Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
A Hobo\'s Last Prayer
jarcher54 said:
Very rich imagery, a little elusive, yet clear. I had to go back to the title. I enjoy how the title enriches the poem. I found myself wondering if the speaker would catch that last ride \"home.\"
August 5th, 2020 23:53
jarcher54 said:
Very rich imagery, a little elusive, yet clear. I had to go back to the title. I enjoy how the title enriches the poem. I found myself wondering if the speaker would catch that last ride \"home.\"
August 5th, 2020 23:53
Fantasia
L. B. Mek said:
hindsight often has the luxury of relaxed perspectives, that the turmoil of existence in the now -between one hurdle and the next bite of sustenance we must hunt - doesn\'t allow,
so naturally we are flawed creatures but that undeniable truth, of yearning to be the best we can be, has merit in its own right I think
so we must accept and appreciate ourselves, before others can do the same for us
engaging writing, asking necessary questions
August 4th, 2020 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
hindsight often has the luxury of relaxed perspectives, that the turmoil of existence in the now -between one hurdle and the next bite of sustenance we must hunt - doesn\'t allow,
so naturally we are flawed creatures but that undeniable truth, of yearning to be the best we can be, has merit in its own right I think
so we must accept and appreciate ourselves, before others can do the same for us
engaging writing, asking necessary questions
August 4th, 2020 02:16
Fantasia
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well, be a false legacy but when my wife passed recently she became a bigger part of my memory.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
It may well, be a false legacy but when my wife passed recently she became a bigger part of my memory.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 23:53
Memory Lane
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can be so powerful within us.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories can be so powerful within us.
Andy
August 3rd, 2020 00:05
The Quiet Roar
jarcher54 said:
Nicely done... you evoke many thoughts, emotions, sounds, and even possible plots-- who is down under, what do they cry, why is there thunder and that precise moment? In so few elegant words.
July 8th, 2020 02:03
jarcher54 said:
Nicely done... you evoke many thoughts, emotions, sounds, and even possible plots-- who is down under, what do they cry, why is there thunder and that precise moment? In so few elegant words.
July 8th, 2020 02:03
Gale Warning (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āGale Warningā
A very interesting poem;
chock-full of interpretations.
ā¢ āPast That Placeā
Music transcends all boundaries.
I did enjoyed these two poems. Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
July 2nd, 2020 17:44
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āGale Warningā
A very interesting poem;
chock-full of interpretations.
ā¢ āPast That Placeā
Music transcends all boundaries.
I did enjoyed these two poems. Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
July 2nd, 2020 17:44
Following Storm
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Wow...
This sounds a bit
dark to me.
Hope allās well.
Lauraš»
June 24th, 2020 22:26
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Wow...
This sounds a bit
dark to me.
Hope allās well.
Lauraš»
June 24th, 2020 22:26
Heat Blinds
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I do wonder about that flame!
Another gem for me
to ponder upon today.
Take care.
Lauraš»
June 21st, 2020 11:03
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I do wonder about that flame!
Another gem for me
to ponder upon today.
Take care.
Lauraš»
June 21st, 2020 11:03
The Veil
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āThe Veilā
Iāve read this a few times. Each time I read it,
I try to imagine a
ātruth wrapped in a lieā.
āthe truth wrapped in a lieā
ā six powerful words.
Lauraš»
June 20th, 2020 18:56
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āThe Veilā
Iāve read this a few times. Each time I read it,
I try to imagine a
ātruth wrapped in a lieā.
āthe truth wrapped in a lieā
ā six powerful words.
Lauraš»
June 20th, 2020 18:56
To Count On (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Three excellent poems filled with much to ponder upon.
Iām particularly attracted to āEach Choiceā .
Take care.
Lauraš»
June 20th, 2020 09:18
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Three excellent poems filled with much to ponder upon.
Iām particularly attracted to āEach Choiceā .
Take care.
Lauraš»
June 20th, 2020 09:18
Resonant Voices
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Yes, at times we are our own worst enemies! Must be aware of that inner villain and not let it get the best of us!
Glad to read your posting today!š
Laura š»
June 18th, 2020 14:02
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Yes, at times we are our own worst enemies! Must be aware of that inner villain and not let it get the best of us!
Glad to read your posting today!š
Laura š»
June 18th, 2020 14:02
No Escape
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Good Morning!
