Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
The Flames Dance (+3)
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully done, thank you very much.
October 20th, 2018 09:40
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully done, thank you very much.
October 20th, 2018 09:40
Goodbye Tomorrow
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Jo. Your very insightful comments made my night!
Kurt
October 13th, 2018 20:44
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Jo. Your very insightful comments made my night!
Kurt
October 13th, 2018 20:44
Goodbye Tomorrow
Jo March said:
This such a beautiful poem! I especially liked the lines \"Muses cry / as shadows fade / No tracks to follow / no path within\" and \"This moment orphaned / the night so long\". It\'s so beautiful. It makes me think of how important it is to never lose hope. The path is inside us. Nobody points us to it. It should be within us and if it isn\'t then we really are lost. I think that our hopes fade only when we have gotten off our path. Thank you for the poem. I really enjoyed it.
October 13th, 2018 13:33
Jo March said:
This such a beautiful poem! I especially liked the lines \"Muses cry / as shadows fade / No tracks to follow / no path within\" and \"This moment orphaned / the night so long\". It\'s so beautiful. It makes me think of how important it is to never lose hope. The path is inside us. Nobody points us to it. It should be within us and if it isn\'t then we really are lost. I think that our hopes fade only when we have gotten off our path. Thank you for the poem. I really enjoyed it.
October 13th, 2018 13:33
New Hampshire Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Kurt. Those tracks in our passed soon disappear but we always new ones into our future.
October 12th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Kurt. Those tracks in our passed soon disappear but we always new ones into our future.
October 12th, 2018 00:38
And Nothing At All (+7)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Eight SUPER postings!
You began with āwineā
and ended with one of
your āLaurasā!
Two of my favorite subjects!
āBringing with it everything
āand nothing at allā
āUntil capturing myself
āin the words of your songā
I very much enjoyed and appreciated reading your exceptional poetry!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 11:12
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Eight SUPER postings!
You began with āwineā
and ended with one of
your āLaurasā!
Two of my favorite subjects!
āBringing with it everything
āand nothing at allā
āUntil capturing myself
āin the words of your songā
I very much enjoyed and appreciated reading your exceptional poetry!
~Laura~
October 11th, 2018 11:12
Myself, I Bring (+5)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Two more little gems for my reading enjoyment!
Veritas Vincit!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 18:02
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Two more little gems for my reading enjoyment!
Veritas Vincit!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 18:02
Myself, I Bring (+5)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Kurt, your musings are unparalleled.
\"Obsessio\" is a favorite of mine and the lines \"Destroying with every thought the statusā¦ āof the status quo\" seems appropriate for today\'s political environment.
You may have to sign up for substitute teaching. The requirements are only 60 college credits and you choose which grades you prefer...even K-4. The money\'s not bad either. :)
October 9th, 2018 16:35
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Kurt, your musings are unparalleled.
\"Obsessio\" is a favorite of mine and the lines \"Destroying with every thought the statusā¦ āof the status quo\" seems appropriate for today\'s political environment.
You may have to sign up for substitute teaching. The requirements are only 60 college credits and you choose which grades you prefer...even K-4. The money\'s not bad either. :)
October 9th, 2018 16:35
Myself, I Bring (+5)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I like the structure of āWhat Drives Me Stillā and its message...of course!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 12:11
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I like the structure of āWhat Drives Me Stillā and its message...of course!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 12:11
Myself, I Bring (+5)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
One of your muses is working overtime!
Lucky for us, your readers!
Two great reads!
I especially liked the couplet...
āLiving in a rented room
āto me, myself I bringā
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 07:30
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
One of your muses is working overtime!
Lucky for us, your readers!
Two great reads!
I especially liked the couplet...
āLiving in a rented room
āto me, myself I bringā
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 07:30
Myself, I Bring (+5)
kevin browne said:
Arrive I shall divorced from the egoistic self separated to what is best for each other. Interesting write!!!
October 9th, 2018 02:40
kevin browne said:
Arrive I shall divorced from the egoistic self separated to what is best for each other. Interesting write!!!
October 9th, 2018 02:40
Legacy Of Fear (+7)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Six outstanding writes!
Of course, I truly enjoyed reading the second and the third! They made me feel like I should get up and dance all the way to the Nittany Mountains! Theyāre are calling! š
Your muse certainly inspired you to ādanceā the night away in that ādingy remote garage apartment āand be forever yours. Her inspiration delights your readers...especially yours truly! It is an honor to share her name!
Truly amazing! Thank you for sharing these gems!
~Laura~
October 8th, 2018 18:22
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Six outstanding writes!
Of course, I truly enjoyed reading the second and the third! They made me feel like I should get up and dance all the way to the Nittany Mountains! Theyāre are calling! š
Your muse certainly inspired you to ādanceā the night away in that ādingy remote garage apartment āand be forever yours. Her inspiration delights your readers...especially yours truly! It is an honor to share her name!
Truly amazing! Thank you for sharing these gems!
