Comments received on poems by Michael Champion



My Home is my Refuge
Lorna said:

Oh I do soooooooo agree! I have made my home my refuge.... and when I close that door, peace reigns!

March 18th, 2018 04:40

MR BADGER: CREATRURE COMFORTS
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - I love the rhyming in this charming account of famous badger and his chums - when writing short stories simplicity matters to adults and children - a delightful poem Michael which had my attention from the first line. Look forward to reading more of your work.

December 18th, 2017 17:28

Undesirable Lives Through Time
Christina8 said:

A well written piece. I agree!

October 30th, 2017 18:28

Pripyat: City Reverting to Nature
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, nature will always assert itself if left uninterrupted.

August 7th, 2017 01:40

Pripyat: City Reverting to Nature
Louis Gibbs said:

Nature starts immediately reclaiming whatever man builds. And so it is. Fine poem illustrating this, Michael!

August 6th, 2017 10:40

The Old Barber\'s Shop
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Described in awesome rhyming in mod ballad style wow and very interesting. Eps admire how u rhymed chime with maritime and the realistic part of that and the other lines all presented swell. Kudos.

U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.

November 23rd, 2016 09:48

The Old Barber\'s Shop
Augustus said:

Effective in telling a story. Nicely done.

November 22nd, 2016 19:06

The Old Barber\'s Shop
Elegant_Style said:

I like this poem and it\'s rhyme scheme... It is simple but also very elegant and beautiful

November 22nd, 2016 18:17

The Girl in the Hotel Bedroom
Michael Champion said:



August 9th, 2016 06:39

The Drinking Cycle
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 2nd, 2016 14:28

Warning Signs of a State of Mind
AAA said:

beautiful work!!!!!

July 25th, 2016 18:30

Warning Signs of a State of Mind
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 25th, 2016 13:18

The Pending Coffee
Tony36 said:

What an,awesome idea, I will have to pass it along. Great write

July 23rd, 2016 06:56

The Pending Coffee
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS MICHAEL ~ Beautifully structured poem. Viva Napoli ! Where I lived one of the churches ran a Coffee Bar for the homeless. Coffee and a cake was 10p ! Well patronised. I like the idea of "pending coffee" it give the Urban Poor a chance to have a real coffee (as in Italy) with the hoi-poloi and not just with other "downonluckers". Thanks for sharing and being my Friend ~ BRIAN

July 23rd, 2016 05:05

The Girl in the Hotel Bedroom
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME MICHAEL ~ Love your first poem ~ and the visual ! The structure of the poem is very racy one continuous stanza fizzing with rhyme and rhythm. The subject is also very racy ! With nature ~ often if you are in the right place at the right time ~ you are rewarded with a perfect view ~ as your picture shows ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

July 22nd, 2016 16:59