Comments received on poems by walkingmess



Did I Get Me Here
Jabberwocky said:

Sometimes we are acted upon and sometimes we act.
It\'s better to act.
Your writing is an act, so you are saying you exist through your pain.
Continue to act.
To act is to exist.
I\'ve been in similar places.
I just keep acting.

April 1st, 2017 05:48

contemplations
Tony36 said:

Awesome write thank you for sharing

December 2nd, 2016 20:49

4 words
Tony36 said:

Great write and very truthful in its words

November 11th, 2016 15:03

4 words
Augustus said:

I agree that you can get and keep yourself in a rut with depression and self loathing. Sometimes it is reinforced by others, but in the end we are responsible for how we choose to feel. Actually there are chemical changes in the body when there is self hatred. Coming out of it is an active process. Thanks for the thought provoking write.

November 11th, 2016 12:46

Sick
Tony36 said:

Sad but a great write

November 10th, 2016 12:48

Sick
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

omg.. Girl you know how to bring the tears....

November 10th, 2016 12:37

Undefined
Tony36 said:

Been there myself, Great write

November 9th, 2016 17:44

Undefined
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

very sad...Ive been right where you are here many times before and It SUX

November 9th, 2016 16:19

Deprivation
yeseniaa.22 said:

I AM SO PROUD OF YOU MAYA ! It takes a lot of courage to do this and I\'m glad that you have a talent for writing ! I love you and I hope that you continue to write and strive for what you want ❤️

October 30th, 2016 00:43

Deprivation
magno1988 said:

Great insight to the pure emotion you must of felt and continue to feel!!

October 29th, 2016 20:50

Deprivation
Tony36 said:

Love it looking forward to reading more

October 29th, 2016 19:57

Deprivation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME ANGEL ~ Thanks for your first and very personal poem. It is very well penned ~ but such a tragic story. It is always tragic when we have something (or someone) taken away from us and our hopes are dashed ~ WHEN THAT SOMETHING ~ is someone we loved and trusted it is much much worse. MEN get let down by LADIES (sometimes) so I can empathise ! I trust writing this very poignant poem was cathartic ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN

October 29th, 2016 18:17

Deprivation
Christina8 said:

Great write but can I suggest a larger font? A little hard to see. But I hope you find someone that treats you better,

October 29th, 2016 17:08

Deprivation
BSmooth said:

Cant wait to see more. Good job

October 29th, 2016 17:05