Comments received on poems by tamm13
UNTITLED
Cheeky Missy said:
Well they are ingrates if they do not like this wonderful piece! I declare, what a romantic poem! The imagery is wonderful and the sentiment superb! This seems a beautiful tribute to the love of two people and the sincerity of their affections. I really like it.
September 19th, 2011 19:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Well they are ingrates if they do not like this wonderful piece! I declare, what a romantic poem! The imagery is wonderful and the sentiment superb! This seems a beautiful tribute to the love of two people and the sincerity of their affections. I really like it.
September 19th, 2011 19:55
UNTITLED
Belinda AMeharry said:
Love this poem. So simple yet it says much.
Much Love and Light
September 19th, 2011 17:27
Belinda AMeharry said:
Love this poem. So simple yet it says much.
Much Love and Light
September 19th, 2011 17:27
THE ONLY ONE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Oh Lord my GOD when I in awesome wonder ......
Consider all the the things thy hand has made .....
I see the stars I hear the mighty thunder ......
Thy power throughout the Universe displayed ......
Wonderful poem TAMMI bring glory and honour
to our wonderful GOD - The Creator of the Universe
To know Him is to love Him and PRAYER is a great
blessing and it enables us to communicate with
our GOD. Thanks - Every Blessing - HEXAGON.
March 4th, 2011 14:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Oh Lord my GOD when I in awesome wonder ......
Consider all the the things thy hand has made .....
I see the stars I hear the mighty thunder ......
Thy power throughout the Universe displayed ......
Wonderful poem TAMMI bring glory and honour
to our wonderful GOD - The Creator of the Universe
To know Him is to love Him and PRAYER is a great
blessing and it enables us to communicate with
our GOD. Thanks - Every Blessing - HEXAGON.
March 4th, 2011 14:34
FOR YOU
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw....too sweet. Sounds like you are falling in love. Definitely give it time. You expressed the sentiments excellently....so perfectly...the longing, acknowledgement of fantasizing, dreaming of forever, the patience to wait for it. Very good!
February 26th, 2011 23:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw....too sweet. Sounds like you are falling in love. Definitely give it time. You expressed the sentiments excellently....so perfectly...the longing, acknowledgement of fantasizing, dreaming of forever, the patience to wait for it. Very good!
February 26th, 2011 23:03
FOR YOU
Alexandre Landsley said:
It's so cool how someone can think of another person..nice poem
February 26th, 2011 10:53
Alexandre Landsley said:
It's so cool how someone can think of another person..nice poem
February 26th, 2011 10:53
BROKEN LINES
Cheeky Missy said:
La, how awful! You expressed the bitter situation very well. How very horrible to be betrayed! Your conclusion is very good....indeed the speaker is scarred, and time will heal the wound, but not quickly.
February 26th, 2011 00:19
Cheeky Missy said:
La, how awful! You expressed the bitter situation very well. How very horrible to be betrayed! Your conclusion is very good....indeed the speaker is scarred, and time will heal the wound, but not quickly.
February 26th, 2011 00:19
THE HIDDEN FEELINGS
SauravRHS said:
Was a good one... Brought out the feelings well. Work on your rhyming scheme and use of words a bit and you will excel!
February 18th, 2011 05:59
SauravRHS said:
Was a good one... Brought out the feelings well. Work on your rhyming scheme and use of words a bit and you will excel!
February 18th, 2011 05:59
THE HIDDEN FEELINGS
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, very sweet, rather bittersweet, and delightfully expressed. You've depicted the mixed emotions, yearning and lingering desire very well. And the title seems so fitting, for the feelings were rather unknown to you and/or are kept in the secret of your heart, unknown to him. Beautifully done! I enjoyed it!
February 8th, 2011 15:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, very sweet, rather bittersweet, and delightfully expressed. You've depicted the mixed emotions, yearning and lingering desire very well. And the title seems so fitting, for the feelings were rather unknown to you and/or are kept in the secret of your heart, unknown to him. Beautifully done! I enjoyed it!
February 8th, 2011 15:13
confused
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting. You've portrayed the confusion very well. Who is the "you"? A lover? The age-old serious dilemma...you captured it nicely.
January 26th, 2011 00:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting. You've portrayed the confusion very well. Who is the "you"? A lover? The age-old serious dilemma...you captured it nicely.
January 26th, 2011 00:11
