Comments received on poems by Mads
#107-Kept It A Secret
TheWritingInstrument said:
Dear Mads, I know it's hard, it's hard to have these things in your life, that you'll never be the same again, but those things that happened made you who you are right now, and the past is past, it can be hard to let go, it can be really hard to stop thinking about. But I promise you this... Each and everyday will only get better.
-Ariana
August 29th, 2016 18:57
TheWritingInstrument said:
Dear Mads, I know it's hard, it's hard to have these things in your life, that you'll never be the same again, but those things that happened made you who you are right now, and the past is past, it can be hard to let go, it can be really hard to stop thinking about. But I promise you this... Each and everyday will only get better.
-Ariana
August 29th, 2016 18:57
#122-I\'ll Be Gone
Tony36 said:
Love it Mads, life is full of crap. We just need to take our handy dandy pooper scooper whole that crap and move on
August 29th, 2016 18:26
Tony36 said:
Love it Mads, life is full of crap. We just need to take our handy dandy pooper scooper whole that crap and move on
August 29th, 2016 18:26
#122-I\'ll Be Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK GOD FOR THAT ANGEL ! When i first read it ~ I thought you were going to end it today. Now I know it was the OLD YOU ! Love the picture (your Boy Friend is so cute !)-and you are so so SASSY in your videos ~ that I am praying you will live for ever ! The OLD MADS has gone and the NEW ANGEL has come ~ LOVE YOU LOTS BRIAN XOX
August 29th, 2016 13:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK GOD FOR THAT ANGEL ! When i first read it ~ I thought you were going to end it today. Now I know it was the OLD YOU ! Love the picture (your Boy Friend is so cute !)-and you are so so SASSY in your videos ~ that I am praying you will live for ever ! The OLD MADS has gone and the NEW ANGEL has come ~ LOVE YOU LOTS BRIAN XOX
August 29th, 2016 13:50
#122-I\'ll Be Gone
JohnThomas said:
I'm sorry Mads. I'm sorry you had to feel such things, think such thoughts. If you can survive those feelings you can survive anything.
Thanks for sharing your feelings with me.
August 29th, 2016 13:30
JohnThomas said:
I'm sorry Mads. I'm sorry you had to feel such things, think such thoughts. If you can survive those feelings you can survive anything.
Thanks for sharing your feelings with me.
August 29th, 2016 13:30
#107-Kept It A Secret
Amal said:
exactly what wingelniktj says how bad things happen all through life but the difference is how you react to them and live after, I have 3 daughters and the thought of anything bad happening is so disturbing but you must be strong and be better than the world around you. oh and also great poem, made me cry
August 29th, 2016 03:27
Amal said:
exactly what wingelniktj says how bad things happen all through life but the difference is how you react to them and live after, I have 3 daughters and the thought of anything bad happening is so disturbing but you must be strong and be better than the world around you. oh and also great poem, made me cry
August 29th, 2016 03:27
#138-Welcome to MY life
Amal said:
I think this is my favorite, i think ppl write when your emotions are the strongest.
August 29th, 2016 03:22
Amal said:
I think this is my favorite, i think ppl write when your emotions are the strongest.
August 29th, 2016 03:22
#120-Just A Girl
Amal said:
love it, well written and life changes all the time always look up.
August 29th, 2016 03:18
Amal said:
love it, well written and life changes all the time always look up.
August 29th, 2016 03:18
#123-Finding Myself (for BRIAN and JOHN)
Amal said:
ok maybe you sound a little like how i was thinking when i was younger but i like that your putting your thoughts out there, very good!
August 29th, 2016 03:16
Amal said:
ok maybe you sound a little like how i was thinking when i was younger but i like that your putting your thoughts out there, very good!
August 29th, 2016 03:16
#123-Finding Myself (for BRIAN and JOHN)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for this ANGEL ~ Love the video ~ very playful ! I am pleased that you appreciate the love and care that John and I have for you. My concern was that all your poems were TRES TRES NOIRE ! I like this poem because you are actually standing up for yourself and not being dictated to !You have to be yourself ANGEL ~ self awareness and self respect are important aspects of growing up. You are young ~ beautiful ~ talented and full of life ! Please don't change I love you just the way you are. Thanks for sharing your desire to BE YOUR OWN PERSON ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN.
August 28th, 2016 16:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for this ANGEL ~ Love the video ~ very playful ! I am pleased that you appreciate the love and care that John and I have for you. My concern was that all your poems were TRES TRES NOIRE ! I like this poem because you are actually standing up for yourself and not being dictated to !You have to be yourself ANGEL ~ self awareness and self respect are important aspects of growing up. You are young ~ beautiful ~ talented and full of life ! Please don't change I love you just the way you are. Thanks for sharing your desire to BE YOUR OWN PERSON ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN.
