Comments received on poems by Azura Nightsong
Drowning
Augustus said:
Very well done. Your message is clear and well written. Sorry you are hurting and can\'t find solace. Writing helps. Sometimes doing something kind for someone else helps.
November 21st, 2016 16:51
Augustus said:
Very well done. Your message is clear and well written. Sorry you are hurting and can\'t find solace. Writing helps. Sometimes doing something kind for someone else helps.
November 21st, 2016 16:51
Untitled-(Villanelle)
Augustus said:
We all wish for the world to be a better place. This is a terrific poem. And thanks for introducing the Villanelle. I never studied the art of poetry. I am glad you explained.
November 19th, 2016 11:33
Augustus said:
We all wish for the world to be a better place. This is a terrific poem. And thanks for introducing the Villanelle. I never studied the art of poetry. I am glad you explained.
November 19th, 2016 11:33
Regenerate
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! I know a person or two that are stuck in the \"imaginary worlds\" as you say. We all need to get out and experience the beautiful world we live in. Love the last stanza. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing!
November 18th, 2016 14:47
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! I know a person or two that are stuck in the \"imaginary worlds\" as you say. We all need to get out and experience the beautiful world we live in. Love the last stanza. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing!
November 18th, 2016 14:47
Regenerate
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANNA ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem. I once remember in a PHYSICS class the teacher was showing slides of a RAINBOW when there was a REAL ONE outside hidden behind the window blinds ! Many YOUNG PEOPLE today (I\'m 33) live in a virtual Worls and ignore (miss) the real World and real People all round them ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
November 18th, 2016 14:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANNA ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem. I once remember in a PHYSICS class the teacher was showing slides of a RAINBOW when there was a REAL ONE outside hidden behind the window blinds ! Many YOUNG PEOPLE today (I\'m 33) live in a virtual Worls and ignore (miss) the real World and real People all round them ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
November 18th, 2016 14:40
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