Comments received on poems by FromHerPen
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willyweed said:
Very well done, good rhyme and structure and content that is relatable.
dammed if you do dammed if you don\'t
write on! ww
October 22nd, 2016 09:42
willyweed said:
Very well done, good rhyme and structure and content that is relatable.
dammed if you do dammed if you don\'t
write on! ww
October 22nd, 2016 09:42
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Sarah Abbott said:
This poem really struck me! Very powerful. It immediately brought me back to when I was young and I used to get in arguments with my parents- this poem puts all of those feelings into words. Keep up the good work! Can\'t wait to read more :)
October 16th, 2016 09:34
Sarah Abbott said:
This poem really struck me! Very powerful. It immediately brought me back to when I was young and I used to get in arguments with my parents- this poem puts all of those feelings into words. Keep up the good work! Can\'t wait to read more :)
October 16th, 2016 09:34
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MS TEE ~ Thanks for your first and very powerful poem. ! I felt it ! More than 80 lines throbbing with rhyme and rhythm and with one very clear message DON\'T SPEAK UNLESS YOUR ARE SPOKEN TO ~ OR GIVEN PERMISSION TO SPEAK ! What happened to the Constitution ~ The right to speak or is that (like lots of things) just for ADULTS. My advice is to \"Speak up and be damned\" ! If you don\'t speak now tomorrow may be too late. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN (UK)
October 16th, 2016 09:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MS TEE ~ Thanks for your first and very powerful poem. ! I felt it ! More than 80 lines throbbing with rhyme and rhythm and with one very clear message DON\'T SPEAK UNLESS YOUR ARE SPOKEN TO ~ OR GIVEN PERMISSION TO SPEAK ! What happened to the Constitution ~ The right to speak or is that (like lots of things) just for ADULTS. My advice is to \"Speak up and be damned\" ! If you don\'t speak now tomorrow may be too late. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN (UK)
October 16th, 2016 09:23
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LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very interesting...well written...could maybe be edited a bit to hold the interest of the reader..people are often in a rush...but it was amazing and it states many facts..well done
October 16th, 2016 03:46
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very interesting...well written...could maybe be edited a bit to hold the interest of the reader..people are often in a rush...but it was amazing and it states many facts..well done
October 16th, 2016 03:46
