Comments received on poems by nicolesarah
In my mind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a shotgun shell. It carries power spreading out in all directions hitting various targets with a single blast. Diversification lessons the power of each one. Going from birdshot to buck shot or even a slug would increase the force. Nicely done
October 18th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a shotgun shell. It carries power spreading out in all directions hitting various targets with a single blast. Diversification lessons the power of each one. Going from birdshot to buck shot or even a slug would increase the force. Nicely done
October 18th, 2026 04:12
My head
gray0328 said:
The last time I saw a mouth like that it had a hook in it ššš
October 10th, 2026 10:38
gray0328 said:
The last time I saw a mouth like that it had a hook in it ššš
October 10th, 2026 10:38
My head
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting write that left my head spinning. Well done with rhyme
October 9th, 2026 21:05
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting write that left my head spinning. Well done with rhyme
October 9th, 2026 21:05
You
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love in this poem with rhyme as it unfolds its feelings. Well done
September 12th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of love in this poem with rhyme as it unfolds its feelings. Well done
September 12th, 2026 04:00
I sunk
Thomas W Case said:
Thereās a brutal sense of helplessness here, with the repeated āI sunkā making the speaker feel trapped beneath the weight of another personās cruelty. The blood, broken bones, and apology for someone elseās wrongs give this a raw, ugly honesty thatās hard to shake.
August 11th, 2026 06:53
Thomas W Case said:
Thereās a brutal sense of helplessness here, with the repeated āI sunkā making the speaker feel trapped beneath the weight of another personās cruelty. The blood, broken bones, and apology for someone elseās wrongs give this a raw, ugly honesty thatās hard to shake.
August 11th, 2026 06:53
Where the shallow sings
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and lovely words weave a pattern of peace and home.
August 6th, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful rhyme and lovely words weave a pattern of peace and home.
August 6th, 2026 10:26
I sunk
Michael A. McGuire said:
Either an abusive relationship or rushing the stage at a Taylor Swift concert.
Very descriptive and emotional. Good job.
July 31st, 2026 19:48
Michael A. McGuire said:
Either an abusive relationship or rushing the stage at a Taylor Swift concert.
Very descriptive and emotional. Good job.
July 31st, 2026 19:48
I sunk
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of abuse set to rhyme that holds the power of an abused abuser relationship. Well done
July 31st, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of abuse set to rhyme that holds the power of an abused abuser relationship. Well done
July 31st, 2026 03:48
My true love
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of the process of love. It speaks to the growing friendship that precedes love and its growth. It is most romantic. Nicely written
March 5th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of the process of love. It speaks to the growing friendship that precedes love and its growth. It is most romantic. Nicely written
March 5th, 2026 04:30
It is what it is
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well in the time of disco the glittery ball. Reflecting light all across the dance floor it was a symbol of party and fun and so it is with this ball of love in the poem when the lights dim and go out the party is over. Very nicely written
January 29th, 2026 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well in the time of disco the glittery ball. Reflecting light all across the dance floor it was a symbol of party and fun and so it is with this ball of love in the poem when the lights dim and go out the party is over. Very nicely written
January 29th, 2026 08:58
It is what it is
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem explores the nature of love and belonging, emphasizing the importance of connection and emotional sharing between individuals. It suggests that true love is a mutual experience that elevates both partners, making them feel complete and significant.
January 29th, 2026 08:47
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem explores the nature of love and belonging, emphasizing the importance of connection and emotional sharing between individuals. It suggests that true love is a mutual experience that elevates both partners, making them feel complete and significant.
January 29th, 2026 08:47
Club
peto said:
Hey Nicole
I remember you from years back on here
Great to see you still writing
As good as ever
October 26th, 2025 18:06
peto said:
Hey Nicole
I remember you from years back on here
Great to see you still writing
As good as ever
October 26th, 2025 18:06
Club
sorenbarrett said:
We are all engaged in the process of distracting ourselves from the short time we have. The poem in its few words sends its message well.
October 26th, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
We are all engaged in the process of distracting ourselves from the short time we have. The poem in its few words sends its message well.
October 26th, 2025 04:52
Struggles
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Brings to mind the song Comfortably Numb..your piem is different...but somehow i felt the connection
September 5th, 2025 09:56
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Brings to mind the song Comfortably Numb..your piem is different...but somehow i felt the connection
September 5th, 2025 09:56
Struggles
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a tendency to self blame. Deserve has nothing to do with it everyone has the obligation to find what is right for them. A most lovely but sad write.
September 4th, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a tendency to self blame. Deserve has nothing to do with it everyone has the obligation to find what is right for them. A most lovely but sad write.
September 4th, 2025 20:42
Survival
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in search of justice and a brighter future. Well done
September 3rd, 2025 18:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in search of justice and a brighter future. Well done
September 3rd, 2025 18:34
You
sorenbarrett said:
Enamored with a lock and key to the heart. Most interesting.
June 23rd, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
Enamored with a lock and key to the heart. Most interesting.
June 23rd, 2025 16:30
In and out
RSM0812 said:
This is really well written. And an interesting theme. Well done.
June 17th, 2025 15:32
RSM0812 said:
This is really well written. And an interesting theme. Well done.
June 17th, 2025 15:32
In and out
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of someone being taken advantage of as and when suits, the sense of sadness at feeling to weak to stop it, nicely expressed and written
June 16th, 2025 11:14
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt write of someone being taken advantage of as and when suits, the sense of sadness at feeling to weak to stop it, nicely expressed and written
June 16th, 2025 11:14
In and out
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being taken advantage of and the sadness that goes with it. Well written
June 16th, 2025 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being taken advantage of and the sadness that goes with it. Well written
June 16th, 2025 10:31
Behind the mind
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem with good rhyme and flow the shine always comes from inside. Light the fire with your poems they are good enough to start the fire.
April 29th, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem with good rhyme and flow the shine always comes from inside. Light the fire with your poems they are good enough to start the fire.
April 29th, 2025 13:53
Sugardaddy
sorenbarrett said:
Everything is for sale it is merely a matter of settling on a price. A fun read that I enjoyed
April 24th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Everything is for sale it is merely a matter of settling on a price. A fun read that I enjoyed
April 24th, 2025 04:54
My imagination
Poetic Licence said:
That is a clever and enjoyable piece of writing, sometimes it\'s both, a trick played on mind
April 10th, 2025 07:08
Poetic Licence said:
That is a clever and enjoyable piece of writing, sometimes it\'s both, a trick played on mind
April 10th, 2025 07:08
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