Comments received on poems by WildMoonChild
The day we met
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Morning MOON CHILD thanks for sharing another sad episode from your past. It is very brave of you and I know you find it cathartic ! It scares me because I treat all my Ladies like ANGELS. Every Blessing ~ pleased you are nowHappy and Fulfilled in your life ! ~ HUGS BRIAN
November 6th, 2016 05:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Morning MOON CHILD thanks for sharing another sad episode from your past. It is very brave of you and I know you find it cathartic ! It scares me because I treat all my Ladies like ANGELS. Every Blessing ~ pleased you are nowHappy and Fulfilled in your life ! ~ HUGS BRIAN
November 6th, 2016 05:15
Letting go
JohnThomas said:
Another amazing work. You are extremely talented. The words and feelings just flow out of you. Great poetry my dear.
November 6th, 2016 01:48
JohnThomas said:
Another amazing work. You are extremely talented. The words and feelings just flow out of you. Great poetry my dear.
November 6th, 2016 01:48
The day we met
JohnThomas said:
Wow.. That is scary stuff. Your everyday horror. I hope this wasnt you who suffered like this.
Very moving stuff.
November 6th, 2016 01:15
JohnThomas said:
Wow.. That is scary stuff. Your everyday horror. I hope this wasnt you who suffered like this.
Very moving stuff.
November 6th, 2016 01:15
Late night smoke
elchupacabra said:
I feel like a lot of us have been there, it really makes it resonate.
November 6th, 2016 00:03
elchupacabra said:
I feel like a lot of us have been there, it really makes it resonate.
November 6th, 2016 00:03
Your love
JohnThomas said:
You know the secrect language of the heart. Its powerful highs and unforgiving lows. Stunning.
November 6th, 2016 00:02
JohnThomas said:
You know the secrect language of the heart. Its powerful highs and unforgiving lows. Stunning.
November 6th, 2016 00:02
Late night smoke
JohnThomas said:
Lovely. Absoluetly lovely. You have a gift for rhyming.
I could easily see the scene in my minds eye.
November 5th, 2016 23:48
JohnThomas said:
Lovely. Absoluetly lovely. You have a gift for rhyming.
I could easily see the scene in my minds eye.
November 5th, 2016 23:48
Letting go
littlegoat23 said:
Amazing, I loved this poem and the perspective it was able to give.
November 5th, 2016 22:41
littlegoat23 said:
Amazing, I loved this poem and the perspective it was able to give.
November 5th, 2016 22:41
Late night smoke
kevin browne said:
loving your freestyle writing. fit\'s together rather nicely. well done.
November 5th, 2016 17:06
kevin browne said:
loving your freestyle writing. fit\'s together rather nicely. well done.
November 5th, 2016 17:06
Letting go
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MOON CHILD ~ THANK YOU ! You continue to grace our site with poetry that is ~ Personal ~ Poignant ~ Profound and Perfect in its structure. You conceal your poetic prowess in \"prose form\" but when I read and recite it ~ it explodes with covert rhyme and rhythm so so powerful and moving it always makes me cry tears of emotion and sorrow for all you have suffered in the past ~ you are perfection. BULLYING is Satanic and can reduce a beautiful young lady like you to despair and excruciating self harm. As the blood flows it gives relief but only transient and the scars ~ inside and out ~ remain. You WERE the Joke ~ You WERE the Punchline ~ BUT ~ Praise GOD you have risen above all the pain the hurt and ridicule and become a Healer ~ a Nurse the highest calling ! Poetry is very cathartic and in this poem you have released and shared some of the pain you still bear. We all love you ~ keep caring ~ keep sharing HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 5th, 2016 05:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MOON CHILD ~ THANK YOU ! You continue to grace our site with poetry that is ~ Personal ~ Poignant ~ Profound and Perfect in its structure. You conceal your poetic prowess in \"prose form\" but when I read and recite it ~ it explodes with covert rhyme and rhythm so so powerful and moving it always makes me cry tears of emotion and sorrow for all you have suffered in the past ~ you are perfection. BULLYING is Satanic and can reduce a beautiful young lady like you to despair and excruciating self harm. As the blood flows it gives relief but only transient and the scars ~ inside and out ~ remain. You WERE the Joke ~ You WERE the Punchline ~ BUT ~ Praise GOD you have risen above all the pain the hurt and ridicule and become a Healer ~ a Nurse the highest calling ! Poetry is very cathartic and in this poem you have released and shared some of the pain you still bear. We all love you ~ keep caring ~ keep sharing HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 5th, 2016 05:54
Late night smoke
My Dark Nature said:
That was a great storytelling i loved every minute of reading it.
