Comments received on poems by Azura Nightsong



Ugh, Feelings
onepauly said:

I like the part
the past will not repeat itself.
only memories in our minds
can keep us in touch.

May 1st, 2018 14:11

Ugh, Feelings
Christina8 said:

\"hoping the past will not repeat again\", I think a lot of us can relate to this feeling! I like that it ends on a happy note! Great poem!

May 1st, 2018 14:09

Childhood Hideaway
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AZURA for sharing such a beautiful memory in such a beautiful POEM ! Love the structure 5 balanced quatrains with a consistent Rhyme Pattern xaxa xbxb etc. This gives it great flow and makes it a delight to recite ! Love the subject of the POEM ~ As a CHILD I had a secret place in a TREE in the local woods ! Yours as always BRIAN !

April 30th, 2018 10:56

Childhood Hideaway
Anonamus said:

Love this, great poem.

April 30th, 2018 09:32

Glitter Glue
Edthepoet said:

What\'s wrong with using the same rhyme twice? (Said the lyricist). \"Why isn\'t adhesion valued more than art\" got me thinking...don\'t explain your work.

January 26th, 2018 22:05

Repeat Repeat
Writings From The Unknown13 said:

this has so much power to it

October 5th, 2017 07:06

Fleeting Essence
Candlewitch said:

good questions from an open mind! let me know if you ever learn the answers? so much to ponder...great work!

*hugs, Cat

September 21st, 2017 10:40

Tidal Wave
skyebellasario said:

this is beautiful


September 20th, 2017 13:20

Haunting Pain
skyebellasario said:

This is so descriptive, it\'s amazing!

September 18th, 2017 14:34

The Daydreamer
0ustpokenh3art said:

love it

September 11th, 2017 17:34

Sing
Egyptianqt79 said:

Beautiful

September 8th, 2017 12:36

Tale of Azuranna
Egyptianqt79 said:

Nice work

August 22nd, 2017 16:07

Mediocre
P.X. Vexxus said:

Reads like a song. A lot of repetition, but it works. Good write.

August 21st, 2017 07:44

Death\'s Embrace
Candlewitch said:

Wow!!!

deep garnet pools of blood at the bony clawed hands of Death...you have written him in as an entity!!! excellent!!!

*hugs, Cat

August 20th, 2017 09:47

Death\'s Embrace
Azura Nightsong said:

Thank you!

August 20th, 2017 09:33

Death\'s Embrace
malubotelho said:

Beautiful dark writing. Truly poetic words. Enjoyed reading very much.

August 20th, 2017 08:59

Fulfillment
Candlewitch said:

this reminds me of a saying of mine:

\"he who take middle of the road stance, gets run down by traffic going in both directions! \"

I hope that made sense!

*hugs, Cat

August 16th, 2017 11:46

Withdrawal\'s Lament
Candlewitch said:

dear Azura,

such passion and pain! these words run deep! you have an ageless soul! I am always amazed when reading your work!

*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy

August 14th, 2017 12:12

Withdrawal\'s Lament
Louis Gibbs said:

There\'s a theory that all wounds are self-inflicted, as part of learning what we came to learn. Addiction and it\'s aftermath would certainly fall into this category. Strong poem depicting the struggle, Azura!

August 14th, 2017 08:38

Delusions of Grandeur
Candlewitch said:

dear Azura,

that inner voice cannot rest until it has had its say... magnificent poem! I know just how you feel...its noisy in my head...

*hugs, Cat

August 13th, 2017 09:23

Stained Glass Wings
Sugiura Asuna said:

Amazing lines, and even better imagery!

August 12th, 2017 19:02

Love is
myself and me said:

The sour does start with sweet. Nice expression.

August 11th, 2017 22:55

Love is
Candlewitch said:

I like it very much as it is very true!

*hugs, Cat

August 11th, 2017 11:25

Creative State
Candlewitch said:

sometimes when I catch a glimpse of myself in the mirror, I am surprised... and I say, \"so... that\'s what I look like!!!\" too many drugs, for me, I guess.

*hugs, Cat

August 11th, 2017 10:58

Creative State
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Some days AZURA I too feel like my Mirror Image where L is R & R is L on worse days ~ I am my Mirror Image. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ love all the pictures your poems paint ~ infinite ~ Love you too ~ Yours BRIAN

August 10th, 2017 14:13

Creative State
Louis Gibbs said:

A stunning description of vision beyond this realm, this particular version of a reality! So well expressed in your poem, Azura. It\'s not an easy thing to deal with, is it. Congratulations!

August 10th, 2017 10:55

Creative State
orchidee said:

A fine write. Erm, I didn\'t get far looking in the mirror. It cracked when it saw me! doh! heehee.
But \'recreational drugs\', as you imply, are a no-no, I think. Could cause all sorts of troubles.

August 10th, 2017 08:35

Creative State
Nicholas Browning said:

Amen.

August 10th, 2017 07:06

Child of Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, the darkness of the day can have a very strong impact on us all.

August 10th, 2017 00:27

Child of Night
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

August 9th, 2017 14:37

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