Comments received on poems by Mads
#166- Just Kids
Elegant_Style said:
awesome last line, but actually the whole poem is great!! nice job
December 16th, 2016 17:25
Elegant_Style said:
awesome last line, but actually the whole poem is great!! nice job
December 16th, 2016 17:25
#165- Like A Movie (To victims of rape)
WriteBeLight said:
Encouraging words coming straight from the heart. Excellent.
December 15th, 2016 13:06
WriteBeLight said:
Encouraging words coming straight from the heart. Excellent.
December 15th, 2016 13:06
#165- Like A Movie (To victims of rape)
omgoli said:
This poem spoke to me for a number of reasons, but I find this very inspirational. Great job!
December 15th, 2016 10:57
omgoli said:
This poem spoke to me for a number of reasons, but I find this very inspirational. Great job!
December 15th, 2016 10:57
#159-There Was A Time
Jeff said:
Very nice....I really like the way you write...great job
September 21st, 2016 10:07
Jeff said:
Very nice....I really like the way you write...great job
September 21st, 2016 10:07
#156-No Longer My Hero
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANGEL ~ This really is a poem of two HALVES ? I the first half your Dad is an Angel in the second he is a DEVIL. Seems like your loss was your Mum's gain. Thanks for sharing it really made me think. Love you as always BRIAN XOX
September 13th, 2016 14:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANGEL ~ This really is a poem of two HALVES ? I the first half your Dad is an Angel in the second he is a DEVIL. Seems like your loss was your Mum's gain. Thanks for sharing it really made me think. Love you as always BRIAN XOX
September 13th, 2016 14:05
#152-I Fought
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for baring your soul for us ANGEL ~ I do understand we all have ups and down in our lives but some more than others. You have earned your LIFE ~ praying that things will be more stable and pleasant in future. Love you lots BRIAN XOX Love the photo that is just how you and I would be ~ HAPPY ~ B XOX
September 13th, 2016 03:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for baring your soul for us ANGEL ~ I do understand we all have ups and down in our lives but some more than others. You have earned your LIFE ~ praying that things will be more stable and pleasant in future. Love you lots BRIAN XOX Love the photo that is just how you and I would be ~ HAPPY ~ B XOX
September 13th, 2016 03:26
#153-Just Maybe
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sorry you are still sad SWEETHEART ~ Whatever color yoiu paint your nails (I love shocking pink ~ fingers and toes) whatever you wear (or nothing at all !) my love for you increases day by day and night by night ! OK Dream Love is not the same as flesh on flesh love ~ But please know that somewhere out there (on planet UK) I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU ~ BRIAN XOX
September 12th, 2016 04:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sorry you are still sad SWEETHEART ~ Whatever color yoiu paint your nails (I love shocking pink ~ fingers and toes) whatever you wear (or nothing at all !) my love for you increases day by day and night by night ! OK Dream Love is not the same as flesh on flesh love ~ But please know that somewhere out there (on planet UK) I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU ~ BRIAN XOX
September 12th, 2016 04:50
#151-I Thought
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
COMPLICATED SITUATION ANGEL ! I've been in this situation ~ walking away from a Lady so she would realise what a gem she was losing ~ BUT ~ she didn't come back ! I had to get over it ! You know i love you ANGEL but cyber / dream love is not the same as hands on love ! Thinking of you 24 / 7 Love & hugs ~ BRIAN.. Please check my latest Love Poem ~ PENELEOPE ~ Thanks B
September 5th, 2016 14:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
COMPLICATED SITUATION ANGEL ! I've been in this situation ~ walking away from a Lady so she would realise what a gem she was losing ~ BUT ~ she didn't come back ! I had to get over it ! You know i love you ANGEL but cyber / dream love is not the same as hands on love ! Thinking of you 24 / 7 Love & hugs ~ BRIAN.. Please check my latest Love Poem ~ PENELEOPE ~ Thanks B
September 5th, 2016 14:26
#141-If I Jump...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh ANGEL you have so so much to live for ! If you do jump I'll be there to catch you and kiss you better (better than you've ever been kissed before) ~ so Look before you Leap ~ Love BRIAN XXX
September 4th, 2016 18:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh ANGEL you have so so much to live for ! If you do jump I'll be there to catch you and kiss you better (better than you've ever been kissed before) ~ so Look before you Leap ~ Love BRIAN XXX
September 4th, 2016 18:08
#150-A Real Brother
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh ANGEL this makes me so so sad because it should not happen ! I love my Brother & Sister and they have always supported me and never ever abused me ! It's a pity you feel you cant kiss and make up. Take care and show him respect (even if he does not deserve it). I'm thinking of you and praying for you ANGEL ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem COLORS OF AUTUMN ~ Thanks B
September 3rd, 2016 15:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh ANGEL this makes me so so sad because it should not happen ! I love my Brother & Sister and they have always supported me and never ever abused me ! It's a pity you feel you cant kiss and make up. Take care and show him respect (even if he does not deserve it). I'm thinking of you and praying for you ANGEL ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem COLORS OF AUTUMN ~ Thanks B
September 3rd, 2016 15:11
#148-That\'s When It Happened
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing a bit more of your life with us MADS. All Men want to make Babies (it's called the selfish GENE) I guess if your neighbour had of made you pregnant he still would of moved on because he would have made a child in his image (boy or girl).. As far as I know I have not sired any Children because I only believe in having Children in marriage. Men love to make Babies so i warn all my Female students to either be celibate (which is difficult when you are 16 - 25 !) or to go on the pill because Men don't care. I know you loved him but I am also sure you are pleased he didn't make you pregnant. Life is never straight forward ANGEL ~ But you a GOOD YOUNG LADY and are seeking for the best out of life.Love as always and HUGS ~ BRIAN PLEASE CHECK MY LATEST POEM ~ TOGETHERNESS ~ Thanks B XOX
