Comments received on poems by WildMoonChild
Just like a flower...
Goldfinch60 said:
But that flower will rise once more a the new season arrives.
June 18th, 2018 04:50
Goldfinch60 said:
But that flower will rise once more a the new season arrives.
June 18th, 2018 04:50
On the inside
Nicholas Browning said:
The world is filled with horrors. Personally, if I ever met someone who had done something like this I would do a lot more than punch him in the face. Splendid poetry, however dark.
March 28th, 2018 18:50
Nicholas Browning said:
The world is filled with horrors. Personally, if I ever met someone who had done something like this I would do a lot more than punch him in the face. Splendid poetry, however dark.
March 28th, 2018 18:50
Stay
elchupacabra said:
it\'s the experience that makes the poet... well done
January 5th, 2017 23:08
elchupacabra said:
it\'s the experience that makes the poet... well done
January 5th, 2017 23:08
Stay
SabreLi said:
Great job here in describing the devastation caused by loss of a long term partner, and raises some powerful questions. Is anybody really to blame? Whatever the circumstances, grief is always difficult to combat. Brilliant piece xx
December 22nd, 2016 15:38
SabreLi said:
Great job here in describing the devastation caused by loss of a long term partner, and raises some powerful questions. Is anybody really to blame? Whatever the circumstances, grief is always difficult to combat. Brilliant piece xx
December 22nd, 2016 15:38
Stay
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MOON CHILD ~ Please check my latest Poem & Fusion (12 days of CHRISTMAS) Thanks ~ Hugs BRIAN
December 22nd, 2016 06:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MOON CHILD ~ Please check my latest Poem & Fusion (12 days of CHRISTMAS) Thanks ~ Hugs BRIAN
December 22nd, 2016 06:20
Stay
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING WILD CHILD ! I have had several such experiences in my lifetime ~ a loving relationship can fade in a single day. I made me sad for what I had experienced ~ but also glad because I am wiser and stronger now in the ongoing experience of LOVE ! Hugs BRIAN
December 22nd, 2016 06:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING WILD CHILD ! I have had several such experiences in my lifetime ~ a loving relationship can fade in a single day. I made me sad for what I had experienced ~ but also glad because I am wiser and stronger now in the ongoing experience of LOVE ! Hugs BRIAN
December 22nd, 2016 06:13
Stay
WriteBeLight said:
Last line says it all. Very touching poem. Wonderful job.
December 22nd, 2016 05:01
WriteBeLight said:
Last line says it all. Very touching poem. Wonderful job.
December 22nd, 2016 05:01
My charmer
WriteBeLight said:
I wish you the very best. Very nice poem. He is lucky!
December 13th, 2016 05:59
WriteBeLight said:
I wish you the very best. Very nice poem. He is lucky!
December 13th, 2016 05:59
My charmer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU MOON CHILD ~ For a perfect Love Poem straight from your loving heart ! Yorkshire Girls are lovely and all the Men from Dublin ~ I know ~ are great characters ! You are a couple made in Heaven ~ as your poem illustrates ! God bless you both ~ Hugs BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
December 13th, 2016 05:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU MOON CHILD ~ For a perfect Love Poem straight from your loving heart ! Yorkshire Girls are lovely and all the Men from Dublin ~ I know ~ are great characters ! You are a couple made in Heaven ~ as your poem illustrates ! God bless you both ~ Hugs BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
December 13th, 2016 05:25
It\'s always been you
Augustus said:
Like a Fairy tale where all lived happily ever after. Well done.
November 9th, 2016 10:21
Augustus said:
Like a Fairy tale where all lived happily ever after. Well done.
November 9th, 2016 10:21
It\'s always been you
Christina8 said:
This is excellent! Enjoyed reading it. Loved the rhymes. And the ending.
November 9th, 2016 08:50
Christina8 said:
This is excellent! Enjoyed reading it. Loved the rhymes. And the ending.
November 9th, 2016 08:50
A child to sell
Augustus said:
Yes, the foster care system is a mess. Sometimes you wonder who are they supposed to be serving. Beautiful poetic description of a tragic situation. I love the way you got into the mind of the child to express her feelings.