August 28th, 2016 16:16
#123-Finding Myself (for BRIAN and JOHN)
JohnThomas said:
😎 You have a lot to offer the world. Never sell yourself short. Always here for you, love ya too!!
August 28th, 2016 12:43
JohnThomas said:
😎 You have a lot to offer the world. Never sell yourself short. Always here for you, love ya too!!
August 28th, 2016 12:43
#34-Nobody Truly Knows (story)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh ANGEL another poem driping with pathos ! First let me counter your first paragraph. In my eyes you are Pretty ~ Slim ~ A pearl of great price ~ A wholesome and pristine Girl. I love you Angel for who you are and the great potential you always demonstrate in your writing (love you FUSION POEMS) and your willingness to share your past with us' There's no need to be scared of yourself ANGEL and you don't scare me ! What you need ANGEL is more self belief and more self esteem. Accentuate the POSITIVE and eliminate the NEGATIVE ~ the future can be great for you ! Thinkin' of you 24/7 ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN
August 27th, 2016 15:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh ANGEL another poem driping with pathos ! First let me counter your first paragraph. In my eyes you are Pretty ~ Slim ~ A pearl of great price ~ A wholesome and pristine Girl. I love you Angel for who you are and the great potential you always demonstrate in your writing (love you FUSION POEMS) and your willingness to share your past with us' There's no need to be scared of yourself ANGEL and you don't scare me ! What you need ANGEL is more self belief and more self esteem. Accentuate the POSITIVE and eliminate the NEGATIVE ~ the future can be great for you ! Thinkin' of you 24/7 ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN
August 27th, 2016 15:29
#138-Welcome to MY life
hharding23 said:
Hello I'm from England and I have just signed up to this web site and I stumble across this poem you wrote. It's hard to believe you are only 15. I have had similar feelings in my life especially when I was 15 and I have struggled with depression and still do but two years ago I discovered a pation for sailing and the sea, for nature and mountain climbing and you can't possible images how much it's help. I realised there is happiness and fun in life but it's up to you to discovere what brings you peace be happines. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
August 27th, 2016 14:33
hharding23 said:
Hello I'm from England and I have just signed up to this web site and I stumble across this poem you wrote. It's hard to believe you are only 15. I have had similar feelings in my life especially when I was 15 and I have struggled with depression and still do but two years ago I discovered a pation for sailing and the sea, for nature and mountain climbing and you can't possible images how much it's help. I realised there is happiness and fun in life but it's up to you to discovere what brings you peace be happines. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
August 27th, 2016 14:33
#34-Nobody Truly Knows (story)
JohnThomas said:
I hope you are feeling better about yourself. I think most people want approval of other so badly. I've been there, putting up with anything just to be in good graces.
Another good one Mads!
August 27th, 2016 11:22
JohnThomas said:
I hope you are feeling better about yourself. I think most people want approval of other so badly. I've been there, putting up with anything just to be in good graces.
Another good one Mads!
August 27th, 2016 11:22
#120-Just A Girl
willyweed said:
the sun will shine again, very well expressed! ww
August 26th, 2016 19:23
willyweed said:
the sun will shine again, very well expressed! ww
August 26th, 2016 19:23
#120-Just A Girl
calbreezy said:
I feel in somewhat the same, this was a great piece, and it clearly means alot
August 26th, 2016 18:40
calbreezy said:
I feel in somewhat the same, this was a great piece, and it clearly means alot
August 26th, 2016 18:40
#120-Just A Girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are so so beautiful ANGEL ~ thanks for sharing such a wistful photo ! You have so many Friends on MPS ~ supportin' you ~ thinkin' of you and prayin' for you. We lift you up on to higher ground. I love the truth and the angst in every line ~ BUT ~ my experience is YOU CAN PUT THE PAST BEHIND YOU ~ You can lift your beautiful head up and face the future with love joy and confidence. We all love you ~ just reach put ~ we are right by your side. Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem EBONY GIRL ~ THANKS ~ Love as always BRIAN
August 26th, 2016 17:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are so so beautiful ANGEL ~ thanks for sharing such a wistful photo ! You have so many Friends on MPS ~ supportin' you ~ thinkin' of you and prayin' for you. We lift you up on to higher ground. I love the truth and the angst in every line ~ BUT ~ my experience is YOU CAN PUT THE PAST BEHIND YOU ~ You can lift your beautiful head up and face the future with love joy and confidence. We all love you ~ just reach put ~ we are right by your side. Love BRIAN Please check my latest poem EBONY GIRL ~ THANKS ~ Love as always BRIAN
August 26th, 2016 17:46
#120-Just A Girl
JohnThomas said:
Heartbreaking.
But I Don't think the shine is all gone from the eyes.
As long as you are looking forward, there is hope. It can't rain all the time.
August 26th, 2016 16:28
JohnThomas said:
Heartbreaking.
But I Don't think the shine is all gone from the eyes.
As long as you are looking forward, there is hope. It can't rain all the time.
