Comments received on poems by BSmooth



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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Woahba ranting political poem expressing the dejection with the leaders in quite what I tink true words. Leaders are quite useless to the masses everywhere I tink. This was a clever acrostic in strong words.
Nice to read from u again, hope u will my latest too.

November 23rd, 2016 00:21

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS BSMOOTH ~ for a very damning \"single word acrostic\" about (I presume ?) the two front runners in the UK Election TRUMP and MS CLINTON. Both leave much to be desired and sometimes America gets the President it deserves. Due to \"checks & balances\" their extreme policies will be reigned in but the future is bleak ! If I could vote I would choose Hillary because she has the Political Experience which Trump sadly lacks. Yours BRIAN (UK)

November 4th, 2016 07:00

Nature is Always at Peace
moreofme said:

This one made me smile. Nicely done.

November 1st, 2016 16:50

Nature is Always at Peace
BSmooth said:

Read them all, and please let me know how you feel

November 1st, 2016 07:26

Nature is Always at Peace
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Wow a great poetic lesson from animals in awesome rhyme! I say we are mega complainers true. The imagery of your poem is engaging. Kudos,.
Great to read from u again.

November 1st, 2016 01:50

Money
BSmooth said:

Thanks, was the rest decent?

October 27th, 2016 00:10

Money
Augustus said:

Like the stages line, especially.

October 26th, 2016 23:46

Money
Christina8 said:

Great write. Money is the root of all evil. It dictates everything we do and I hate it too. Good job!

October 26th, 2016 20:55

A Child is Born
Christina8 said:

Great write! And may I say congrats! I like your free verse style.

October 26th, 2016 13:41

Feeling Down
avigail said:

lovely :)

October 23rd, 2016 10:41

A Child is Born
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

What a wonderful poem and I could relate to the feelings and love presented so superbly esp because I just got a baby. U have crafted this in a lovely emotive way that makes us smile in agreement. Children are indeed the apple of our eyes like u remind us. Kudos.
Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.

October 23rd, 2016 08:14

Feeling Down
irishred said:

Well said! Look forward to reading more.

October 22nd, 2016 16:56

Wake Up Happy
Summersounds68 said:

A pleasant and positive poem to read. A couple of housekeeping chores: lines 2 and 3 typo errors. Thank you for sharing, Sonia.

October 21st, 2016 13:04

Wake Up Happy
amelliawagg said:

Aw I love this! Such a good thing for us all to hear!

October 20th, 2016 22:21

You\'re Not Alone
Tony36 said:

The heart is AWESOME, Great write

October 17th, 2016 10:07

You\'re Not Alone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME BSMOOTH (Great name !) I love the optimism in your poem. We are all precious ~ unique ~ equal and we all have special purpose. My experience is that when I find my NICHE ~ I am never alone. Great message and great structure replete with rhyme and rhythm . I would like to see it written in lines (poetic form) but the written structure is your choice ! Thanks for sharing more please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks.

October 17th, 2016 05:29