Your postings have been sorely missed. So happy to see one this morning.
Your words speak the truth;
there is āNo Escapeā.
Stay safe!šš»
Laura š»
June 5th, 2020 09:05
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Good Morning!
Your postings have been sorely missed. So happy to see one this morning.
Your words speak the truth;
there is āNo Escapeā.
Stay safe!šš»
Laura š»
June 5th, 2020 09:05
Writers
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I always welcome the opportunity for
āānew roads to be shownā
So thank you
my dear writer for
ātakingā yours truly
onto the freeway
āwhere aloneā
I sometimes choose
not to āgoā !
This is very relatable and
very much to my liking.
Laura
May 18th, 2020 11:56
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I always welcome the opportunity for
āānew roads to be shownā
So thank you
my dear writer for
ātakingā yours truly
onto the freeway
āwhere aloneā
I sometimes choose
not to āgoā !
This is very relatable and
very much to my liking.
Laura
May 18th, 2020 11:56
Abandoned Tears (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Another āDreamsleepā gem!
Like rubbing salt in a wound...
No matter how much we cry,
No matter how much we give,
The pain is always there!
Laura
May 17th, 2020 14:34
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Another āDreamsleepā gem!
Like rubbing salt in a wound...
No matter how much we cry,
No matter how much we give,
The pain is always there!
Laura
May 17th, 2020 14:34
Abandoned Tears (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks and no \'with\' is correct. Not being able to sleep \'with\' fury and shame.
May 17th, 2020 11:40
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks and no \'with\' is correct. Not being able to sleep \'with\' fury and shame.
May 17th, 2020 11:40
Abandoned Tears (+1)
BoxMyHeart said:
I like your poem overall.
Sorry if this sounds picky but did you mean with(out) fury and shame?
May 17th, 2020 11:31
BoxMyHeart said:
I like your poem overall.
Sorry if this sounds picky but did you mean with(out) fury and shame?
May 17th, 2020 11:31
Seasons To Mourn (+3)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Great poetry!
I especially like
āResonationā!
Thank you for sharing .
Laura
May 10th, 2020 12:16
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Great poetry!
I especially like
āResonationā!
Thank you for sharing .
Laura
May 10th, 2020 12:16
The Reach (+3)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your scripted āDreamsleepā thoughts are truly sobering...
to say the least!
Thank you for sharing your pen with your readers.
Laura
May 8th, 2020 14:30
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Your scripted āDreamsleepā thoughts are truly sobering...
to say the least!
Thank you for sharing your pen with your readers.
Laura
May 8th, 2020 14:30
Mournings Roar (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. My Ode to the Navajo, Zuni, and Hopi that live in the Southwest.
Shiprock is their St Peterās Basilica. Itās about all they have left till we figure out how to take that away from them too.
May 7th, 2020 12:58
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. My Ode to the Navajo, Zuni, and Hopi that live in the Southwest.
Shiprock is their St Peterās Basilica. Itās about all they have left till we figure out how to take that away from them too.
May 7th, 2020 12:58
Mournings Roar (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Wow...
Read this with a heavy heart.
An extraordinary piece!
Laura
May 7th, 2020 12:10
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Wow...
Read this with a heavy heart.
An extraordinary piece!
Laura
May 7th, 2020 12:10
Chasing Miles...
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
An author without a poem,
a reader without an author
Laura
May 5th, 2020 07:12
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
An author without a poem,
a reader without an author
Laura
May 5th, 2020 07:12
Vitam Aut Mortem (+2)
Merissa said:
I really like this poem because I\'ve had similar thoughts myself. :-)
April 29th, 2020 13:34
Merissa said:
I really like this poem because I\'ve had similar thoughts myself. :-)
April 29th, 2020 13:34
Ames ā 1967 (+1)
FredPeyer said:
After reading \'Ames\' I wondered what the people of 1967 Ames would think of today\'s world.
April 26th, 2020 12:41
FredPeyer said:
After reading \'Ames\' I wondered what the people of 1967 Ames would think of today\'s world.
April 26th, 2020 12:41
Heaven\'s Chord (+1)
FredPeyer said:
Now if the angels could only play country music!
April 23rd, 2020 12:46
FredPeyer said:
Now if the angels could only play country music!
April 23rd, 2020 12:46
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