Comments received on poems by BlueiBlondie
Girl in Hiding
Augustus said:
Eating disorders are very difficult to treat and can end in death if you are not careful. Get professional help if you have not already. Your poem is a perfect metaphor for an eating disorder, particularly anorexia, as when you look in the mirror you don\'t see the reality of your body. It is hidden even from yourself. Nicely done.
November 10th, 2016 10:33
Augustus said:
Eating disorders are very difficult to treat and can end in death if you are not careful. Get professional help if you have not already. Your poem is a perfect metaphor for an eating disorder, particularly anorexia, as when you look in the mirror you don\'t see the reality of your body. It is hidden even from yourself. Nicely done.
November 10th, 2016 10:33
Girl in Hiding
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! Just remember how strong you are!
November 10th, 2016 09:56
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! Just remember how strong you are!
November 10th, 2016 09:56
Girl in Hiding
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THAN YOU BLUEI ~ For a lovely confessional poem of hiding and not sharing but with hope in the end. Love the final verse very encouraging ! \"I\'ve been a Girl in hiding ~ trying to be strong ~ What I didn\'t realise ~ I\'ve been strong all along. Thanks you for sharing ~ we all love you ~ BRIAN ~ HUGS
November 10th, 2016 06:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THAN YOU BLUEI ~ For a lovely confessional poem of hiding and not sharing but with hope in the end. Love the final verse very encouraging ! \"I\'ve been a Girl in hiding ~ trying to be strong ~ What I didn\'t realise ~ I\'ve been strong all along. Thanks you for sharing ~ we all love you ~ BRIAN ~ HUGS
November 10th, 2016 06:29
Broken
Christina8 said:
What a well done poem. Just remember it wasnt your fault. Alot of us carry the hurt of childhood. Hugs!
November 5th, 2016 10:18
Christina8 said:
What a well done poem. Just remember it wasnt your fault. Alot of us carry the hurt of childhood. Hugs!
November 5th, 2016 10:18
Broken
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ~ BLUEI ~ It is cathartic to share on a loving site like MPS we all care for you ! It made me cry and ashamed to be a MAN. Child Abusers really have no conception of the lifelong damage they cause and (if male) should be immediately castrated. Children are innocent and it echoes in your final Stanza ~ You really do have no idea how and why it happened and you never will. It was not your fault. Thinking of you and praying for you that God will help you to break free from the consequences of your experience ~ BRIAN
November 5th, 2016 09:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ~ BLUEI ~ It is cathartic to share on a loving site like MPS we all care for you ! It made me cry and ashamed to be a MAN. Child Abusers really have no conception of the lifelong damage they cause and (if male) should be immediately castrated. Children are innocent and it echoes in your final Stanza ~ You really do have no idea how and why it happened and you never will. It was not your fault. Thinking of you and praying for you that God will help you to break free from the consequences of your experience ~ BRIAN
November 5th, 2016 09:18
The Way She Feels
Christina8 said:
Beautifully written poem. I feel your struggle.
November 1st, 2016 13:20
Christina8 said:
Beautifully written poem. I feel your struggle.
November 1st, 2016 13:20
Numb
scorchedwings said:
A brave woman to be so open. Sad but read so well x
October 31st, 2016 15:07
scorchedwings said:
A brave woman to be so open. Sad but read so well x
October 31st, 2016 15:07
Shattered Image
scorchedwings said:
It\'s a raw, honest piece and I hope to read more of yours. Writing is a great channel to address our thoughts at the time. X
October 31st, 2016 15:03
scorchedwings said:
It\'s a raw, honest piece and I hope to read more of yours. Writing is a great channel to address our thoughts at the time. X
October 31st, 2016 15:03
Trapped
scorchedwings said:
So beautifully raw. We all feel this sometimes. X
October 31st, 2016 14:57
scorchedwings said:
So beautifully raw. We all feel this sometimes. X
October 31st, 2016 14:57
Trapped
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem! I wonder if more of us than will admit struggle with those last two questions. Great job!
October 31st, 2016 09:18
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem! I wonder if more of us than will admit struggle with those last two questions. Great job!
October 31st, 2016 09:18
Shattered Image
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write. Very strong message and I hope you are better now or are on that pathway.
October 31st, 2016 09:07
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write. Very strong message and I hope you are better now or are on that pathway.
October 31st, 2016 09:07
Damaged
Christina8 said:
This is a really great write. I can relate to this..\"running from her past she can\'t forgive\". You did a beautiful job!
October 30th, 2016 09:56
Christina8 said:
This is a really great write. I can relate to this..\"running from her past she can\'t forgive\". You did a beautiful job!
October 30th, 2016 09:56
Numb
Christina8 said:
I think your poem is tragically beautiful. I hope you heal and post more poems!
October 29th, 2016 10:10
Christina8 said:
I think your poem is tragically beautiful. I hope you heal and post more poems!
October 29th, 2016 10:10
Numb
Habibi said:
Very beautifully written in a tragic way. Its very courageous of you to openly speak of this. May you continue to find replacements in things you love. I truly hope things get better for you. Please post more poems!!!!
October 28th, 2016 20:44
Habibi said:
Very beautifully written in a tragic way. Its very courageous of you to openly speak of this. May you continue to find replacements in things you love. I truly hope things get better for you. Please post more poems!!!!
October 28th, 2016 20:44
