The feeling of love
peto said:

Not read from you in years nicole
Glad to see you still going strong
2nd last verse is dynamite
Like a rap on it\'s own or a chorus
A fav for me
Great to see you

August 12th, 2023 08:15

The feeling of love
Bobby O said:

The excitement and the flutters that visited you is very likely authentic as your words jumped w truth about that initial tingle. So you have your part rehearsed and when and if matched w a validity of intention and feeling the unity resulting would excite. The flaw lies with him and there’s not always a method to identify partners that have half hearted approach. I feel ann optimism after the read cuz you stood up w honor and blessed emotion and I salute you for that. I leave you w simple but true words
“One bad apple don’t spoil the whole bunch” yiu are READY to flourish cuz you have the wonderment and splendor alive yiu just proved it. And I salute !!

August 11th, 2023 20:10

Ex youll always be the next
Simple-Man87 said:

This was very well done. Tons of emotion. It sounds like a valuable lesson has been learned, especially in the last lines.

Thank you for sharing.

November 7th, 2017 16:00

Him
mariposa said:

i love it

May 17th, 2017 19:31

have you ever?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for caring and sharing NICOLE and presenting us with some interesting questions and answers ~ love to hear more ! I\'ve doen stupid things ~ felt worthless and alone facing a hostile World ! BUT the TRUE LOVE of several LADIES (at different times !) has restored my SOUL and set my feet back on a ROCK. To me LOVE is as essential as the AIR I breath ! HUGS ~ BRIAN

March 30th, 2017 14:27

P-E-R-S-O-N-A-L-I-T-Y-S
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 13th, 2017 07:59

love
nicolerobinson said:



March 1st, 2017 10:44

Poetry poetry poetry
Tony36 said:

Awesomely written. Thank you for letting us read your wonderfully crafted poems

January 26th, 2017 09:33

Poetry poetry poetry
Shakerite said:

Super attempt.
Hope u out post some excerpts on here . Ps . Your not ugly never in a million years ☺

January 26th, 2017 05:39

Poetry poetry poetry
Michael Edwards said:

This is so touching Nicole - good on you and good luck with the book - it deserves to be a success.

January 26th, 2017 05:27

Urgg
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks NICOLE for another very revealing poem. I can empathise because I also know that TRUE LOVE never runs smooth ~ Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN

January 25th, 2017 14:56

Urgg
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

January 25th, 2017 09:25

Why?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks NICOLE ~ You are a very good poet and WE love you ! The content of some of your poems saddens me because a Class Girl from Barnsley YORKSHIRE ~ like you ~ should be valued and cherished for what are ~ PRECIOUS. Thanks for sharing ~ I hope you found it helpful to share ~ Love you BRIAN

January 24th, 2017 08:28

Why me?
Augustus said:

Great story with strong ending.

January 6th, 2017 12:28

Why me?
WriteBeLight said:

They woke the sleeping Lioness! Great message of survival...:)

January 6th, 2017 06:27