Comments received on poems by WildMoonChild



Waiting for it to begin...
mystic flower said:

Very touching one I can already feel the pain. Thank you for sharing

May 20th, 2020 21:45

Waiting for it to begin...
Joe Dawson said:

Introduction, verse and sadly no refrain, emotions felt by many, known by many, written with a depth of feeling that touches on real life. A poignant write that will appeal forever. Joe

May 20th, 2020 05:03

Waiting for it to begin...
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotion laden write WMC.

May 20th, 2020 00:16

Look within
jenny.g said:

Powerful!

April 13th, 2020 17:37

A poem about me
Goldfinch60 said:

That never ending journey is giving you the experience in life that will make you stronger and take you to a place of wonder and joy.

July 21st, 2019 01:12

A poem about me
Christina8 said:

I feel your pain!! I have fibromyalgia and I had endometriosis really bad. Kudos to you for putting it all out there! Let me know if you ever wanna talk, I\'m a wealth of information!--Christina

July 20th, 2019 23:20

I am no where near ready to die.
dusk arising said:

You certainly can write from empathy.

June 17th, 2019 11:11

I will be..
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA Here : Thanks for sharing FRIEND : A very poewerful Poem. I love All the emotions you share :
The Storm - the Face - the Disease
The Tears - the Wine - the Trip
The Touch - the Spell - the Struggle
The Roller Coaster with its Drop & Dangle !
I\'ll be on you Mind - Your SUN & MOON - Unbearable
I\'ll strip you down - Steal you Humanity & DEMOLISH YOU !

As a WOMAN - MOON CHILD - I have these emotions too
and I can unleash them on a any MAN who plays with my
EMOTIONS for his GOOD or for his ILL !

To me this is a very POWERFUL POEM about GIRL POWER - AMEN

Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours through Poetry - ANGELA ๐Ÿงก

June 2nd, 2019 17:18

Perfect Picture
Neville said:

Truth & a naive innocence.. the perfect combination to commence a much larger bit o writing... well worth the read...... Neville

April 5th, 2019 03:51

Dear Suicide
Wolf2778 said:

I enjoyed it I will admit i have thoughts and entertain ideas as this but this make you kinda see the truth of it all I will admit

January 15th, 2019 21:58

My Body
ron parrish aka wordman said:

and i wish you a complete recovery,
touching write

December 6th, 2018 22:34

Watching from above
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

What you write is true. Yet, in some cases people are afraid to show emotion and when they experience the loss of a loved one, they exhibit feelings of guilt, rather than love.

Nicely written with images that coincide with the rhythm of the poem. :-)

November 15th, 2018 17:15

Watching from above
Unobtrusive Sun said:

I love it. It testifies to the reality of love vs want.
You\'ve spoken to me personally! Thanks!

October 10th, 2018 20:52

Watching from above
G84 said:

Awesome rhyming, a cousin was once killed and people who barely knew him did the same - frustrating to say the least.

Love your style of writing

October 10th, 2018 14:31

Dear Suicide
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Such a sad poem that speaks to truth in this current age.

What is the real reason people have given up hope? That\'s what we must find.

Nicely written!

September 27th, 2018 07:35

A stolen daughter
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Great poem, although it weighs so heavily on my heart. Your words penetrate the reader\'s soul.

You have to be strong, because she is weak.

Keep writing! We enjoy your words. :)

September 27th, 2018 07:32

A stolen daughter
dusk arising said:

This is so sad and must break your heart to write. It breaks mine to read your words.
The strength to be cruel to be kind is easier said than done.
Despite the awfulness of the situation there is love in your words and it shines out clearly.


September 12th, 2018 08:07

Dear Suicide
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Excellent poem!
P.S.
We had two friends that committed suicide each a year apart.
Both without warning signs.
Thank you for writing about this subject.

September 10th, 2018 18:55

Dear Suicide
ZIGGY said:

hi wow powerful words for sure it reads as if this is real hope its a theme nice to read your thoughts ,,,zigs

September 10th, 2018 15:27

Dear Suicide
Santita said:

This is powerful. A write laden with truths about what suicide does to its victim and the people the victim leaves behind.

I love how you addressed suicide directly, not just wrote about it - but directly to it.

Poignant and beautifully written and your rhyme and flow is perfect.

September 10th, 2018 12:18

My constant reminders
serenity-poetry said:

This was so powerful! Your a really talented writer:)

August 9th, 2018 18:21

Just like a flower...
Crystal Hope said:

So beautifully written. Terrific job! ๐ŸŒท๐Ÿต๏ธ๐ŸŒบ๐ŸŒป๐Ÿ’

August 9th, 2018 17:37

My constant reminders
Crystal Hope said:

Wow! Your emotion was so incredible. Good writing! ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ’ฎ๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒท

August 9th, 2018 17:36

Just like a flower...
Gabriella said:

I loved it!!! I love your write

June 18th, 2018 13:42

A child to sell
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

It would normally take a book to capture what you have here... bravo MC

June 18th, 2018 09:55

Just like a flower...
Unsub said:

WMC,

metaphorically sublime piece of poetry.

Unsub

June 18th, 2018 06:35

Just like a flower...
Goldfinch60 said:

But that flower will rise once more a the new season arrives.

June 18th, 2018 04:50

On the inside
Nicholas Browning said:

The world is filled with horrors. Personally, if I ever met someone who had done something like this I would do a lot more than punch him in the face. Splendid poetry, however dark.

March 28th, 2018 18:50

Last September
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 6th, 2017 15:06

A child to sell
willyweed said:

!

February 19th, 2017 17:32

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