The Wind
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks !

October 31st, 2016 19:39

The Wind
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thank you, Tony!

October 31st, 2016 15:32

The Wind
Christina8 said:

Beautiful message in your poem!

October 31st, 2016 09:35

False Hope Again
Kurt Philip Behm said:



October 30th, 2016 08:48

False Hope Again
Christina8 said:

This is an excellent poem. I love how you wrote \"the paradigm floats on swamps that drain\". Breathtaking metaphor. A new favorite!

October 30th, 2016 08:45

All Wonder Returned
Augustus said:

I wonder about that sort of stuff, how a writer from 300 years ago would feel seeing his lines read today. Just leads to more unanswered questions. Enjoyed.

October 29th, 2016 12:18

All Wonder Returned
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Yep, you need to keep that front and center. Your readers will forgive almost
anything except being inauthentic!

October 29th, 2016 10:04

All Wonder Returned
Christina8 said:

Nice poem.. Isn\'t it great to write for yourself and not for someone else because you have to?

October 29th, 2016 10:01

One More Tomorrow
BSmooth said:

Love it.. Amazing job... I have a question about publishing... Where do you go and how do you get them to see

October 28th, 2016 14:21

One More Tomorrow
Tony36 said:

Beautiful and well written, great write

October 28th, 2016 10:14

One More Tomorrow
Christina8 said:

This is a really excellent piece! Your words are graceful. As always! :-)

October 28th, 2016 08:36

Just Because
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Chrissy

October 27th, 2016 14:51

Just Because
Augustus said:

Things just happen. I like it.

October 27th, 2016 14:32

Just Because
writemeasmile said:

This is beautiful!

October 27th, 2016 09:25

My Wait Begins Again
Christina8 said:

So now you have a cold shoulder and you\'ve washed your footsteps from the sand. I was gonna ask if there was still hope there was still some sign of you/her/it? But I think I got my answer from a previous review. Great poem.

October 26th, 2016 12:19