Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
False Hope Again
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Chrissy. You\'re too kind!
Kurt
October 30th, 2016 08:47
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Chrissy. You\'re too kind!
Kurt
October 30th, 2016 08:47
False Hope Again
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent poem. I love how you wrote \"the paradigm floats on swamps that drain\". Breathtaking metaphor. A new favorite!
October 30th, 2016 08:45
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent poem. I love how you wrote \"the paradigm floats on swamps that drain\". Breathtaking metaphor. A new favorite!
October 30th, 2016 08:45
All Wonder Returned
Kurt Philip Behm said:
If his writing was honest and authentic, it should still read that way.
Thanks
October 29th, 2016 12:26
Kurt Philip Behm said:
If his writing was honest and authentic, it should still read that way.
Thanks
October 29th, 2016 12:26
All Wonder Returned
Augustus said:
I wonder about that sort of stuff, how a writer from 300 years ago would feel seeing his lines read today. Just leads to more unanswered questions. Enjoyed.
October 29th, 2016 12:18
Augustus said:
I wonder about that sort of stuff, how a writer from 300 years ago would feel seeing his lines read today. Just leads to more unanswered questions. Enjoyed.
October 29th, 2016 12:18
All Wonder Returned
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Yep, you need to keep that front and center. Your readers will forgive almost
anything except being inauthentic!
October 29th, 2016 10:04
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Yep, you need to keep that front and center. Your readers will forgive almost
anything except being inauthentic!
October 29th, 2016 10:04
All Wonder Returned
WriteBeLight said:
That first line is great! Great poem.
October 29th, 2016 10:04
WriteBeLight said:
That first line is great! Great poem.
October 29th, 2016 10:04
All Wonder Returned
Christina8 said:
Nice poem.. Isn\'t it great to write for yourself and not for someone else because you have to?
October 29th, 2016 10:01
Christina8 said:
Nice poem.. Isn\'t it great to write for yourself and not for someone else because you have to?
October 29th, 2016 10:01
One More Tomorrow
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. You have to keep submitting, rejection is hard. It takes a lot of trying ........
October 28th, 2016 18:40
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. You have to keep submitting, rejection is hard. It takes a lot of trying ........
October 28th, 2016 18:40
One More Tomorrow
BSmooth said:
Love it.. Amazing job... I have a question about publishing... Where do you go and how do you get them to see
October 28th, 2016 14:21
BSmooth said:
Love it.. Amazing job... I have a question about publishing... Where do you go and how do you get them to see
October 28th, 2016 14:21
One More Tomorrow
Augustus said:
I need a prayer about right now. This one is lovely.
October 28th, 2016 14:13
Augustus said:
I need a prayer about right now. This one is lovely.
October 28th, 2016 14:13
One More Tomorrow
Jeff said:
I really like this one... Very beautifully written... Great work
October 28th, 2016 08:38
Jeff said:
I really like this one... Very beautifully written... Great work
October 28th, 2016 08:38
One More Tomorrow
Christina8 said:
This is a really excellent piece! Your words are graceful. As always! :-)
October 28th, 2016 08:36
Christina8 said:
This is a really excellent piece! Your words are graceful. As always! :-)
October 28th, 2016 08:36
Turning Me Back Around
Christina8 said:
This is a really nice piece. I also think we should thank Laura! I just can\'t wait to see what you come up with next!
October 27th, 2016 21:31
Christina8 said:
This is a really nice piece. I also think we should thank Laura! I just can\'t wait to see what you come up with next!
October 27th, 2016 21:31
My Wait Begins Again
Christina8 said:
So now you have a cold shoulder and you\'ve washed your footsteps from the sand. I was gonna ask if there was still hope there was still some sign of you/her/it? But I think I got my answer from a previous review. Great poem.
October 26th, 2016 12:19
Christina8 said:
So now you have a cold shoulder and you\'ve washed your footsteps from the sand. I was gonna ask if there was still hope there was still some sign of you/her/it? But I think I got my answer from a previous review. Great poem.
October 26th, 2016 12:19
All Kindled Lies Afire
Christina8 said:
All around love the metaphors and the cadence of your poem. Fabulous!
October 26th, 2016 12:11
Christina8 said:
All around love the metaphors and the cadence of your poem. Fabulous!
October 26th, 2016 12:11
Free Of Its Stain
Christina8 said:
OK, if we were giving stars away here i\"d give you 11! Which is impossible because poetry websites only hand out 6. LOL What beautiful rhyme scheme. \"washes guilt free of its stain\" What an exceptional line. I\'ve used the word stain in a few poems of mine to depict hurt or the like. If I went into every line I\'d be here all day. It\'s magnificent. :-)
October 26th, 2016 12:02
Christina8 said:
OK, if we were giving stars away here i\"d give you 11! Which is impossible because poetry websites only hand out 6. LOL What beautiful rhyme scheme. \"washes guilt free of its stain\" What an exceptional line. I\'ve used the word stain in a few poems of mine to depict hurt or the like. If I went into every line I\'d be here all day. It\'s magnificent. :-)
October 26th, 2016 12:02
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