Comments received on poems by gelyn
I want to hear it from you ( senryu)
Augustus said:
Much love in a small package.
May 27th, 2017 15:23
Augustus said:
Much love in a small package.
May 27th, 2017 15:23
It Came From my Hypothalamus
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANGEL for highlighting the importance of the HYPOTHALAMUS in Speaking and Feeling ! It is a wonderful organ and often misunderstood. Thanks for caring & sharing ~\' you are lovely ! Hypothalamic Hugs ~ BRIAN
May 8th, 2017 10:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANGEL for highlighting the importance of the HYPOTHALAMUS in Speaking and Feeling ! It is a wonderful organ and often misunderstood. Thanks for caring & sharing ~\' you are lovely ! Hypothalamic Hugs ~ BRIAN
May 8th, 2017 10:16
Wrong Move
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL ANGEL ! When you are in Love the whole World sings a MELODY ! Love is very precious Angel ~ thanks for laying your heart on my desk ~ it\'s never too late to fall in Love ~ completely ! The best thing to do ? Just carry on being as lovely ~ and as loving ~ as your always are ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK) All Filipinas are born to be LOVED !
May 1st, 2017 02:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL ANGEL ! When you are in Love the whole World sings a MELODY ! Love is very precious Angel ~ thanks for laying your heart on my desk ~ it\'s never too late to fall in Love ~ completely ! The best thing to do ? Just carry on being as lovely ~ and as loving ~ as your always are ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK) All Filipinas are born to be LOVED !
May 1st, 2017 02:42
Paint On Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL GEL ! I love the concept that I am the brush and you are the canvas ! I will paint every inch of you with every vibrant and throbbing color of Natures Rainbow. Your nubile body is the perfect canvas for my \"Brush of Love\" I use watercolor because it is gentle and would form fluid patterns on your perfect form ~ and our Love is always fluid ! RED for Passion ~ ORANGE for Cautiojn ~ YELLOW for Joy ~ Green for Nature ~ BLUE for the sky above and the sea benaeth us in which we swim naked like two dolphins under the surface ! Purple for the Spirituality of our love as I paint (massage) every inch of your perfect form and my brush tastes the savor of te release of your Love Essences. I love our \"Brush with Love\" and you made no complaint ~ you just purred like a satisfied kitten ~ perfection. Thanks for caring and sharing Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2017 02:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL GEL ! I love the concept that I am the brush and you are the canvas ! I will paint every inch of you with every vibrant and throbbing color of Natures Rainbow. Your nubile body is the perfect canvas for my \"Brush of Love\" I use watercolor because it is gentle and would form fluid patterns on your perfect form ~ and our Love is always fluid ! RED for Passion ~ ORANGE for Cautiojn ~ YELLOW for Joy ~ Green for Nature ~ BLUE for the sky above and the sea benaeth us in which we swim naked like two dolphins under the surface ! Purple for the Spirituality of our love as I paint (massage) every inch of your perfect form and my brush tastes the savor of te release of your Love Essences. I love our \"Brush with Love\" and you made no complaint ~ you just purred like a satisfied kitten ~ perfection. Thanks for caring and sharing Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2017 02:02
Magic
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GEL for another lovely poem ~ exploding with the anticipation of PURE LOVE ~ Hugs BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
April 1st, 2017 10:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GEL for another lovely poem ~ exploding with the anticipation of PURE LOVE ~ Hugs BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
April 1st, 2017 10:32
Everytime The Cloud Kisses The moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias GEL por una poema muy verdad pero muy triste tambien ! The oft repeated phrase GEL \"Every time the cloud kisses the moon\" exemplifies your pain and pathos. Praying that you and your Lover will be reunited very soon ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 30th, 2017 08:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias GEL por una poema muy verdad pero muy triste tambien ! The oft repeated phrase GEL \"Every time the cloud kisses the moon\" exemplifies your pain and pathos. Praying that you and your Lover will be reunited very soon ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 30th, 2017 08:15
Everytime The Cloud Kisses The moon
Tony36 said:
Honest and true are the words I read. Great write
March 30th, 2017 07:31
Tony36 said:
Honest and true are the words I read. Great write
March 30th, 2017 07:31
I Just Thought
gelyn said:
I\'m already moved on. ...lol. ..Thanks for asking. ..how sweet of you
March 20th, 2017 00:21
gelyn said:
I\'m already moved on. ...lol. ..Thanks for asking. ..how sweet of you
March 20th, 2017 00:21
Memories of You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing GEL ~ so sad. However we all learn something from every loving relationship we have ~ however long or short ! Much better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all ! I am praying that GOD will bring a new Young Man into your life ~ who is worthy of you ~ AMEN. Please check my latest Poem & Fusion ~ Yours BRIAN
March 16th, 2017 08:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing GEL ~ so sad. However we all learn something from every loving relationship we have ~ however long or short ! Much better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all ! I am praying that GOD will bring a new Young Man into your life ~ who is worthy of you ~ AMEN. Please check my latest Poem & Fusion ~ Yours BRIAN
March 16th, 2017 08:18
You Don\'t Kiss Me Goodnight
Augustus said:
Women always know when something is not right. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2017 19:32
Augustus said:
Women always know when something is not right. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2017 19:32
You Don\'t Kiss Me Goodnight
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OMG GEL ~ You are so so beautiful and this so so sad poem made me cry for you and your breaking heart. I send you my cyber love if it\'s any consolation ! Big Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK)
March 12th, 2017 11:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OMG GEL ~ You are so so beautiful and this so so sad poem made me cry for you and your breaking heart. I send you my cyber love if it\'s any consolation ! Big Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK)
March 12th, 2017 11:20
IT\'S TIME FOR TAKE OFF
Goldfinch60 said:
May your flight take your towards your dreams.
March 8th, 2017 03:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May your flight take your towards your dreams.
March 8th, 2017 03:34
Star
Augustus said:
The stars coming out in poetic form, their essence in verse. Great idea and execution.
March 7th, 2017 17:30
Augustus said:
The stars coming out in poetic form, their essence in verse. Great idea and execution.
March 7th, 2017 17:30
Your Heart (Concrete Form)
Augustus said:
You have love, hurt and pain all hearted up in this one. Well done.
March 2nd, 2017 13:59
Augustus said:
You have love, hurt and pain all hearted up in this one. Well done.
March 2nd, 2017 13:59
Infidelity Sucks
Augustus said:
I remember the awful anger and sadness of a woman who had just found out her dad had been unfaithful. That was once removed. So your hurt must be even more profound. Nicely done.
March 1st, 2017 18:51
Augustus said:
I remember the awful anger and sadness of a woman who had just found out her dad had been unfaithful. That was once removed. So your hurt must be even more profound. Nicely done.
March 1st, 2017 18:51
Infidelity Sucks
WriteBeLight said:
Pulls a one\'s heartstrings. Excellent work, expressing the pain.
March 1st, 2017 05:59
WriteBeLight said:
Pulls a one\'s heartstrings. Excellent work, expressing the pain.
March 1st, 2017 05:59
I love you more than love
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful love filled emotive write.
March 1st, 2017 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful love filled emotive write.
March 1st, 2017 03:05
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