November 8th, 2016 10:00
Augustus said:
Yes, the foster care system is a mess. Sometimes you wonder who are they supposed to be serving. Beautiful poetic description of a tragic situation. I love the way you got into the mind of the child to express her feelings.
November 8th, 2016 10:00
A child to sell
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you MOON CHILD for another perfectly penned poem. I am so pleased that experience was not yours you are much too precious. To dress such a painful scenario in such an elegant poem makes you an excellent poet. It softens the blow but heightens the pathos. I too know Children in similar circumstances and I have worked with the local YMCA in Child rescue and rehabilitation. It is never ever easy. Thanks for caring HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 8th, 2016 05:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you MOON CHILD for another perfectly penned poem. I am so pleased that experience was not yours you are much too precious. To dress such a painful scenario in such an elegant poem makes you an excellent poet. It softens the blow but heightens the pathos. I too know Children in similar circumstances and I have worked with the local YMCA in Child rescue and rehabilitation. It is never ever easy. Thanks for caring HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 8th, 2016 05:10
Blessed with beauty, Cursed with poison
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU MOON CHILD ~ for a very elegantly written fantasy poem. Without mentioning any names there are many Ladies just like that in History and alive today. Most of them when their Fame and Fortune runs out do end up \"FALLING ON A SWORD OF THEIR OWN MAKING.\" Awesome read thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN X
November 7th, 2016 14:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU MOON CHILD ~ for a very elegantly written fantasy poem. Without mentioning any names there are many Ladies just like that in History and alive today. Most of them when their Fame and Fortune runs out do end up \"FALLING ON A SWORD OF THEIR OWN MAKING.\" Awesome read thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN X
November 7th, 2016 14:25
Blessed with beauty, Cursed with poison
littlegoat23 said:
Powerful. Blown away
November 7th, 2016 10:28
littlegoat23 said:
Powerful. Blown away
November 7th, 2016 10:28
Blessed with beauty, Cursed with poison
Augustus said:
I love the rhyme and the transition from a sense of troubled mind to that of a real tragic figure.
November 7th, 2016 08:53
Augustus said:
I love the rhyme and the transition from a sense of troubled mind to that of a real tragic figure.
November 7th, 2016 08:53
Blessed with beauty, Cursed with poison
nicolerobinson said:
Actually a good peice ;) x
November 7th, 2016 04:30
nicolerobinson said:
Actually a good peice ;) x
November 7th, 2016 04:30
The day we met
ron parrish aka wordman said:
this is not what we`re meant to be,nor how we should be loved..
November 6th, 2016 21:12
ron parrish aka wordman said:
this is not what we`re meant to be,nor how we should be loved..
November 6th, 2016 21:12
The day we met
Christina8 said:
Very moving. Glad you got out of such an abusive relationship. Gripping story. LOVE the last line. But alot of us have that regret with someone....can\'t wait to see what you write next!
November 6th, 2016 20:47
Christina8 said:
Very moving. Glad you got out of such an abusive relationship. Gripping story. LOVE the last line. But alot of us have that regret with someone....can\'t wait to see what you write next!
November 6th, 2016 20:47
The day we met
littlegoat23 said:
So inspirational. (I actually cried) beautiful. I\'m at a loss for words but this is amazing, I had to comment.
November 6th, 2016 14:38
littlegoat23 said:
So inspirational. (I actually cried) beautiful. I\'m at a loss for words but this is amazing, I had to comment.
November 6th, 2016 14:38
The day we met
littlegoat23 said:
So inspirational. (I actually cried) beautiful. I\'m at a loss for words but this is amazing, I had to comment.
November 6th, 2016 14:38
littlegoat23 said:
So inspirational. (I actually cried) beautiful. I\'m at a loss for words but this is amazing, I had to comment.
November 6th, 2016 14:38
The day we met
Augustus said:
You did a fine job with the rhyme and meter. I\'m glad you got out alive. I hope this creep is in jail somewhere. Hugs.
November 6th, 2016 10:14
Augustus said:
You did a fine job with the rhyme and meter. I\'m glad you got out alive. I hope this creep is in jail somewhere. Hugs.
November 6th, 2016 10:14
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