Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



Walking With Verse (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

ā€¢ ā€œLocked In Kayentaā€

Quit my job?!

Absolutely...

Will not keep MOTHER waiting...

I shall not disappoint her!

Sheā€™s an irresistible beauty...

...a beauty to be revered!

May 29th, 2019 14:54

Walking With Verse (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Yesā€”WARM!

May 29th, 2019 12:16

Walking With Verse (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œWalking With Verseā€
Filled with great images!
I especially liked...

ā€˜Deep down where itā€™s warmā€™...

I envision this as a wonderful nook for those formed words to cluster!

~Laura~




May 29th, 2019 11:35

Symbiosis Reborn (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Nice take! Thanks for reading.

May 29th, 2019 10:41

Symbiosis Reborn (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œSymbiosis Rebornā€
Iā€™ve read this poem several times. Each time Iā€™ve read it, the following interpretation (mine) keeps recurring...

I see two individuals reconnecting after an interrupted relationship! It seems that the one whoā€™s speaking craves for that interrupted relationship to be whole again!

I enjoyed reading each word...and while reading, I thought about its relatability!
Quite interesting...to say the least!

~Laura~



May 29th, 2019 09:35

A Reckoning (+2)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

A great well penned poem my friend!

Youā€™re spot on with the four tercets! The fourth sums it all up...

ā€˜ā€˜In all things
thereā€™s is a reckoning
ā€”where truth and lies atoneā€™ā€™

Much to reflect upon!

~Laura~



May 28th, 2019 10:05

Symbiosis Reborn (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Tristan. My son is named Trystan (with a Y).

Great name...

Kurt

May 27th, 2019 13:24

Symbiosis Reborn (+4)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Great writes. I love the spiritual realities behind each of them. Truly deep and profound poems.

May 27th, 2019 13:20

Sleep Well My Loveā€”Goodbye (+3)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

It\'s possible I could have posted it before, but my notes don\'t show that.

Thanks

Kurt

May 25th, 2019 16:11

Sleep Well My Loveā€”Goodbye (+3)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œSleep Well My Love
ā€”Goodbyeā€

This poem appears to be very familiar!
Three possibilities...
1) maybe you posted it once before...
2) maybe Iā€™ve dreamt it...
3) or perhaps Iā€™ve lived it...

Whichever one it is,
Iā€™ve enjoyed reading it!

ā€¢ ā€œA Joy / A Curseā€
With your permission, Iā€™d like to change the pronouns !šŸ˜‰

ā€¢ ā€œEmptiness Revealsā€
At times ā€˜Emptiness Revealsā€™ itself at the most inopportune time!
A revealing piece!

~Laura~

May 25th, 2019 15:27

Treasure The Silence (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Truly my honor...

Kurt

May 24th, 2019 09:25

Treasure The Silence (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Reading this beautiful write has transported me to a place where Iā€™ve wished and have wanted to be!!

Iā€™m on that motorcycle...
holding on tightly...
not wishing to letting go!

Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~šŸŒ»

May 24th, 2019 09:22

The Proffer (+4)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

So glad you\'re feeling better. Thanks Laura.

Welcome Home!

Kurt

May 24th, 2019 08:48

The Proffer (+4)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€˜Within every verse,
many meanings resideā€™...

So true my dear poet!

I read these five exceptional poems yesterday...
during my jet leg!
Iā€™m reading them again today...
while all refreshed!
Iā€™m confident Iā€™ll read them again tomorrow...
...and each time I do,
is like a breath of fresh air on a Spring morning!
A new interpretation has been accomplished!
Today is a happy one!

~Laura~šŸŒ»







May 24th, 2019 04:21

Pre-Ordained (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks OB. We all have to save ourselves! I think I remember
jack Kerouac saying that....

Kurt

May 22nd, 2019 12:23

Nothing More (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Dan, very kind!

May 16th, 2019 15:24

Nothing More (+2)
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, very powerful stuff my friend must add it to my list
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect

May 16th, 2019 15:09

Prose (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Gary. Poetry is supreme, with prose as the handmaiden.

Kurt

May 14th, 2019 21:09

Prose (+2)
Gary Edward Geraci said:

If indeed Supreme - the Word (prose) indeed and rightfully commands our infinite praise (a literal dilation).

May 14th, 2019 20:49

Prose (+2)
Crystal Hope said:

an excellent read.

May 14th, 2019 14:38

A Turkish Mother To The Kaiser (WW1) +8
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œA Turkish Mother To The Kaiser(WW1)ā€
Heart-wrenching and painful...
but a super write!

CONGRATULATIONS on finishing your 3rd anthology!

~Laura~

May 12th, 2019 16:08

A Turkish Mother To The Kaiser (WW1) +8
Poetic Dan said:

Wow...
Thank you

May 12th, 2019 10:20

Last Choice (+10)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

A poet couldn\'t ask for more. We\'re all broken in differing ways.
Life (IMHO) is about finding those \'fixers\' that can change and
reshape everything.

Sometimes they\'re people, but often they are moments of clarity
that happen seemingly for no reason but change everything.

May 10th, 2019 22:46

Last Choice (+10)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œTo Love No Moreā€
This poem has captivated my attention! Each time I read it, I have a different interpretation!

~Laura~



May 10th, 2019 20:57

Last Choice (+10)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œLast Choiceā€
As I began to read this exceptional poem, I thought I would be pondering upon its content for a while...until I read the last couplet...

ā€˜Will your search end enlightened
ā€”or in twilight behindā€™

...and the šŸ’” went on!!

Awesome read!!šŸ’–

~Laura~šŸŒ»

May 10th, 2019 11:24

Missing The Dream (+5)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

I don\'t deserve it, but I treasure every one of your comments.
No one \'gets me\' like you do. Thanks again, Laura.

Kurt

May 9th, 2019 23:56

Missing The Dream (+5)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

Intriguing, captivating, and a delight to read and inhale the breath of your poems...oxygen for the soul!
Your ā€˜written word a treasured giftā€™!

~Laura~

May 9th, 2019 22:20

The Doorway (+7)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

I truly enjoyed reading all eight poems! Each one had its own unique resonating message! Iā€™m very appreciative of your willingness to share...not only your poems, but also your comments! šŸ’–

~Laura~

May 9th, 2019 10:30

New Memories Converse (+7)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Good insight. They were written at the same time.

May 7th, 2019 11:20

New Memories Converse (+7)
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Kurt,

ā€¢ ā€œNew Memories Converseā€
Thought provoking and amazing!
I sensed a deep feeling and relationship to
ā€œAlonelinessā€!

~Laura~

May 7th, 2019 11:10



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