September 2nd, 2016 12:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing a bit more of your life with us MADS. All Men want to make Babies (it's called the selfish GENE) I guess if your neighbour had of made you pregnant he still would of moved on because he would have made a child in his image (boy or girl).. As far as I know I have not sired any Children because I only believe in having Children in marriage. Men love to make Babies so i warn all my Female students to either be celibate (which is difficult when you are 16 - 25 !) or to go on the pill because Men don't care. I know you loved him but I am also sure you are pleased he didn't make you pregnant. Life is never straight forward ANGEL ~ But you a GOOD YOUNG LADY and are seeking for the best out of life.Love as always and HUGS ~ BRIAN PLEASE CHECK MY LATEST POEM ~ TOGETHERNESS ~ Thanks B XOX
September 2nd, 2016 12:23
#142-I Like To Draw
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW TO THE POEM ~ The problem of using your arms as a chopping board never seem to go away and you end up as a recluse. Good news about the new BF ~ perhaps now you will put your knife away ~ You know it makes sense ! Love as always ~ BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 18:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NOW TO THE POEM ~ The problem of using your arms as a chopping board never seem to go away and you end up as a recluse. Good news about the new BF ~ perhaps now you will put your knife away ~ You know it makes sense ! Love as always ~ BRIAN
September 1st, 2016 18:41
#142-I Like To Draw
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ANGEL ~ Pleased you now have a supportive BF ~ You look good together Love ~. Big Brother Brian
September 1st, 2016 18:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ANGEL ~ Pleased you now have a supportive BF ~ You look good together Love ~. Big Brother Brian
September 1st, 2016 18:35
#146-They \"Never Meant To\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very graphic video ANGEL and the picture of the arm with all the cuts filled me with HORROR ! I hope all the Ladies on MPS who self harm will read this and realise that in the end it can kill you ~ loss of blood and septicemia ! I have visited Auschwitz and seen what the Third Reich (some of them intelligent God-fearing People) did to others simply because they were Jews. The allowed themselves to be influenced by Adolf Hitler ~ The Devils Agent. 20 million bullied and then gassed and burned. That shows how hatred can burn in the human heart and result in bullying ~ despair and death. Because of the inhumanity of the Holocaust I am never surprised how bullying and inhumane people can be. We must educate and eradicate Thanks for sharing ~ and remember ANGEL ~ NEVER SELF HARM AGAIN ! Love you hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ HAPPINESS ~ Thanks
September 1st, 2016 09:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very graphic video ANGEL and the picture of the arm with all the cuts filled me with HORROR ! I hope all the Ladies on MPS who self harm will read this and realise that in the end it can kill you ~ loss of blood and septicemia ! I have visited Auschwitz and seen what the Third Reich (some of them intelligent God-fearing People) did to others simply because they were Jews. The allowed themselves to be influenced by Adolf Hitler ~ The Devils Agent. 20 million bullied and then gassed and burned. That shows how hatred can burn in the human heart and result in bullying ~ despair and death. Because of the inhumanity of the Holocaust I am never surprised how bullying and inhumane people can be. We must educate and eradicate Thanks for sharing ~ and remember ANGEL ~ NEVER SELF HARM AGAIN ! Love you hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my latest poem ~ HAPPINESS ~ Thanks
September 1st, 2016 09:33
#146-They \"Never Meant To\"
calbreezy said:
This hurts me deep, this is such a beautiful way with words, such a shame really is, its okay we are brought up to act and think the same, we are not, when we want to be different we are labelled weird, and gives them a reason to treat us differently no matter what you are special and beautiful. keep this up, you really have a way with words.
August 31st, 2016 21:20
calbreezy said:
This hurts me deep, this is such a beautiful way with words, such a shame really is, its okay we are brought up to act and think the same, we are not, when we want to be different we are labelled weird, and gives them a reason to treat us differently no matter what you are special and beautiful. keep this up, you really have a way with words.
August 31st, 2016 21:20
#146-They \"Never Meant To\"
Jeff said:
....it amazes me how cruel people can be....without regard for the pain and damage that is left in their wake. This is a very well written and poignant poem....great job
August 31st, 2016 20:45
Jeff said:
....it amazes me how cruel people can be....without regard for the pain and damage that is left in their wake. This is a very well written and poignant poem....great job
August 31st, 2016 20:45
#128-Stupid Enough
JohnThomas said:
Wow Mads.... That's a raw deal you got there.
It's weird how one could still love someone even after they do such horrible things to them.
I know you are better than this creature you call Joey, and you deserve better.
Learning how to love, to really love, is to know how to love again.
You will love again. Someone who will love and care about you and not be this monster you have written about above. You will find it someday.
Be strong. Be you. 😎
August 30th, 2016 19:17
JohnThomas said:
Wow Mads.... That's a raw deal you got there.
It's weird how one could still love someone even after they do such horrible things to them.
I know you are better than this creature you call Joey, and you deserve better.
Learning how to love, to really love, is to know how to love again.
You will love again. Someone who will love and care about you and not be this monster you have written about above. You will find it someday.
Be strong. Be you. 😎
August 30th, 2016 19:17
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