Comments received on poems by MarisaGreen16
Perfection
daniel dawes said:
Really liked it and felt your emotions behind it. Thanks for sharing.
August 28th, 2016 04:21
daniel dawes said:
Really liked it and felt your emotions behind it. Thanks for sharing.
August 28th, 2016 04:21
Perfection
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ALEX we all (if we are honest) seek PERFECTION internally (a pure heart) and externally in all we do and say. We know that only GOD is perfect but with His help e can be the best we can be ! This poem is a blessing to me on a Sunday Morning ! I read your poem for a Spiritual point of view ~ OK ~ BRIAN Please check my poem for Sunday. LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ TODAY
August 28th, 2016 03:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ALEX we all (if we are honest) seek PERFECTION internally (a pure heart) and externally in all we do and say. We know that only GOD is perfect but with His help e can be the best we can be ! This poem is a blessing to me on a Sunday Morning ! I read your poem for a Spiritual point of view ~ OK ~ BRIAN Please check my poem for Sunday. LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ TODAY
August 28th, 2016 03:44
Lost in my Own Mind.
willyweed said:
you have captured a feeling/emotion we all have had at times. nicely done in form and structure! ww
August 26th, 2016 19:38
willyweed said:
you have captured a feeling/emotion we all have had at times. nicely done in form and structure! ww
August 26th, 2016 19:38
Lost in my Own Mind.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing MARISA ~ Trapped halfway ~ between a rock and a hard place ~ that is how a lot of us feel ~ sometimes ! So your poem strikes a chord ! Unwelcome ~ unshared space ~ wild emotions ~ misunderstood ! Sometimes we think it can't get any worse and it does. Life is full of aftershocks and then the ground fall from beneath our feet. Thinkin' of you ~ BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Ebony Girl ~ THANKS.
August 26th, 2016 06:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing MARISA ~ Trapped halfway ~ between a rock and a hard place ~ that is how a lot of us feel ~ sometimes ! So your poem strikes a chord ! Unwelcome ~ unshared space ~ wild emotions ~ misunderstood ! Sometimes we think it can't get any worse and it does. Life is full of aftershocks and then the ground fall from beneath our feet. Thinkin' of you ~ BRIAN Please check my Poem ~ Ebony Girl ~ THANKS.
August 26th, 2016 06:20
Lost in my Own Mind.
MarisaGreen16 said:
I appreciate your thoughts and i would love any feedback
August 26th, 2016 05:52
MarisaGreen16 said:
I appreciate your thoughts and i would love any feedback
August 26th, 2016 05:52
True Colours
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW MARISA ~ Another fantastic SLAM ~ you are a blessing to this site. Love your vents ~ they let out your steam ! Your language is very powerful as you self-examine your development as a poet and as a person. Love the fact that you never doubted YOURSELF and your true colours always shone bright and violent ~ beautifully chaotic. We can all change MARISA we are dynamic we are SLAM.. Rainbows are so so predictable always ROYGBIV or VIBGYOR. You are a vibrant Free Spirit and I love "Patterns of a mis-matched rainbow" wicked ! Thanks for sharing ~ keep riting ~ You are lovely ! Please check my poem ME SLAM POET ~ I gave you a mention. Yours BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 04:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW MARISA ~ Another fantastic SLAM ~ you are a blessing to this site. Love your vents ~ they let out your steam ! Your language is very powerful as you self-examine your development as a poet and as a person. Love the fact that you never doubted YOURSELF and your true colours always shone bright and violent ~ beautifully chaotic. We can all change MARISA we are dynamic we are SLAM.. Rainbows are so so predictable always ROYGBIV or VIBGYOR. You are a vibrant Free Spirit and I love "Patterns of a mis-matched rainbow" wicked ! Thanks for sharing ~ keep riting ~ You are lovely ! Please check my poem ME SLAM POET ~ I gave you a mention. Yours BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 04:55
True Colours
JuanO said:
Its a really nice poem..I loved when you used the words beautifuly chaotic. Thank you for sharing.
August 19th, 2016 04:04
JuanO said:
Its a really nice poem..I loved when you used the words beautifuly chaotic. Thank you for sharing.
August 19th, 2016 04:04
An Authentic Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARISSA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ A SLAM POEM ~ It is very very powerful and a lovely tribute to Transgender Love. I love transgender poems they are so so tender and always from the heart. Your passionate poems fulfills all the elements of a SLAM ! It is : Original ~ Compact ~ Basic and recitable ~ rhythmic and passionate and powerful. I have to give it a score of TEN ! We all need LOVE Marisa and when we find it ~ in all its glory ~ we want to shout it from the housetops ~ you did ! Love your poem ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 01:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARISSA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ A SLAM POEM ~ It is very very powerful and a lovely tribute to Transgender Love. I love transgender poems they are so so tender and always from the heart. Your passionate poems fulfills all the elements of a SLAM ! It is : Original ~ Compact ~ Basic and recitable ~ rhythmic and passionate and powerful. I have to give it a score of TEN ! We all need LOVE Marisa and when we find it ~ in all its glory ~ we want to shout it from the housetops ~ you did ! Love your poem ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 01:32
