Comments received on poems by TyKy
School.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TYKY ~ For a great poem lamenting the weirdness of SCHOOL. The key subjects for life are SCIENCE ~ MATH ~ ENGLISH and IT all the other things Music ~ Art ~ Dance ~ Football ~ Cookery ~ Love etc you learn growing up on the street. However they say your School Days are the happiest days of your life ~ so ENJOY and always be yourself ! HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 30th, 2016 02:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS TYKY ~ For a great poem lamenting the weirdness of SCHOOL. The key subjects for life are SCIENCE ~ MATH ~ ENGLISH and IT all the other things Music ~ Art ~ Dance ~ Football ~ Cookery ~ Love etc you learn growing up on the street. However they say your School Days are the happiest days of your life ~ so ENJOY and always be yourself ! HUGS ~ BRIAN
November 30th, 2016 02:48
School.
WriteBeLight said:
You are not weird. Your poem comes from your wonderful talent. Full of great rhyme!
November 29th, 2016 19:53
WriteBeLight said:
You are not weird. Your poem comes from your wonderful talent. Full of great rhyme!
November 29th, 2016 19:53
School.
Tony36 said:
I agree this would sound great with music. Great write
November 29th, 2016 19:29
Tony36 said:
I agree this would sound great with music. Great write
November 29th, 2016 19:29
School.
Augustus said:
No interest in art or music, yet your words and rhythm are extremely artistic and could easily be adapted to music.
November 29th, 2016 18:25
Augustus said:
No interest in art or music, yet your words and rhythm are extremely artistic and could easily be adapted to music.
November 29th, 2016 18:25
Twinkle, Twinkle
P.H.Rose said:
Really like this one.....
Well done !!!!!!!
November 21st, 2016 17:56
P.H.Rose said:
Really like this one.....
Well done !!!!!!!
November 21st, 2016 17:56
Twinkle, Twinkle
Augustus said:
Yup. It turned out to be a very good thing. Enjoyed.
November 21st, 2016 16:46
Augustus said:
Yup. It turned out to be a very good thing. Enjoyed.
November 21st, 2016 16:46
Writer\'s Block
P.H.Rose said:
I love this poem, my cup of tea as we English like to say, I\'m making it one of my favourites as I was trying to do something similar but couldn\'t nail it.... you have!!!!!
November 20th, 2016 18:04
P.H.Rose said:
I love this poem, my cup of tea as we English like to say, I\'m making it one of my favourites as I was trying to do something similar but couldn\'t nail it.... you have!!!!!
November 20th, 2016 18:04
Writer\'s Block
Christina8 said:
Brilliant poem. We all get writers block. and you have expressed it well in rhyme! Great job!
November 20th, 2016 16:02
Christina8 said:
Brilliant poem. We all get writers block. and you have expressed it well in rhyme! Great job!
November 20th, 2016 16:02
Writer\'s Block
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BRILLIANT TYKY ~ I love your attitude ! You so wanted toi share a poem ~ that you wrote a poem ~ explaining why you did not have one to share ! WRITERS BLOC ~ Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
November 20th, 2016 14:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BRILLIANT TYKY ~ I love your attitude ! You so wanted toi share a poem ~ that you wrote a poem ~ explaining why you did not have one to share ! WRITERS BLOC ~ Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
November 20th, 2016 14:58
Burning Embers
Augustus said:
Wow! You did that with an idea of your sister. That\'s hard to do.
November 19th, 2016 18:39
Augustus said:
Wow! You did that with an idea of your sister. That\'s hard to do.
November 19th, 2016 18:39
Burning Embers
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem. I love your rhyme scheme. I think the last stanza really pulled it all together. Great work!
November 19th, 2016 16:30
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem. I love your rhyme scheme. I think the last stanza really pulled it all together. Great work!
November 19th, 2016 16:30
Burning Embers
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL TYKY ~ You have a poets eyes and a poets mind. The title conjures up many images but the ones you have painted in words are perfect. I could smell the burning and see your Family album going up in smoke. Fire is no respecter of personal treasures. Love the rhyming pattern (aaax then bbbx etc). Also your poem has the rhythm of an uncontrolled fire ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN .
November 19th, 2016 05:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL TYKY ~ You have a poets eyes and a poets mind. The title conjures up many images but the ones you have painted in words are perfect. I could smell the burning and see your Family album going up in smoke. Fire is no respecter of personal treasures. Love the rhyming pattern (aaax then bbbx etc). Also your poem has the rhythm of an uncontrolled fire ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN .
November 19th, 2016 05:53
Younger
Elegant_Style said:
Well, I guess I have nothing to say because Brainsodes said it all, but I love your poem! It was amazing and your way with rhymes is incredible!! Keep writing :)
November 18th, 2016 18:17
Elegant_Style said:
Well, I guess I have nothing to say because Brainsodes said it all, but I love your poem! It was amazing and your way with rhymes is incredible!! Keep writing :)
November 18th, 2016 18:17
Younger
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TYKY ~ lOVE YOUR PICTURE ! Thanks for sharing your first poem it is awesome and I love the message that one so young can be nosta;lgic for the past ! I can give 20 years so I\'m even more nostalgic for my lost childhood and lost innocence ! I love the structure of your poem ~ rhyming couplets and humming with rhythm ~ excellent ! The last doublet is one we can all echo whatever our age ! \"Because the world looks so much better in the way back then ~ But those days are gon and it\'ll never be the smae again ~ AMEN\" Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 18th, 2016 14:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TYKY ~ lOVE YOUR PICTURE ! Thanks for sharing your first poem it is awesome and I love the message that one so young can be nosta;lgic for the past ! I can give 20 years so I\'m even more nostalgic for my lost childhood and lost innocence ! I love the structure of your poem ~ rhyming couplets and humming with rhythm ~ excellent ! The last doublet is one we can all echo whatever our age ! \"Because the world looks so much better in the way back then ~ But those days are gon and it\'ll never be the smae again ~ AMEN\" Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
November 18th, 2016 14:04
