Comments received on poems by Michael Champion
My Home is my Refuge
Lorna said:
Oh I do soooooooo agree! I have made my home my refuge.... and when I close that door, peace reigns!
March 18th, 2018 04:40
Lorna said:
Oh I do soooooooo agree! I have made my home my refuge.... and when I close that door, peace reigns!
March 18th, 2018 04:40
MR BADGER: CREATRURE COMFORTS
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the rhyming in this charming account of famous badger and his chums - when writing short stories simplicity matters to adults and children - a delightful poem Michael which had my attention from the first line. Look forward to reading more of your work.
December 18th, 2017 17:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I love the rhyming in this charming account of famous badger and his chums - when writing short stories simplicity matters to adults and children - a delightful poem Michael which had my attention from the first line. Look forward to reading more of your work.
December 18th, 2017 17:28
Undesirable Lives Through Time
Christina8 said:
A well written piece. I agree!
October 30th, 2017 18:28
Christina8 said:
A well written piece. I agree!
October 30th, 2017 18:28
Pripyat: City Reverting to Nature
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, nature will always assert itself if left uninterrupted.
August 7th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, nature will always assert itself if left uninterrupted.
August 7th, 2017 01:40
Pripyat: City Reverting to Nature
Louis Gibbs said:
Nature starts immediately reclaiming whatever man builds. And so it is. Fine poem illustrating this, Michael!
August 6th, 2017 10:40
Louis Gibbs said:
Nature starts immediately reclaiming whatever man builds. And so it is. Fine poem illustrating this, Michael!
August 6th, 2017 10:40
The Old Barber\'s Shop
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Described in awesome rhyming in mod ballad style wow and very interesting. Eps admire how u rhymed chime with maritime and the realistic part of that and the other lines all presented swell. Kudos.
U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.
November 23rd, 2016 09:48
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Described in awesome rhyming in mod ballad style wow and very interesting. Eps admire how u rhymed chime with maritime and the realistic part of that and the other lines all presented swell. Kudos.
U are most welcome to comment on my latest poem too . Ive been writing for years and readers enjoyed and got Sth frm it so pleez do.
November 23rd, 2016 09:48
The Old Barber\'s Shop
Augustus said:
Effective in telling a story. Nicely done.
November 22nd, 2016 19:06
Augustus said:
Effective in telling a story. Nicely done.
November 22nd, 2016 19:06
The Old Barber\'s Shop
Elegant_Style said:
I like this poem and it\'s rhyme scheme... It is simple but also very elegant and beautiful
November 22nd, 2016 18:17
Elegant_Style said:
I like this poem and it\'s rhyme scheme... It is simple but also very elegant and beautiful
November 22nd, 2016 18:17
The Pending Coffee
Tony36 said:
What an,awesome idea, I will have to pass it along. Great write
July 23rd, 2016 06:56
Tony36 said:
What an,awesome idea, I will have to pass it along. Great write
July 23rd, 2016 06:56
The Pending Coffee
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ Beautifully structured poem. Viva Napoli ! Where I lived one of the churches ran a Coffee Bar for the homeless. Coffee and a cake was 10p ! Well patronised. I like the idea of "pending coffee" it give the Urban Poor a chance to have a real coffee (as in Italy) with the hoi-poloi and not just with other "downonluckers". Thanks for sharing and being my Friend ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 05:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS MICHAEL ~ Beautifully structured poem. Viva Napoli ! Where I lived one of the churches ran a Coffee Bar for the homeless. Coffee and a cake was 10p ! Well patronised. I like the idea of "pending coffee" it give the Urban Poor a chance to have a real coffee (as in Italy) with the hoi-poloi and not just with other "downonluckers". Thanks for sharing and being my Friend ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 05:05
The Girl in the Hotel Bedroom
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MICHAEL ~ Love your first poem ~ and the visual ! The structure of the poem is very racy one continuous stanza fizzing with rhyme and rhythm. The subject is also very racy ! With nature ~ often if you are in the right place at the right time ~ you are rewarded with a perfect view ~ as your picture shows ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 22nd, 2016 16:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MICHAEL ~ Love your first poem ~ and the visual ! The structure of the poem is very racy one continuous stanza fizzing with rhyme and rhythm. The subject is also very racy ! With nature ~ often if you are in the right place at the right time ~ you are rewarded with a perfect view ~ as your picture shows ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 22nd, 2016 16:59
