Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



Waiting For Dawn
charlesbarrett said:

Great work. Those last 2 lines will stick with me. So much was said in so few lines. Thank you for sharing.

July 24th, 2017 11:11

Waiting For Dawn
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Cat. My favorite line too!

Kurt

July 24th, 2017 11:01

Waiting For Dawn
burning-embers said:

Sombre strong truth imparted with skill and economy. Somehow simple but immensely strong. Goes into my Fav\'s.

July 24th, 2017 10:36

This Moment Transcendent
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Great takes, Louis.

Thanks

Kurt

July 23rd, 2017 10:42

This Moment Transcendent
Louis Gibbs said:

On \"Betrothed\" ... \'Whatever we conquer is with us forever.\' On \"This Moment Transendent\" ... \'As we age, we become more reflective upon, and appreciative of, the present moment.\' This what I take from these two fine expressions, Kurt. Well done!

July 23rd, 2017 10:27

Never To Dry (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Fred

July 22nd, 2017 22:48

Never To Dry (+2)
FredPeyer said:

I read all, loved all, but the last stanza of the last poem is the one that stayed in my mind!

July 22nd, 2017 15:05

New Pathway
FredPeyer said:

Great poem Kurt, do like the 5th stanza and also the repetition of \'Dying in the moment, reborn to eternity\', which in my opinion also could stand alone as a two-liner.

July 21st, 2017 11:16

New Pathway
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Cat.... and I wish the same for you.

Great weekend!

Kurt

July 21st, 2017 10:44

New Pathway
Louis Gibbs said:

The last phrase conveys much truth ... the pathway to eternity points inward, indeed! I appreciate this one, Kurt! Thanks.

July 21st, 2017 10:25

Soul To Repast (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And as always, you are too kind.

Thanks, Christina

Kurt

July 20th, 2017 22:02

Soul To Repast (+3)
Christina8 said:

I can\'t pick my favorite. Superb poetry at it\'s finest!

July 20th, 2017 19:57

Soul To Repast (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And I\'ll be honored every time I read those 3 letters, Fred.

Thanks again

Kurt

July 20th, 2017 18:45

Soul To Repast (+3)
FredPeyer said:

Kurt you are so good a writer, I just keep repeating myself from one poem to the next, or have to try like crazy to come up with new praise. So from now on I will only type TIC (Totally Incredible Creation) to save time writing and reading!

July 20th, 2017 18:28

Soul To Repast (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks, Q

July 20th, 2017 10:08

Soul To Repast (+3)
Q said:

Nicely done. Great rhythm and rhymes.

July 20th, 2017 09:43

Toll Mine To Pay (+1)
kevin browne said:

such a beauty of a poem here with every word fitting perfectly in place. you don\'t get to read pieces like this very often. beautiful my friend.

July 19th, 2017 15:09

Toll Mine To Pay (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks so much for the very meaningful words. They are
deeply appreciated.

Kurt

July 19th, 2017 11:42

Toll Mine To Pay (+1)
Lost at the beginning said:

Absolutely love love love this, so deep and meaningful in such a short write. The perfect type of poetry, thank you

July 19th, 2017 11:13

Toll Mine To Pay (+1)
Louis Gibbs said:

\" The deeper I travel, newer endings begin\" ... what a captivating phrase! A poignant, powerful read, Kurt!

July 19th, 2017 11:02

Until Eyes Close
Christina8 said:

This is such a beautiful piece that I cannot believe I missed it! It\'s so deep and makes me think. An unending song. Perfect! Into the faves it goes!

July 19th, 2017 01:17

Verses Deboned
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And your kind words make the writing worthwhile.

Thanks, Fred.

Kurt

July 18th, 2017 23:00

Verses Deboned
FredPeyer said:

Kurt, you are one of the few who can say something simple like \"one cannot write in consensus, but has to listen to the inner voice\" in an incredibly beautiful, artistic, and imaginative way.
And yes, I do like the second poem too!

July 18th, 2017 21:11

Verses Deboned
Louis Gibbs said:

Dark and mysterious, an intriguing poem, Kurt. I enjoyed reading this one!

July 18th, 2017 18:44

Verses Deboned
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks so much, Hood. You\'re very kind!

Kurt

July 18th, 2017 16:41

Until Eyes Close
FredPeyer said:

If I close my eyes, I can hear your song, and maybe finish it.

July 17th, 2017 13:11

Until Eyes Close
Louis Gibbs said:

It is a song without end, I believe. Fine poem, Kurt!

July 17th, 2017 12:59

Hear Then Speak
FredPeyer said:

Incredible Kurt, the act of creation in six lines. But there is more I think. We need to listen carefully to the voices from our inner selves, then take our time to manifest them.
Right or wrong, I do like it.

July 15th, 2017 18:08

Hear Then Speak
Louis Gibbs said:

You describe the process by which our Bards prompt our poems, I presume. I can relate to it fully, and appreciate this fine offering, Kurt.

July 15th, 2017 09:01

Veracious To Lay (+1)
FredPeyer said:

Kurt, you put me into a dilemma! Cannot decide which one of the two really great poems here I do like better. I guess I have to take the two-for-one deal!

July 14th, 2017 15:24



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