more could you say? Absolutely beautifully thought out and presented. Most men are straight away going to thing sexually about this but there is sooooo much more in your meaning. This is the BEST i have read on here by a long mile! +fav\'s
July 14th, 2017 02:01
burning-embers said:
Less is more! And what more could you say? Absolutely beautifully thought out and presented. Most men are straight away going to thing sexually about this but there is sooooo much more in your meaning. This is the BEST i have read on here by a long mile! +fav\'s
July 14th, 2017 02:01
Letters I never mailed : you don\'t know my name
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I hope that love of yours will read those letters.
July 1st, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I hope that love of yours will read those letters.
July 1st, 2017 01:00
Letters I never mailed : you don\'t know my name
FredPeyer said:
How could a man (or woman) not be intrigued, flattered, and ultimately made to see with letters such as this. Beautifully written. Like the last line.
June 30th, 2017 18:39
FredPeyer said:
How could a man (or woman) not be intrigued, flattered, and ultimately made to see with letters such as this. Beautifully written. Like the last line.
June 30th, 2017 18:39
Just write.
FredPeyer said:
Bella, Charles Bukowski said this when he wrote about writing:
“unless it comes out of
your soul like a rocket,
unless being still would
drive you to madness or
suicide or murder,
don\'t do it.
unless the sun inside you is
burning your gut,
don\'t do it.
when it is truly time,
and if you have been chosen,
it will do it by
itself and it will keep on doing it
until you die or it dies in you.
there is no other way.
and there never was.”
― Charles Bukowski
You said the same thing, just more elegantly and in only two lines!
Bravo!
June 21st, 2017 13:37
FredPeyer said:
Bella, Charles Bukowski said this when he wrote about writing:
“unless it comes out of
your soul like a rocket,
unless being still would
drive you to madness or
suicide or murder,
don\'t do it.
unless the sun inside you is
burning your gut,
don\'t do it.
when it is truly time,
and if you have been chosen,
it will do it by
itself and it will keep on doing it
until you die or it dies in you.
there is no other way.
and there never was.”
― Charles Bukowski
You said the same thing, just more elegantly and in only two lines!
Bravo!
June 21st, 2017 13:37
Just write.
Louis Gibbs said:
The best poetry comes from going inside any portraying the feelings encountered there. Good, well expressed short poem, Bella!
June 21st, 2017 11:32
Louis Gibbs said:
The best poetry comes from going inside any portraying the feelings encountered there. Good, well expressed short poem, Bella!
June 21st, 2017 11:32
A love letter that\'s never been open 💌
IAmBeu said:
Im sorry that you\'ve felt this hurt, but I think its beautiful how you\'ve expressed it. Thank you for sharing
May 27th, 2017 11:24
IAmBeu said:
Im sorry that you\'ve felt this hurt, but I think its beautiful how you\'ve expressed it. Thank you for sharing
May 27th, 2017 11:24
Explosions in my mind.
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written...I can relate to it very much so. Men can really be pricks sometimes....and They LIE...xxxooo
March 16th, 2017 21:59
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very well written...I can relate to it very much so. Men can really be pricks sometimes....and They LIE...xxxooo
March 16th, 2017 21:59
Baby give me time.
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m seeing a relationship about to be broken up, but not just now. One is trapped in the other\'s world and looking to escape. The trapped one is confused, but looking to find a way out. To leave is better for both parties, but only one has the courage to do it. Very nice description. An emotional write. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 14:41
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m seeing a relationship about to be broken up, but not just now. One is trapped in the other\'s world and looking to escape. The trapped one is confused, but looking to find a way out. To leave is better for both parties, but only one has the courage to do it. Very nice description. An emotional write. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
February 22nd, 2017 14:41
The Unknown
willyweed said:
excellent/work.
wonderful Bella!
I salute you. ww
January 6th, 2017 10:36
willyweed said:
excellent/work.
wonderful Bella!
I salute you. ww
January 6th, 2017 10:36
ɪɴ ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴀ ᴍᴀɴ
Francesco said:
And what a lucky man he is!
I hope your love is strong! :)
Fx
January 6th, 2017 06:28
Francesco said:
And what a lucky man he is!
I hope your love is strong! :)
Fx
January 6th, 2017 06:28
ᴘɪᴄᴛᴜʀᴇ ᴄᴏʟᴏʀᴇᴅ ғʀᴀᴍᴇs🖼
Francesco said:
Sadly there exist also this side of life... but all shall pass.
Nice write!
December 26th, 2016 02:36
Francesco said:
Sadly there exist also this side of life... but all shall pass.
Nice write!
December 26th, 2016 02:36
•E x h a u s t e d•
Francesco said:
Love it. It says so much in few, simple words, put together masterfully.
Well done.
December 26th, 2016 02:34
Francesco said:
Love it. It says so much in few, simple words, put together masterfully.
Well done.
December 26th, 2016 02:34
ᴀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ 📖
Augustus said:
And furthermore good riddance! Nicely done. P.S. I don\'t think this person is on your Christmas gift list.
December 8th, 2016 17:21
Augustus said:
And furthermore good riddance! Nicely done. P.S. I don\'t think this person is on your Christmas gift list.
December 8th, 2016 17:21
A love letter that\'s never been open 💌
notapoet said:
Love this, great write....!
December 7th, 2016 18:35
notapoet said:
Love this, great write....!
December 7th, 2016 18:35
A love letter that\'s never been open 💌
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the flip side of love,the downfall
December 7th, 2016 00:00
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the flip side of love,the downfall
December 7th, 2016 00:00
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