November 4th, 2016 21:26
My Dark Nature said:
That was a great storytelling i loved every minute of reading it.
November 4th, 2016 21:26
Late night smoke
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MOON CHILD ~ HELLO AGAIN ~ Thank you for another excellent poem about a release lots of people use. I\'e never smoked but those that dio tell me it is very soothing (body & mind)and i prepares them for the next task. Love your style ~ cryptic rhyme ~ encapsulated in flowing prose. It give the poignant message of your poem added urgency. We all have our own ways of coping and our aim is always SCOPE FOR NEW HOPE ! More please and I promise to comment ~ Yours BRIAN
November 4th, 2016 09:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI MOON CHILD ~ HELLO AGAIN ~ Thank you for another excellent poem about a release lots of people use. I\'e never smoked but those that dio tell me it is very soothing (body & mind)and i prepares them for the next task. Love your style ~ cryptic rhyme ~ encapsulated in flowing prose. It give the poignant message of your poem added urgency. We all have our own ways of coping and our aim is always SCOPE FOR NEW HOPE ! More please and I promise to comment ~ Yours BRIAN
November 4th, 2016 09:00
Late night smoke
Augustus said:
This is when\'ll crafted free verse that puts the reader right there with the speaker clearly as in a good novel. I too Like the analagy of the raindrop. But I would like to add in the first line that raindrops appear, they die. This may be a hidden wish of the speaker. One bit of unasked for advice, if indeed you are chain smoking please try to stop. It is extremely addicting and very difficult to stop. Soooooo much better for your health.
November 4th, 2016 08:25
Augustus said:
This is when\'ll crafted free verse that puts the reader right there with the speaker clearly as in a good novel. I too Like the analagy of the raindrop. But I would like to add in the first line that raindrops appear, they die. This may be a hidden wish of the speaker. One bit of unasked for advice, if indeed you are chain smoking please try to stop. It is extremely addicting and very difficult to stop. Soooooo much better for your health.
November 4th, 2016 08:25
Your love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MOON CHILD ~ Thank you for a very personal poem with excellent structure and content. The rhythm suits the subject and it is enhanced by your excellent use of \"rhyming couplets\". In my experience the bonds of MALE ~ FEMALE love are very very powerful and allow us to overlook its discrepancies. I can empathise with many of the points you make. As a MALE I do apologise that in a loving relationship we often (unwittingly ?) take more than we give and yet you love us even more ! I love all your metaphors ~ an awesome poem ~ Yours BRIAN
November 4th, 2016 07:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MOON CHILD ~ Thank you for a very personal poem with excellent structure and content. The rhythm suits the subject and it is enhanced by your excellent use of \"rhyming couplets\". In my experience the bonds of MALE ~ FEMALE love are very very powerful and allow us to overlook its discrepancies. I can empathise with many of the points you make. As a MALE I do apologise that in a loving relationship we often (unwittingly ?) take more than we give and yet you love us even more ! I love all your metaphors ~ an awesome poem ~ Yours BRIAN
November 4th, 2016 07:10
Late night smoke
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow great rhyming here and muse blending soulful thoughts with positivity. And so poetic how the poet imagines to be a raindrop. Keep writing coz u have talent . Thumbs up.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 4th, 2016 02:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow great rhyming here and muse blending soulful thoughts with positivity. And so poetic how the poet imagines to be a raindrop. Keep writing coz u have talent . Thumbs up.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
November 4th, 2016 02:59
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