August 26th, 2016 16:28
#138-Welcome to MY life
lnelson16 said:
I notice you. And most importantly GOD notices you. It always hard to see that the pain that is allowed is part of a bigger plan. Him that waits on the LORD shall renew their strength. Remember there is power in the name of JESUS. I had to learn that myself. To feel alone is to give in. Always encourage yourself. Your writing is so beautiful because of the rawness. Think, of how amazing it will be once you decide to smile again. YOU ARE LOVED.
August 25th, 2016 20:36
lnelson16 said:
I notice you. And most importantly GOD notices you. It always hard to see that the pain that is allowed is part of a bigger plan. Him that waits on the LORD shall renew their strength. Remember there is power in the name of JESUS. I had to learn that myself. To feel alone is to give in. Always encourage yourself. Your writing is so beautiful because of the rawness. Think, of how amazing it will be once you decide to smile again. YOU ARE LOVED.
August 25th, 2016 20:36
#138-Welcome to MY life
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sad message,nobody even knows to exist ! you are a great writer!
August 25th, 2016 18:51
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sad message,nobody even knows to exist ! you are a great writer!
August 25th, 2016 18:51
#138-Welcome to MY life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh MADS ~ This is so so sad it made grown Man cry. Your picture reflects your dispair and your heartache. I'm still waiting for the happy poem Angel ~ You said you liked MPS because everyone was so so nice and welcoming ~ we all love you. What is it (or who is it) t ? that makes you so so sad and self-harming. You are beautiful and smart and an excellent poet ~ you have a great future ! Don't let someone ruin your life. You have all of us now ~ thinkin' of you ~ prayin' for you and lovin' you ! Love & Hugs ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 25th, 2016 17:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhh MADS ~ This is so so sad it made grown Man cry. Your picture reflects your dispair and your heartache. I'm still waiting for the happy poem Angel ~ You said you liked MPS because everyone was so so nice and welcoming ~ we all love you. What is it (or who is it) t ? that makes you so so sad and self-harming. You are beautiful and smart and an excellent poet ~ you have a great future ! Don't let someone ruin your life. You have all of us now ~ thinkin' of you ~ prayin' for you and lovin' you ! Love & Hugs ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 25th, 2016 17:47
#138-Welcome to MY life
JohnThomas said:
Very powerful. Very moving. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of your world.
August 25th, 2016 17:33
JohnThomas said:
Very powerful. Very moving. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of your world.
August 25th, 2016 17:33
#85-I\'m Already Dead
JohnThomas said:
Wow. It's hard to explain that kind of pain isn't it?
You are a survivor, you are stronger than you know. And I hope you can build better life out of the ruins of the old.
Keep strong. Keep the faith.
August 24th, 2016 14:21
JohnThomas said:
Wow. It's hard to explain that kind of pain isn't it?
You are a survivor, you are stronger than you know. And I hope you can build better life out of the ruins of the old.
Keep strong. Keep the faith.
August 24th, 2016 14:21
#85-I\'m Already Dead
abpoet18 said:
All you gotta do is learn to love yourself
August 24th, 2016 13:31
abpoet18 said:
All you gotta do is learn to love yourself
August 24th, 2016 13:31
#85-I\'m Already Dead
willyweed said:
Hold on Mads the sun will shine again! ww
August 24th, 2016 13:11
willyweed said:
Hold on Mads the sun will shine again! ww
August 24th, 2016 13:11
#85-I\'m Already Dead
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
.OW MADS ~ Another awesome "death wish" poem. I've felt like that when someone special has walked out on me ! Heart hurts ~ pathetic ~ want to die ~ not holding on ~ tired of it all ~ ALREADY DEAD ! I'm so glad you wrote it awhile ago ~ you look lovely in your picture and so so HAPPY. So pleased you are enjoying MPS ~ we all love you ! Yours as ever BRIAN
August 24th, 2016 12:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
.OW MADS ~ Another awesome "death wish" poem. I've felt like that when someone special has walked out on me ! Heart hurts ~ pathetic ~ want to die ~ not holding on ~ tired of it all ~ ALREADY DEAD ! I'm so glad you wrote it awhile ago ~ you look lovely in your picture and so so HAPPY. So pleased you are enjoying MPS ~ we all love you ! Yours as ever BRIAN
August 24th, 2016 12:24
#107-Kept It A Secret
JohnThomas said:
We carry scars and damage all our lives. What matters is how we cope and what we do with our lives after the trauma.
I'm sorry you had to go through such an ordeal.
Be strong. For you are stronger than the pain.
Thank you for sharing a look into darkness.
August 23rd, 2016 18:22
JohnThomas said:
We carry scars and damage all our lives. What matters is how we cope and what we do with our lives after the trauma.
I'm sorry you had to go through such an ordeal.
Be strong. For you are stronger than the pain.
Thank you for sharing a look into darkness.
August 23rd, 2016 18:22
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