~Laura~
October 8th, 2018 18:22
Legacy Of Fear (+7)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Kurt, your poems featuring fear are excellent. I loved those that referenced \"Laura.\"
The first or introductory quatrain, was exceptional. The line \"On a battlefield lined with the blood of dead letters\" emphasized the use of fresh language and its originality is impressive.
An excellent write! Thanks for sharing. :)
October 8th, 2018 16:43
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Kurt, your poems featuring fear are excellent. I loved those that referenced \"Laura.\"
The first or introductory quatrain, was exceptional. The line \"On a battlefield lined with the blood of dead letters\" emphasized the use of fresh language and its originality is impressive.
An excellent write! Thanks for sharing. :)
October 8th, 2018 16:43
In The End (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura. It\'s weeks like this past one
that make the words \'target rich.\'
Kurt
October 7th, 2018 21:12
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura. It\'s weeks like this past one
that make the words \'target rich.\'
Kurt
October 7th, 2018 21:12
In The End (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Two super writes!
ā¢A perfect description of a politician!
ā¢Yes, you are giving us the best gift of all...
YOUR WRITINGS!
~Laura~
October 7th, 2018 05:06
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Two super writes!
ā¢A perfect description of a politician!
ā¢Yes, you are giving us the best gift of all...
YOUR WRITINGS!
~Laura~
October 7th, 2018 05:06
I Stand Accused (+4)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Sentiments beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
October 6th, 2018 13:43
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Sentiments beautifully expressed!
~Laura~
October 6th, 2018 13:43
Three Messages (+3)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Kurt, there are so many words of wisdom in your poetic thoughts.
We the readers, enjoy them immensely. I especially love
\"Incompetenceā¦
much more dangerous than corruption āwhen skillfully applied.\"
Thanks for sharing! :)
October 6th, 2018 12:08
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Kurt, there are so many words of wisdom in your poetic thoughts.
We the readers, enjoy them immensely. I especially love
\"Incompetenceā¦
much more dangerous than corruption āwhen skillfully applied.\"
Thanks for sharing! :)
October 6th, 2018 12:08
Three Messages (+3)
Crystal Hope said:
Wow! These words were excellent. Nice work!
October 6th, 2018 10:59
Crystal Hope said:
Wow! These words were excellent. Nice work!
October 6th, 2018 10:59
Three Messages (+3)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
So much truth in your writes! So much damage has been done!
Today I listened to a methodical, respectful, and compelling speech regarding the confirmation of the Supreme Court justice.
So many wrongs to be righted!
~Laura~
Of the ones you just added as I was commenting, I love, love āTrue Immortalityā!
October 5th, 2018 20:26
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
So much truth in your writes! So much damage has been done!
Today I listened to a methodical, respectful, and compelling speech regarding the confirmation of the Supreme Court justice.
So many wrongs to be righted!
~Laura~
Of the ones you just added as I was commenting, I love, love āTrue Immortalityā!
October 5th, 2018 20:26
Looking Back (+7)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Three splendid gems!
If other men see themselves in you, this world will be humanityās safe haven!
Youāre sharing so much with so many! Thank you for your gift to us!
~Laura~
October 4th, 2018 11:50
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Three splendid gems!
If other men see themselves in you, this world will be humanityās safe haven!
Youāre sharing so much with so many! Thank you for your gift to us!
~Laura~
October 4th, 2018 11:50
Bounty Of Hell (+6)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ Summer Song
A joyous āsongā to wake up to!āļø
The four seasons of our life...
so beautifully expressed! Every couplet touched my heart and soul!
~Laura~
October 4th, 2018 09:26
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ Summer Song
A joyous āsongā to wake up to!āļø
The four seasons of our life...
so beautifully expressed! Every couplet touched my heart and soul!
~Laura~
October 4th, 2018 09:26
Bounty Of Hell (+6)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Iāve been reading the poems youāve posted today many times over! Most of them Iām associating with the subject we commented on yesterday! I canāt get it out of my mind...for now!
āHeadstone Forever Blankā made me think of the homeless man found dead in the street! So sad!
Superb writes as always!
~Laura~
October 3rd, 2018 16:03
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Iāve been reading the poems youāve posted today many times over! Most of them Iām associating with the subject we commented on yesterday! I canāt get it out of my mind...for now!
āHeadstone Forever Blankā made me think of the homeless man found dead in the street! So sad!
Superb writes as always!
~Laura~
October 3rd, 2018 16:03
Demon Lie Exposed (+3)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Three extraordinary writes!
I was going to comment on ā Demon Lie Exposedā!
After reading all the comments already made, I donāt think it is necessary. Adding a comment by me would be of a very personal nature which Iām not ready to share on a public forum!
What a precious gift for your granddaughter on her christening day! She will cherish your gift forevermore! You are both blessed to have each other!
~Laura~
October 2nd, 2018 16:42
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Three extraordinary writes!
I was going to comment on ā Demon Lie Exposedā!
After reading all the comments already made, I donāt think it is necessary. Adding a comment by me would be of a very personal nature which Iām not ready to share on a public forum!
What a precious gift for your granddaughter on her christening day! She will cherish your gift forevermore! You are both blessed to have each other!
~Laura~
October 2nd, 2018 16:42
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