Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Death\'s Indenture (+1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow on both of these! Having lived next to an old
Cemetery once, the first felt like home and the metaphor… 🤯 Again, both of these were fantastic! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 21:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow on both of these! Having lived next to an old
Cemetery once, the first felt like home and the metaphor… 🤯 Again, both of these were fantastic! 🌹👏
February 28th, 2025 21:17
Death\'s Indenture (+1)
sorenbarrett said:
This has wonderful lines that draw the reader along. Very nice
February 28th, 2025 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
This has wonderful lines that draw the reader along. Very nice
February 28th, 2025 10:28
Calling The Future (+2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am searching around some darkened halls in a piece I am currently working on. Well done, my friend. Loved both. The latter really spoke to me as I am working on a \"sequel\" to a rather haunting poem. Beautiful work, as always. 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 18:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am searching around some darkened halls in a piece I am currently working on. Well done, my friend. Loved both. The latter really spoke to me as I am working on a \"sequel\" to a rather haunting poem. Beautiful work, as always. 🌹👏
February 27th, 2025 18:18
Calling The Future (+2)
sorenbarrett said:
As always you are able to encompass so much in so few words. Lovely
February 27th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
As always you are able to encompass so much in so few words. Lovely
February 27th, 2025 11:56
Footnotes
sorenbarrett said:
So true indeed history has a faulty memory and it can be selective at times. A beautiful write Kurt
February 26th, 2025 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
So true indeed history has a faulty memory and it can be selective at times. A beautiful write Kurt
February 26th, 2025 14:27
Footnotes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. What more can be said. Profound truth, beautifully expressed in this poem. Well done, Kurt. I really do love your Dreamsleep collection of poems.
February 26th, 2025 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. What more can be said. Profound truth, beautifully expressed in this poem. Well done, Kurt. I really do love your Dreamsleep collection of poems.
February 26th, 2025 11:21
Whetting The Stone
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m sure that you used this process in writing this poem. Very nice
February 25th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m sure that you used this process in writing this poem. Very nice
February 25th, 2025 10:36
Cursed To Repeat
RSM0812 said:
I was going to school to be a history teacher before I dropped out bc of mostly money problems. This puece tells the story of history itself. Repeating blindly until we either dies a species or evolve into something better. Only time will tell.
February 25th, 2025 00:11
RSM0812 said:
I was going to school to be a history teacher before I dropped out bc of mostly money problems. This puece tells the story of history itself. Repeating blindly until we either dies a species or evolve into something better. Only time will tell.
February 25th, 2025 00:11
Cursed To Repeat
sorenbarrett said:
A social commentary of our present day. Sadly it is true. What more can I say but well written
February 24th, 2025 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
A social commentary of our present day. Sadly it is true. What more can I say but well written
February 24th, 2025 12:00
Cursed To Repeat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There\'s much truth in this, for sure. Well done, Kurt!
February 24th, 2025 11:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There\'s much truth in this, for sure. Well done, Kurt!
February 24th, 2025 11:42
Orphaned Moments
sorenbarrett said:
Another well written poem that rolls off the tongue
February 23rd, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another well written poem that rolls off the tongue
February 23rd, 2025 11:22
The Empty Hourglass
sorenbarrett said:
Once again masterfully crafted the blend of imagery and metaphor in such nice rhyme
February 22nd, 2025 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
Once again masterfully crafted the blend of imagery and metaphor in such nice rhyme
February 22nd, 2025 13:43
To David
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A fitting tribute to your friend! Well done, Kurt! ❤️🙏
February 21st, 2025 12:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A fitting tribute to your friend! Well done, Kurt! ❤️🙏
February 21st, 2025 12:01
Breathless
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Short. But wow. Profound. Well done, Kurt!
February 20th, 2025 21:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Short. But wow. Profound. Well done, Kurt!
February 20th, 2025 21:08
Breathless
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it does and here is the pyramid and in it the mystery of truth. Truth in the unspoken, emptiness holds much that goes unseen. A lovely write
February 20th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it does and here is the pyramid and in it the mystery of truth. Truth in the unspoken, emptiness holds much that goes unseen. A lovely write
February 20th, 2025 10:44
Waiting For Supper
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophy put into reality, poetry put into metaphor, esoteric into reality. Very nice
February 19th, 2025 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophy put into reality, poetry put into metaphor, esoteric into reality. Very nice
February 19th, 2025 11:26
Within The Wind
sorenbarrett said:
Much longer than most of your works this one has such depth and contemplation in metaphor. I love the use of north in this as this is the masonic direction of lack of knowledge and where it come from intuition or from within. Very nicely done
February 17th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
Much longer than most of your works this one has such depth and contemplation in metaphor. I love the use of north in this as this is the masonic direction of lack of knowledge and where it come from intuition or from within. Very nicely done
February 17th, 2025 09:21
Within The Wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"to leave us zero zum\" indeed. Well done, my friend.
February 17th, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"to leave us zero zum\" indeed. Well done, my friend.
February 17th, 2025 08:54
To Fight Another Day ...
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to those who have fought and died. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to those who have fought and died. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 14:06
To Fight Another Day ...
Ma5on said:
Kurt,
Your piece has a strong, solemn rhythm which evokes a deep sense of remembrance & sacrifice.
You paint a vivid picture of the battlefield enhancing the moments of struggle. The brevity of each stanza gives the poem a sharp, haunting quality that fits its theme of loss & resilience. Your flow feels natural & not forced.
A touching & evocative piece.
As always, a solid piece of writing,
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 13:57
Ma5on said:
Kurt,
Your piece has a strong, solemn rhythm which evokes a deep sense of remembrance & sacrifice.
You paint a vivid picture of the battlefield enhancing the moments of struggle. The brevity of each stanza gives the poem a sharp, haunting quality that fits its theme of loss & resilience. Your flow feels natural & not forced.
A touching & evocative piece.
As always, a solid piece of writing,
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 13:57
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